The moment his boot made contact, the half-Echani winced in sympathy as he felt no resistance whatsoever. An odd keening wail escaped from under the now-scarred chromium helmet as the Chiss dropped his hammer.
As Strong began to collapse, he lashed out with a fist and struck the Odanite where his jaw would be. As the Chiss landed amongst the remnants of the stall and miscellaneous pieces of scattered jewelry, his hands clutched his sore groin. The son of House Garmis moaned and managed a few disparaging comments about his comrade in his native tongue.
Celevon had been seeing stars since the impact between what may as well have been a boulder and his helmet. It was fairly possible that he was hallucinating, but it sounded as though the Chiss’ voice was a higher pitch.
Unless the Mandalorian was mistaken, his visor had been damaged by the colossal blow. Not to mention the possible concussion.
He didn’t speak Cheunh at all. In fact, the War Councillor had rarely heard the language of the Chiss spoken. However, one need not be a linguist to note that the words were anything but complimentary.
“If you have ended the line of Garmis, you shall pay dearly,” Strong rasped in Basic.
It was not Celevon’s imagination, nor was it a hallucination; the booming bass was now more a strangled baritone. The half-Echani was ripped from his musings by a roar from the Chiss. Though... he couldn’t help but notice that the other man’s voice was back to normal.
“UNHAND MY POSSESSIONS, RUFFIANS!”
The Odanite could sense the hostile intent, both from Strong and those he had bellowed at. As he recalled a similar incident years earlier, he turned his focus inward and bathed himself in the healing energies of the Force.
If the duo were in the territory that Celevon remembered, he would need every advantage possible to aid the Arconan. By the sound of things, his comrade was pushing himself to his feet.
“See, I don’t think so.” A voice drawled, further from their position. “The merchants in this district give us a cut of their earnings for... protection.” Sycophantic chuckling followed this statement. “You destroyed two of their stalls in your little fight, big guy. That means you two are going to pay for it, eh?”
“‘Ey boss, I got ‘is pretty sh—AAAH!” The gangbanger screamed as a blade cut clean through his forearm in a glimmer, the shield and severed appendage landing on the duracrete.
The Erinos picked up the yellow-trimmed object, which now had an additional spray of crimson, and tossed it to Strong. As the Chiss caught it and removed the riot baton from his waist, Celevon pointed his alchemical sword at the first one who spoke, the blade glinting in an eerie manner due to the lack of natural light. “Perhaps my friend did not speak clearly enough. He said unhand his possessions.”
“I believe they do not find your joke particularly amusing, Master Edraven,” Garmis added in an aside as he stepped alongside the Mandalorian, activating his baton as he did so. “Perhaps they are slow to understand your meaning? Shall we teach them a lesson?”
The half-Echani sensed the wariness and tension rise within the gang members’ ranks the moment the Arconan stood beside him. In a split-second intuitive decision, he increased that fear with a minor illusion.
To their enemies, it appeared as though the eyes of both heavily armored figures glowed from within. Had their respective helmets been removed, it would have revealed identical smiles on the visages of each. A smile only prey recognized shortly before they became a predator’s meal.
That sense of fear lifted a notch as the Chiss stretched, tendons audibly popping above the buzz of his anti-riot baton. Despite his injuries, Strong appeared to be prepared to handle himself.
“Do let’s.”
As the final word passed through his lips, a warning screamed through the Force and Celevon heeded it. He pivoted in place, using the flat of his sword to deflect an emerald-tinged blaster bolt away from their position.
It looked more controlled than it actually was. It was only sheer luck that it had worked.
Behind him, Strong roared as he gave a wide swing of his charged baton, sending the gangster who had grabbed the power hammer flying into a wall.
The Erinos dashed forward, a swipe of his alchemically-treated sword sent the blaster skittering across the duracrete. He followed that with a twist of his wrist, slashing in the opposite direction. Without waiting to watch the decapitated head roll off the shoulders, the War Councillor moved onto the next.
An almost careless bash of his shield intercepted a more foolish one. It was at this point that the Chiss realized the others had fled. His comrade had the tip of the sword a hair from the leader’s throat.
“Master Edraven, his blood is not worthy of coating your blade!”
Although Celevon did not change his position in the slightest, Strong saw the relaxation of his shoulders. It was as though a coil had released its tension.
The Odanite gave a theatrical twirl of the sword before it was returned to the sheath on his back, the amethyst leather hilt still visible. “You should run before I change my mind.”
Garmis bit back a chuckle as the gangbanger nearly tripped in his haste to flee the wrath of the duo. “Until next time, comrade?”
“Indeed. Perhaps a more... honorable duel?”
A snort of amusement escaped the chrome helmet. “Expect more than a punch in the face if you EVER pull a cheap shot like that again!”
Celevon winced in remembrance of both of the actions the Arconan spoke of. The strain of their brawl and subsequent response to the small gang had started to make itself known. “I suppose I did deserve that.”
“That you did. Fare thee well.”
Positive Takeaways
First off, this was very polished as far as Syntax goes, which is always nice to see.
Full-contact tag is an interesting way to get an acceptable level of violence going between two friends. Is it the best set-up I’ve ever seen you do? No, but it’s one that reflects the characters and their relationship.
Was that a pun?
Can Be Improved
You use “Mandoa” to mean a Mandalorian person a few times, but I can’t find a canon example of this usage. In Basic, it’s “Mandalorian” or perhaps “Mando,” and in Mando’a it should be “Mando” or “Mando’ad.” That said, it’s a pretty good sign when your Syntax issues are in a fictional language.