The closeness of Satsi’s weapon would have given a normal man no time to act, but the Force had already screamed a warning at Andrelious, whose hastily reactivated lightsaber was swinging through the air to intercept the inbound slugs.
The female cursed, but there was no time to pause. Andrelious was gunning for her even before he’d discovered exactly who she was, and now her intent to hurt his beloved family was out in the open. Satsi would suffer if the Taldryanite managed to gain the upper hand, but the female was not about to give him a chance to take control of the conflict.
The former Shadow Lord prepared to fire off another salvo, but she was knocked off balance as Andrelious focused the Force into an invisible battering ram. Satsi had planted her feet well enough to avoid falling, but the move gave her opponent a little time to try something else.
The Seeker directed another burst of lightning straight at the stumbling Arconan, but Satsi was already on the move, seemingly desperate to get back to her ship and away from the fuming Andrelious. As she started to sprint away, she turned and fired her slugthrower, keeping the Taldryanite busily fending slugs off rather than trying new ways to harm the female.
Satsi allowed herself a brief smile as she finally spotted the small clearing where she’d landed her ship. Her would-be killer was still giving chase, but she’d managed to place enough daylight between the two of them to comfortably reach the Blood.
Sensing that he was once again closing in on his prey, Andrelious spotted the jet black freighter and listened carefully for the telltale sound of repulsorlifts. He didn’t know Satsi well enough to rule out her attempting to escape, or even run him over with her ship, but as he approached, he spotted her pacing about as if waiting for him. She almost appeared to be discussing something with somebody, but the Sith could only sense one being.
This game’s about to end!
Andrelious wasn’t the kind to approach with stealth. He was too heavy on his feet and lacked the calmness. He was all about finishing a job as quickly and effectively as possible. As he neared Satsi, he realised that she had been talking to an old Imperial KX-Droid.
“And just what is that antique going to do to me?” the Sith taunted.
“It’s from yer Empire. Why don’t yer tell me?” Satsi answered calmly, throwing a small metal cylinder towards Andrelious’ feet. The device immediately started to emit its contents, throwing the Sith into a brief panic. He backpedalled from the smoking grenade, only to find himself in the path of Satsi’s onrushing droid.
Andrelious, though unable to sense the droid in the Force, spotted the Sith dagger, identical to his own, in one of the droid’s hands.
“So predictable,” the Sith admonished, his lightsaber raised to block the incoming dagger. The droid paused, appearing to need a moment to consider the situation, but Andrelious was already countering. His scarlet blade sliced through the knees of the droid, rendering it useless.
“Ah just needed a distraction,” Satsi announced.
Andrelious craned his neck towards the female. He’d been expecting her to flee, but she was instead aiming the business end of a rocket launcher straight for him. Without hesitation, Satsi fired, but the Taldryanite, quickly realising that the payload was designed to deal with slow moving armour columns, stepped aside. The rocket, continuing on its straight, unaided trajectory, slammed into a nearby tree.
“Did you really think that would work?” Andrelious questioned mockingly.
“Mighta got lucky. Yer are pretty slow,” Satsi responded.
“I’m going to end this. And then, I’m going for your brother,” the Seeker stated.
The woman started to reach for something on her lower back.
One final surprise!
Andrelious closed in, expecting to be able to easily best the seemingly unarmed Arconan with his lightsaber. To his amazement, his attack was blocked by another lightsaber blade.
“Weren’t expectin’ that one were yer?” the female teased.
Andrelious didn’t answer. Fatigue was starting to set in. He wanted the encounter to end soon, but Satsi, still seemingly full of energy, was never going to make anything easy. Even without the Force she seemed fully capable with a lightsaber, her extra speed and strength giving the Taldryanite a very serious test of his bladesmanship.
As he prepared to block Satsi’s latest attack, Andrelious heard the Force screaming a warning. Sure enough, the Arconan performed a feint at the last moment, but Mimosa-Inahj was ready. He dropped to his knees, watching as his enemy’s blade sliced harmlessly through the air. As Satsi was carried forward by her momentum, Andrelious dropped his lightsaber and blasted her with just enough lightning to stun her.
Satsi slumped to the ground, her back scorched from the Sith’s attack.
Andrelious climbed back to his feet, panting heavily as he retrieved his temporarily discarded lightsaber.
“I’m sure your information about me includes exactly how I use my other lightsaber. But you won’t be seeing that today. That is for those who deserve a quick death. You threatened my family. You don’t get that luxury,” the Sith explained, drawing his dagger.
“And you’ll also know that I save this for special occasions,” Andrelious continued, slowly walking towards his fallen enemy.
Gripping his dagger tightly in his right hand, the Quaestor moved to stab Satsi through the back of her neck, his intent to sever her windpipe. As he moved his arm back, the female rolled onto her back, firing her slugthrower even as she winced with pain. Unable to block the slug, Andrelious felt a hot, searing sensation burrow its way through his chest. Then everything went black.
“Yer safe, brother,” Satsi panted, managing a smile at her latest kill.
But this isn’t over...
What Went Well
While not perfect, your posts were both very clean and easy to read from a Syntax standpoint.
This is an interesting premise, and while it’s a novelty for me to see a match kicked off by someone’s concern for a parent, I think it works more effectively for these two characters in particular that it would for most. Satsi and Andrelious are perhaps the two most family-driven characters in the Brotherhood. They’re also both people who’ve had trouble getting away from the scars of their past. Now we get to see those things come to a head.
Food for Thought
Depending on the context, using multiple semicolons in a list may be acceptable. However, when using them to join independent clauses, you should limit yourself to one per sentence.
You took your time ramping up to the violence, but in the end, there was very little combat here.