A bright flash heralded another thunderous roar, causing Atra's eyes to narrow protectively. That fact didn't go unnoticed by Lucine.
"I know I look good, darling, but one should take care not to stare," the woman cooed.
Still, time wasn't a commodity the Arconan could afford to let slip through her fingers, finite as it was. While she would be disinclined to call it retreating, Lucine took careful steps away from her guest as her copper-tone curls lightly swayed. "Expected or not," she continued, "it seems the holocron is in your care. Let's call it a gift shall we? A downpayment, even."
At that, Atra's eyebrows arched in a look of sheer incredulity. The Umbaran rose to his full height as he examined the box, rotating it casually with one hand. His search for knowledge had brought him there after all, but something didn't sit right. His black-gold gaze roamed the reflective contours of the case before glancing towards Lucine. "So," he began. The one word served to dismiss Vasano entirely. "Help me understand..."
Lucine's lips formed a tight line. It was a small crack within her carefully crafted mask betraying her concern. Could he have guessed... she thought. Suddenly, Lucine felt a pressure closing in around her. Unseen, ethereal tendrils grasped the woman and began pulling her back towards Atra. She grit her teeth and planted her feet. Almost instinctively, just as she began to feel herself slipping, Lucine reached out and dug her fingers into the dirt and stone beneath her. The act had kept her from succumbing entirely, but it also came at the price of pain.
"Get over here," Atra commanded. His free hand rose in a beckoning grasp and his brow furrowed in concentration.
Lucine seethed as dirt turned to mud as it mingled with her slowly dripping blood. Already, she could feel her purchase fleeting alongside her strength. It was then that the Arconan made a decision that meant all the difference. She gave in, letting go but taking her WESTAR-34 into hand instead. While the sound itself was muted for a blaster, the glowing bolts announced their presence well enough as Lucine squeezed the trigger while midair.
Then she was free...and falling.
The Umbaran had no choice but to react to the immediate threat. He breathed out and let his power fall away, opting to spin aside while dropping his supposed prize. Sparks singed the plants behind him as the streaking plasma just missed Atra's swirling robes. His first instinct was to lash out and, sometimes, it was best to just go with it. So he did. Ventus' left arm swept out and his crimson saber followed from its perch upon his thigh. The weapon lashed out with blade ignited, cleaving through the air only to leave a scorching streak where Lucine had just been.
Her desperate roll continued, the Force still hissing whispers of warning within her awareness. A second strike glanced across her armorweave cloak as it coiled around her, hissing angrily but leaving her unharmed. That fact didn't assuage her, but Lucine was thankful to be in one piece regardless.
The steady thrumming of the blades disappeared just as the Arconan came to rest behind a fallen pillar. Lucine's emerald eyes moved up the pillar towards the mezzanine above her, weighing her options as she holstered her pistol. It wasn't exactly her favored exit route, but it had certainly been on the list.
"Someone like you—"
Lucine's prior trepidation came back, threatening to expose itself as Atra's voice was accompanied by his hand grasping the edge of the pillar just as he came into view.
"—wouldn't give up the prize," Ventus concluded.
Another flash made the woman's skin even more pale beneath the darkening purple haze above them. Lucine stretched her spine just so and leaned into what was almost a model's pose while offering Atra her most sincere demure expression. "One must know their limits, darling."
Another arched brow answered her.
"You've made your point. Now, wouldn't you much prefer to just walk away?" Lucine asked with a slight wave of her hand. Unlike her first suggestion, this time she poured even more of her concentration into the mental push.
Atra swayed, once more having to steel himself against the oh-so-tempting instructions. He blinked several times and then tilted his head to the side, sighing. "Again?"
Lucine shrugged and relaxed her pose. "Old habits, dear." She paused to brush her ringlets free from the perspiration beading upon her brow. Just then, as she seemed at her most harmless, Vasano lashed out. Her open palm sought a precise strike towards his knee joint before another went for every man's most treasured asset.
The Elder steeled himself almost instinctively. The Force permeated his being and rejected the possibility of bringing him to the ground, but it did nothing for the pain. There was very little that could be done against such a sudden shock.
"Seems you're a man after all," Lucine chortled.
The woman clambered up the pillar and onto the mezzanine. Already she was growing tired, but Lucine felt that everything was working in her favor despite her miscalculations. With luck, Knil's little errand would soon be complete and Lucine...well, she would be back in her ship and preferably alive.
Before she could get too far, a sudden blur crossed her vision and Lucine stopped up short. The triangular holocron struck the statue just past her and shattered. As its remnants fell apart, so too did her hopes.
Atra shifted uncomfortably in the chamber below, but his glare spoke volumes. "Your delivery boy has the real artifact," he declared, watching her carefully for a reaction she fought not to give. Then he raised his comlink to his lips. "Adalinde."
"My pleasure," came the aristocratic reply over the device.
The wind chose that moment to pick up, bringing with it a curtain of heavy rain that struck the ground with a cacophony that threatened to deafen them.
Arch's Thoughts
Very little to criticize here, aside from the accidentally copied header at the beginning. With a word cap in effect, you didn't have a lot of words to spare on setting the scene, so I was happy to see you make beautiful use of what you had. Likewise, it's a tough balance to strike when you introduce an NPC like Knil into a match, but I think you nailed it. The focus of this match is right where it should be: Lucine against Atra. Knil provides a goal and some background for the conflict and then gets out of the way, which is enough screen time to make this match more interesting but not enough to leave me wondering where Atra was the whole time.
Wally's Thoughts
Agree with Arch. Very good set up with not just jumping into Combat but not putting it off too long. It’s a hard balance to strike, but this is a really good example of how to do an intro post for a standard 2/2 match with a word cap.