Sera cursed under her breath, crimson blood glinting in the soft glow of the cave as it dripped from her dagger, running in thin rivulets down Karran’s thigh. She hadn’t meant to cut that deep, but in the moment, she’d just… lost control. As they often did, her emotions had gotten the better of her. Now, the enjoyment that she had felt in the good fight was gone. Karran was a part of the test, a measure of her self control, if she was correct. More importantly, he was her friend; friends didn’t hurt friends. She had to be better. Not that the blasted katkattin was making it easy, trying to take her head off with his stupid bloody glowstick, choking her out like a Wookie playing smashball. Meatheaded idiot.
”I think we've had enough, Karran”
“No! Fight, you runt. Show me you're worthy... or run back home, and never come back.”
The older, larger Zabrak growled, his face tensing in concentration, bending The Force to his will as he advanced slowly forward, the energy coursing through him forcing his body to ignore the pain of walking, for the moment, at least. His chosen form was an offensive one; it left no time and little spare energy to concentrate on healing. Just enough to grant a reprieve from the pain, while he humbled the young whelp before him. He lost control without even thinking of it; just a moment of anger, and suddenly it consumed him, building like a hurricane within. With a snarl, he gripped his saber tightly in hand and advanced.
Sera did not give him time to close the gap slowly, even if it would have exacerbated the wound; that wasn’t her way. Instead, she bounded forward to meet him head on. The tactic had worked earlier; if she could just get inside of his guard…
A lightning-fast flash of the saber nearly cut her legs out from under her at the shins, only barely avoided with a desperate jump upwards. Even as she came down and pushed into his guard, Karran didn’t relent. Cutting off another sliver of his mind and bending it to the Force, he swelled his muscles with power, sweeping from the side with his elbow, cracking it into Sera’s crown. The smaller female gasped, stumbling away, her vision blurred. Karran, for his part, was bleeding steadily from two wounds now. His elbow had caught one of her horns, gouging deeply into the flesh, but he hadn’t noticed, his pain receptors dulled as they were.
Sera took a step back, gathering her breath. This wasn’t working; dashing in as she was, attempting hit and run strikes, she was only wearing herself out as Karran advanced steadily and aggressively further. The wounds that she dealt out meant nothing when he shrug them off, his mind blunted by The Force, addled by his own growing rage, and the pain dulled by his thick Zabraki skull. His eyes had turned an ugly, sickly yellow; what did that even mean? She needed to finish this stupid Rite, before Karran cut her in twain, and before he bled to death without even realizing it.
She wasn’t going to give up; not now, not ever. All she needed was… a little change in tactics.
Grinding her teeth as she was forced backwards, Sera reached out with her mind, forcing through the ringing pain of her head-wound. Even as she grew closer, step by step, to a chasm yawning behind her, the Zabrak forced out a steadying breath, and gently probed at Karran’s psyche.
The first touch almost made her recoil; he was spitting mad, his thoughts and actions consumed with an anger that seemed impenetrable, a swirling, cyclonic sandstorm of emotion. It was completely unlike anything that she had felt from him before. But, even still, sweat beading down her brow at the effort, she pushed inward. It was difficult, and as novice as she was, Sera couldn’t pick up much more than the simplest emotions. With every second that ticked by, Karran’s sweeping strokes grew closer, the red of the saber shining against the perspiration on her body. She could barely muster enough concentration to dodge, growing closer and closer to the gap behind her, only inches separating her from a slip that she would never recover from, a fall that would leave her as just another shattered piece of Illum’s history. Only feet now.
And then, she found it, hovering just underneath the anger. Guilt. Regret. This wasn’t what Karran had wanted, she realized; he’d simply lost control, much as she had. She could get through to him. Grimacing, she bent the whole of her mind onto it, even as he brought his saber forward, missing by mere centimeters. Too close; and her next step backwards further sealed her fate, a slurry of frost and dust kicking over the edge of the chasm. There was nowhere to go. Nowhere to run. Sera’s blue eyes, still remarkably clear of fear, squeezed shut.. Karran brought his saber up, double-handed grip tightening for the blow. There was a hiss as the blood-red blade descended towards Sera’s neck.
And stopped, an inch from her flesh.
”Do you hear me, Karran?”
The male Zabrak’s face froze, eyes locking onto Sera’s. They were still lidded; she was trembling from the effort of the words, spoken directly into the vault of Karran’s mind, piercing the cloud of anger like a ray of Iridonian sunlight. Gently, his own eyes closed.
”You’re better than this. Stronger. You’ve done enough, my friend. Just let it go.”
Black gloved fingers twitched on the saber’s hilt, relaxing from their death grip. His eyes blinked open. Back to their normal shade. Then, they widened in sudden shock, a gasp breaking his lips.
Sera had kicked him in the groin. Hard. . Very hard. Face purpling, he staggered backwards, the combination of shock and sudden pain shattering his concentration. A wave of exhaustion slammed into him at the same time as Sera’s subsequent spinning kick, which caught him directly in the side of the head.
Like a sack of oh so many bricks, Karran crumpled to the floor, groaning as his lightsaber slid from limp fingers. Sera caught it with the toe of her boot before it rolled over the edge, kicking the blasted thing away. Then, she knelt down by her friend’s side, gently patting him on the back as he writhed. When she spoke, she did it gently, abandoning formal tone for a softer, slightly less guttural dialect. The kind used among friends… and family.
”Y'know, I think I see the point now. The Rite... it's not just a challenge, something to see if I can fight, is it? Tali could have done that. Any old bot could have done that."
Carefully, she used one of her throwing knives to cut a strip from Karran’s robes, gently binding the wound on his thigh. As she did the same for the gouge on his elbow, she picked up speaking where she had left off.
"It was a test. To see if I could fight a friend. To see if I could let go. Kind of a harsh move on Tali's part."
On the ground, Karran nodded his head slightly, wincing as Sera cinched the bandage at his elbow. She stood up silently, gathering herself.
"I hope this answers that question. I will fight, Karran. I won't give in, especially if you pull an idiot move like that again. But, I won't forget friendship, either. I won't ruin what I have. Too precious."
The Zabrak turned on her heel, peering into the deeper interior of the cave. She could see a shine back there, somewhere; a golden glint that caught her eye. Slowly, she began to pace towards it, away from Karran. As an afterthought, she shot one last statement over her shoulder.
"If you need an icepack, friend, there's plenty of snow. I'm gonna go make a damned lightsaber."
What Went Well
This is one of those things that I feel like should be cliche, but in fact it’s quite rare to see anyone dive into the ACC before knighthood and this might be the first match I’ve seen where a padawan/apprentice-type fought on Ilum as part of constructing their first lightsaber.
This also doesn’t feel like a first-ever ACC post. I don’t know if you’ve been reading my reports, or you have excellent tutors, or if you’re just inherently awesome, but you delivered all the ingredients required to start a match off on the right foot. I finished this with a sense of who these two characters were to one another and why they were fighting, and I got enough action to carry me into the middle post.
Room for Growth
While your syntax was generally strong, there were two minor issues, one of which was repeated throughout both posts. The F in Force is capitalized, but the article in front of it shouldn’t be, i.e. “the Force” not “The Force.” The other is simply that in published Stars Wars works, including UK/Commonwealth localizations, it’s always “lightsaber” and not “lightsabre.” As mentioned, these are minor issues that didn’t detract much from your overall post.
The way you handled the Zabraki isn’t a problem, but personally I think it was wise of you to drop it in the second post once the idea was established. I’m highlighting it here because, while this doesn’t matter for a casual match, our events frequently include word caps and you’d want to avoid spending them on conlanging.