This was a stupid idea, Erinyes thought, swirling her drink around in its glass. The Zeltron had parked herself on a stool in an “outdoor restaurant”—a glorified shack, really—after a less-than-enjoyable meeting with an arms dealer. She’d gotten the information she wanted on the Collective’s clandestine weapon shipments, yes, but she had a feeling she’d paid far more than it was worth. Rian can send someone else next time, she decided.
The rest of her drink later, Erinyes heard footsteps behind her, as though whoever approached wasn’t even trying to conceal their presence—not that it would’ve helped much if he had, she noted, when she turned and saw the stocky Sullustan male. “Can I help you?”
“I suspect so, Proconsul Ténama.” The Sullustan plopped on to the stool beside Erinyes, either oblivious or indifferent to the Zeltron’s groan. “Dek Iron’yikut of Scholae Palatinae. My contacts suggest you have access to certain information that I would be very interested to learn,” he said.
Erinyes rolled her eyes and waved to the bartender for a refill. “I’m sure you would.” The tsiraki hadn’t even gotten her buzzed yet—damn second liver—and if this Dek Iron’whatshisface had chased her all the way to Nar Shaddaa just to ask her a question, she reasoned, he probably wouldn’t be put off by her getting up and walking away.
“The so-called ‘Selen Incident’ of 19 ABY,” Dek continued. “The details of your Clan’s confrontation with Arcona were lost sometime in the intervening years.”
Erinyes raised a skeptical eyebrow. “Why in Krath’s name would anyone care about that?”
“Every engagement holds lessons for the strategist who’s capable of appreciating them,” the Sullustan said, shaking his finger for emphasis. “You might not value them in the same way, but they should be recorded for posterity nonetheless.”
“Uh huh.” The Adept slipped a credit ingot to the Ortolan bartender in exchange for her fresh tumbler of tsiraki. “It wasn’t much of an engagement. Our fleet travelled to their home system, their fleet met us in orbit around Selen, we gave each other stink-eye for a while, then dropped the whole thing when Grand Master Cotelin’s clone showed up and gave us all bigger problems. Any more details than that would be giving away classified information.”
Silence fell between the two Dark Jedi as Dek seemed to consider his next move, while the Adept resolutely focused on her drink. A few beats later, Dek leaned closer to Erinyes and dropped his voice a few decibels, as he stared a hole in the Adept. “You will tell me everything you know about the Selen Incident,” he insisted.
Erinyes hesitated for a moment, then decided that withholding the story of a non-battle two decades past wasn’t worth the effort it would take to make the Palatine pest leave her alone. “That really is all there was to the engagement. Not a very exciting ending, to something that started with–” The Adept cut herself off with a start when she realised what the pressure in her mind had been: not her usual impulsiveness, but a nudge from the Sullustan intended to make her share information against her will.
A dozen different shades and flavours of anger exploded in Erinyes’ chest. One of her lightsabers, Glamour, came to her hand unbidden, and she almost unconsciously channelled the Dark Side into her swing as the Sith weapon ignited with its characteristic snap-hiss. To his credit, Dek must have either seen or sensed the attack coming; his own green blade sprang to life a heartbeat after Erinyes’ did, angled upward as he swept sideways to deflect the blow with a duelist’s horizontal parry. Unfortunately, the Adept was simply too fast for Dek to get his blade into the proper position to blunt the attack with technique alone, and the Sullustan had never sullied himself the knowledge of how to augment his own speed or strength. Erinyes had, and thanks to applying that knowledge, her lightsaber slammed into Dek’s with much more force than her frame implied she could muster. The Sullustan, unable to regain his balance by taking a step while his rear end was planted on a bar stool, tumbled backwards and into the street, the jade-green blade of his lightsaber disappearing with a whoosh as the weapon landed on the ground beside him.
“You miserable lava rat!” Erinyes snarled as she leapt to her feet and rounded on Dek, her Core Worlder accent suddenly thick and recognisably Tapani. “You thought you could get away with rummaging about in my head?” She stalked toward the Sullustan as he tried to scramble away from her. When the crowds that filled the concourse outside the pub realised the danger, they wisely followed suit.
“You wouldn’t have done the same in my place?” Dek’s voice was steady with self-righteousness as he began his lecture with his chin held high. His movements were shaky, though, and to Erinyes’ eye, he didn’t seem particularly well-coordinated as he hauled himself to a stand.
Erinyes scoffed. “No, because I’m not a bloody idiot. Go on, pick it up. You can at least entertain me whilst I decide whether to kill you.” She gestured to Dek’s lightsaber with her own.
Dek tilted his head to one side as he stooped to retrieve his weapon. “Interesting. Despite the clear dominance of Core Worlds culture in the Human power centres of the galaxy, you dissociate yourself from it by hiding your accent. I wonder if you would’ve done the same under the Empire.” The Sullustan straightened up and re-ignited his lightsaber with a flourish—the classic “Makashi salute”—then assumed his combat stance.
That was all the invitation Erinyes needed to begin her assault. The Force-granted boost to her strength had faded during her banter with Dek, and the Adept didn’t bother to renew it. Instead, she began probing her opponent’s defences with light but rapid two-handed strikes. Dek met each of Erinyes’ whirling blows with a raised or lowered arm and a deft flick of his wrist, but offered only enough ripostes of his own to keep his opponent at bay. The Sullustan’s form was excellent, Erinyes noted, and he possessed enough insight to avoid falling for her attempts to feint past his guard, but his execution seemed to perpetually lag behind. Parries that should’ve been effortless counters were reduced to “effective but awkward” by coming a half-beat too slow.
After seeing how he fought, Erinyes suspected she could overwhelm Dek’s defences through speed alone—except for the crowd of onlookers that had gathered around the duel, some of whom displayed a heinous lack of survival instincts by standing barely a step out of lightsaber range. Speed only mattered if she had enough space to use it, the Adept knew, and the crowd was pressed in so close that she’d practically have to body-check them aside to maneuver properly. To make matters worse, she already felt her heart pounding and sweat beading on her brow from the exertion, while the Sullustan wasn’t even breathing heavily.
Judging by his reluctance to take the offensive, it seemed to Erinyes that Dek had realised the same thing she had: if he could outlast her, he’d win the battle, and could coerce her into giving up the information he wanted. She also suspected that Dek’s obvious preoccupation with tactics and strategy had led him to choose Nar Shaddaa as the place he’d approach her, specifically because the “terrain”—such as it was—would be in his favour. None of that really mattered now, though; the important part was that it was time for Erinyes to change tactics.
“You’re rather proud of being a walking databank, aren’t you?” The Adept switched to a one-handed grip on her lightsaber, fingers low on the hilt to give her a little bit of extra reach that would help counter Dek’s fighting style, and tossed a few lackadaisical strikes at the Sullustan to keep him on the defensive. “Have you ever wondered how you’d handle it if you were to lose all that knowledge?”
“That would never happen. Even if I die, my notes and records will be preserved,” Dek said, with the same self-righteous confidence as before.
Erinyes raised her eyebrows. “Are you saying you’ve written down everything you’ll ever want to remember? Because a solid thump to the head can do nasty things to one’s memory. Spending the rest of your life thinking about all the things you used to know and never got around to recording seems a dreadful fate for someone who values knowledge so dearly.” Dun Möch, the venerable Sith practice of talking kark until the opponent loses their nerve, was one of the Adept’s favourite techniques.
“I’d be a lot more worried about that if any of your attacks had landed,” Dek snorted.
“Is that so?” Erinyes unleashed the stored power of her Marauder’s trance and lunged forward with a simple overhand strike that, she anticipated, Dek would see coming a kilometre away. Sure enough, Dek shifted his lightsaber to intercept the blow, and was even on course to parry it—until Erinyes’ lightsaber blade vanished and reappeared inside his guard. The Sullustan jerked backward in panic as the menacing hum of the Adept’s weapon loomed large in his oversized ear. By the time he’d repositioned his arm to deflect Erinyes’ attack, the blade had vanished again, reappearing on the other side of his head as though Erinyes had been cutting through empty space all along.
The Adept took a step back and lazily twirled her lightsaber, clucking her tongue in disappointment. “Asking how you were going to get the information you wanted out of me is the wrong question. What you should be asking yourself is, ‘is there anything else I’ve miscalculated?’ That’s the question that’s going to keep you alive.” Erinyes lunged forward again, lightsaber still twirling to obscure her angle of attack.
Out of desperation, spite, or both, Dek thrust his free hand at the Adept and growled something in Sullustese. Suddenly, Erinyes was wracked with searing pain from head to toe, and bit back a scream as spasms of agony ran through her. The sensation only lasted a moment, but even that moment was enough to throw the Adept’s attack off and buy Dek a much-needed margin for error.
So that’s what he was holding back, Erinyes thought, growling in irritation as she re-oriented herself. A few steps away, Dek’s spirits seemed lifted, but his newfound cheer was tempered by the knowledge that the battle wasn’t yet over.
Positive Takeaways
An engaging and well-thought-out premise, it certainly didn’t feel like over 1700 words.
Can Be Improved
You were pretty solid aside from two things. Marauder’s trance is...what? You use it repeatedly throughout the match, but this isn’t a thing in the Discipline’s own description nor something you reference on your sheet (possibly work this into a combat aspect). It’s a very ‘tell not show’ way of using the feats associated with your discipline. Secondly, near the end when Dek throws a hand up and ‘causes pain’. The only ability that he has that could cause this is Illusion, which states ‘Complex sensations — such as pain, odors and flavors — are more demanding on both the user and the believability of the Illusion, and the mind will reject the most severe instances.’ With the comparative levels of power (His 3 Illusion to your 4 Resolve) and the power description, this becomes a minor Realism issue. If it had been simple discomfort or something similar that caused your character to misstep or have to shake off the illusion, it would have been fine.