Xolarin was a little puzzled by Andrelious’ statement, but the Plagueian was clearly in no mood for explanations.
Andrelious, sensing victory, moved forwards, his lightsaber held in a manner that suggested the moment of surrender was upon Xolarin, but the Arcanist held firm. As Mimosa-Inahj stepped into range, Xolarin’s gaze moved to the ground. A split-second later, a shockwave knocked Andrelious backwards several feet, the force of the blast enough to send the Seeker sprawling dangerously near a lava flow.
Andrelious quickly scrambled to his feet, feeling the searing heat of the molten rock starting to singe his trousers. Xolarin, able to claim the initiative as his opponent gathered himself, moved towards Andrelious.
Keep him near the lava. Even he won’t be able to do anything about that! Xolarin thought to himself.
“Impressive,” Andrelious breathed. “I was starting to think that you would be a pushover,”
“You needed to see that I will not surrender so easily. Get it wrong again, and you’ll be having a very hot bath,” Xolarin responded, a hint of confidence in his tone.
“You’ve shown your trump card too early, Sadowan!” the Sith snarled, but he did not charge for Xolarin. Instead, he removed his left hand from the hilt of his lightsaber, summoning another wave of lightning.
The Sadowan held his hands in front of his body, his own prowess with the Force helping him both predict, and protect himself from the Sith’s attack. The incoming lightning smashed into a hastily erected invisible wall, before flickering harmlessly out of existence.
Andrelious tried twice more with fresh arcs of electric hatred, but the Arcanist’s shield held firm. The Plagueian started to realise that his favourite method of attack was simply not going to work in the face of such determined defence.
Feeling fatigue from his failed attempts at electrocuting his target, Mimosa-Inahj once again armed himself with his lightsaber, charging for Xolarin as fast as he could manage. This time, as the Force alerted him that the Sadowan was about to attempt to generate another shockwave, Andrelious nudged the ground underneath his opponent’s feet, enough to force Xolarin to adjust his feet and abandon his attempt to knock the Sith backwards.
Xolarin cursed under his breath; shielding himself from the Plagueian’s lightning had drained him, and the weight of his armour seemed to have increased tenfold. Even simple movements became more difficult, and Andrelious was far too close and dangerous to allow the slightly younger Human to tap into the Force and recover his energy. Instead, Xolarin readied himself for another lightsaber duel, willing his body to muster up one last effort at survival.
The two lightsaber blades collided with each other among a shower of sparks, Andrelious immediately probing for some kind of opening. Although stronger, and even a little more agile than his opponent, the Sith found Xolarin to be quite an effective practitioner of the Sokan form.
After parrying away a brief counter-attack involving an unorthodox sweeping slash, Andrelious chained a series of ever more aggressive moves, the last one finally bypassing Xolarin’s blade, allowing the Plagueian all the time he needed to remove his opponent’s right arm at the shoulder. As if to make sure, Andrelious followed up with another attack to sever the Arcanist’s left hand with a swift slash through the wrist. To add insult to injury, he gathered Xolarin’s lightsaber and threw it into the nearest pool of lava.
“And now, Sadowan, you’ll tell me what you know,” the Sith sneered.
Xolarin screamed in pain as Mimosa-Inahj aggressively probed through his mind, his memories suddenly opened up for examination.
Andrelious rifled through his opponent’s thoughts, looking desperately for any hint of the powerful woman with black and purple hair.
Kooki.
“You came here with the claim of information! All you have is a series of dossiers on members of the Collective, and a few schematics! Useless!” Andrelious bellowed. The information was, of course, new to him, and was probably of some use to Plagueis, but they weren’t going to help him find Kooki.
“I don’t even know who Kooki is!” Xolarin responded between cries of agony.
Before giving up and releasing the stricken Arcanist, Andrelious gleaned what information he could about Naga Sadow’s home system, its defences and key locations. Classified military data that would make a potential assault on the Orian system far easier.
“That will have to do!” Andrelious declared, releasing his defeated opponent from the vice-like grip of a Force interrogation. Xolarin immediately felt a surge of relief, but that was short lived as he noticed Andrelious swapping lightsabers. He now carried his black handled weapon.
He didn’t even get to question what the Plagueian was doing when he received a personal demonstration of the fact that Andrelious’ second lightsaber was used for one thing,
Killing.
Positive Takeaways
Good job setting the scene, and for providing a good reason for Xolarin and Andrelious to be meeting. You also provided a bit of history between their clans, but even with that showing there is still some mistrust. Great for the conflict to happen.
Can be Improved
Look out for reduntancy:
“Xolarin came to a stop, and drew his lightsaber, “holding it in his hands”.”
Xolarin already drew his saber, so the reader automatically thinks that it's in his hand, so the last part of this sentence is unnessassary.
This sentence was kind of jarring to read. Use of slightly different descriptors would help, like what is a “double-roll”?
”The Markosian had just enough of a sense of what was coming to double-roll out of the way, grabbing his ligthsaber as he stopped.”