Gui kicked him in the face.
There was no finesse, no thinking, just that. The Sith reeled back, releasing his hold, grasping blindly at his bloodied nose and teeth, and Gui planted his foot again and stumbled two steps back.
But Ruka was still getting up, reaching for him again, and Gui was very much not okay with that. Crying out, he grabbed his weighted baton off his hip, swung his arm back to extend it, and slammed it down as hard as he could into the Mirialan's calf. A muffled, meaty crunch answered, drowned out by the Sith's scream of pain.
"Stay. Down!" the Kiffar yelled, and turned to run. A glance over his shoulder revealed the Mirialan trying to drag himself up against the wall, braced on one leg, the other limp, expression a rictus or rage and agony.
By the Force, what would it take to keep the guy down? A stun shot, a broken leg, and he was still moving?
What is going on? he thought, reaching an intersection of the hallway and swerving down it. He ran, muscles and lungs burning, a fierce, stabbing pain tight in his side, under his ribs, steps slow. He'd done so much today already, and by the Force, he couldn't take much more, but if he stopped now—
Something closed around his ankle yet again and yanked.
Gui managed to catch himself when he hit the floor, losing grip of his weapons in the process. It didn't seem to matter though. Seconds later he was being dragged backwards, skin pulling uncomfortably along his palms and stomach against the metal where his robes rode up. His steel-capped boots squealed as he flailed, trying to dig in, resist the pull.
Thrashing, the Kiffar called his saber to hand and rolled onto his back, looking down the hall. The Sith hunched there at the juncture, leaning all his weight to one side, hand out and beckoning. His other still held onto that red blade.
"Take this!" the Jedi hissed, and lifted his own empty hand, staring at his palm hard in concentration. He stopped fighting, letting himself be reeled in, stopped paying attention to the Sith. He was solely focused on his hand, and on manifesting the light in his palm.
The Kid was close enough to hear the hum of his enemy's saber when he clenched his eyes shut and let the blinding radiance building up between his fingers loose. The Mirialan yelled again. There were stumbling steps. A crash. Gui got his feet under him and stood up, stance wide, saber held out in a reverse grip, ready.
He opened his eyes to see the dazed Sith still on the floor, glaring gold through tear-stained, reddened eyes, lips peeled back in a snarl. His opponent tried to stand and faltered on the knee Gui had cracked, fumbling back down. But still, still he tried to stand again, lightsaber poised.
"Just quit it already!" the Jedi Knight barked. He really didn't want to kill this man— didn't even know if, even now, he'd be able to. The Sith was so much more powerful. But if he had to fight to get out of here, since running kept failing, then...then…
The Mirialan lunged at him from the ground, surging up off his good leg and roaring, saber a blur. Gui swiped the cleave away in a wide arc as if batting aside a blaster bolt, sliding back as he did so. The Sith fell instead of landing, and snarled at him, shoving back up on his hands and knees like a man possessed. He dropped his weapon, and for one sweet, glorious moment, the Kiffar thought it was over.
But then Ruka lifted one hand, and the lightsaber lifted into the air with it, following the motion, blade reigniting. It hovered, menacing, for just a second before those inked hands jerked and the next strike came for Gui's arm.
The Jedi backpedalled again, dipped low, and then punched forward, another long, sweeping strike that tried to just batter the other weapon away. He realized too late that there wasn't a grip for him to batter it out of, not really, not like normally disarming someone. The reminder came with a burning sliver of pain as crimson plasma glanced down his overextended arm, smoking skin and cloth and muscle in a strip towards his shoulder and back. Gui choked on a scream and dropped down, rolled fully over, brought his blade up to catch the follow-up strike streaking for him.
Ever unreliable, his lightsaber stuttered, the core briefly fluctuating, but that was enough. The other blade passed right through, slicing at his throat—
—and jerked aside.
Gui gasped in a breath he hadn't realized he'd been holding and scrambled back, vaulting to his feet and bringing his guard back up as the Sith shook his head like a beast. He gripped at his hair and mumbled to himself, glaring over at the Knight.
"Nn...nno...no," he muttered.
"Uhh," Gui offered in reply. None of this made sense, and even he was beginning to notice a pattern, like a line of code repeating; despite all his ferocity, all the attacks, the other man had yet to kill him as promised. It was always a near thing. Shocking the wires, not him. Hesitating before attacking. Badly aimed strikes. Almost tossing him down a shaft. Almost frying him with electricity. Almost cutting him in two. But always not quite. Like a man possessed, echoed his earlier thought. "Do you...not want to kill me?"
"No!" the other roared, eyes flashing again, teeth bared. "Just— get— away from me! RUN! Please."
The Kiffar wasn't about to argue. He turned about and spirited away, teeth clenched against the pain of his wounds. He had to get away while he still had the chance.
...a chance he was being given…by someone who was in some kind of trouble.
His gut clenched, sour, because in his gut he knew it to be true, and that meant—
That meant he couldn't run away. Not if he was really going to call himself a Jedi, if he was more than a kid.
Gui skidded to a stop. Turned around. Fixed his gaze on the Sith who had stopped shaking and was trying to stand again, limping after him, blade dragging hungry tongues of molten flame along the floor.
He probably only had one chance at this, so he had to pick his target carefully. Thankfully, Gui had a lot of experience with people, with their sentiments and traditions, and he knew what his best bet was, spotting his saving grace quickly while he pulled off his gloves with his teeth.
It was probably a risky, terrible idea. Probably. But Gui had a feeling, and that was good enough.
The Kiffar sprinted forward and leaned into a slide, slipping under the Sith's guard and twisting back to his feet. The other man hissed and wrenched around, and Gui reached out and—
—and clasped the Mirialan's ring hand in his own.
A floodgate opened in his mind.
He knew what he had to do.
Ruka lifted his blade. Gui leaned forward until they were nearly nose to nose and shouted in the man's face.
"What about Corazon?!"
The Mirialan's scowl cracked and broke like the sun bursting behind storm clouds. All that struggle faded as he slumped back, grip loosening, and just as suddenly yet just as inevitably the bloody color of his lightsaber faded to a beautiful, brilliant blue.
"...Corazon?" he whispered, gaze fixed on the blue blue blue of the blade, his eyes fading to a pretty purple instead of corrupt gold.
And then those eyes rolled back and he damn well collapsed. Gui only barely managed to catch the man, bringing them both down to the deck under his bulk.
"Oof," grunted the Kiffar, struggling to drag himself out from under the Sith and then get the Mirialan onto his back, so he wasn't crushing his already injured leg. Then, he sat down against the wall and let out an enormous breath, wincing at his own hurts. "See, Barry? Told...told ya. I handled...it. For real...this time."
Many hours and some healing later, outside in the cold night of Jakku after the sun had set, a Sith Adept bowed to a new Jedi Knight.
"I'm really sorry I attacked you, ay. I didn't mean to, but that's no excuse. I... The Dark can be hard to keep in check, and sometimes things set it off, places strong in bad stuff like this... There's a lot of ghosts here, a lot of pain and death and anger. And it got to me. I'm really, so, so sorry." He bowed his head yet again. It was starting to get uncomfortable. Especially since the guy was only standing with the help of his own Security droid, whom Barry didn't like very much.
"Hey, don't worry, man," Gui replied. "I get that. Memories are living things, you know. They're everywhere. In everything. And they can be really intense. That's why I wear these." He held up his gloved hands. "And we didn't get hurt, uh, permanently, so... It all worked out! Besides, I had fun."
"Fun?" The Mirialan seemed aghast. "Ay, ay, no, no part of that was fun! Are you crazy?"
Gui only laughed. "Oh come on! Your telekinesis, your jumps, THAT was crazy! I bet you could go right off the top of the thruster there and be fine! That would be awesome! We could race. Oh, I'm Gui Sol, by the way. Jedi Knight of Alluis and Mechanic Extraordinaire. Came to find treasures!"
"...Ruka, Lotus," answered the Sith after a moment, still gaping. Then, he groaned. "Ay, why always do I get the crazies? Look, man, I like running around flying off stuff too and all, but not fighting, and this has been a kriffing awful day for me so— maybe, uh, next time?"
"You got it, Ruka!" The Jedi grinned. "But! You owe me. Since all this trouble, right? Don't forget. I want to make more memories."
"I won't forget," Ruka promised. He frowned a little, then reached into his robes. "Uh... If you were 'treasure hunting' then you might want this? I think it's what set me off. Bad frang. Ain't want nothing to do with it. You might though."
As if offering a live snake, the Mirialan offered him what appeared to be an old Imperial code cylinder, scuffed and stained brown, perhaps with very old blood. Gui's eyes lit with interest as he took it happily, careful not to let his skin touch; not yet anyway.
He could sense it, the negativity Ruka must have too, contained in the item. Who knew what stories it would have? Ones to read carefully, maybe. But read them he would.
"Thanks!" the Kiffar said brightly, and Ruka actually twitched a smirk at him instead of a frown.
"Sure," he said, and then, "you know... You remind me a bit of my husband. Excited and stuff. He's a Jedi too, just not with the Clan. I bet you do a lot of good when you grow up."
"I'm not a total kid, you know," Gui said, but not with much force, pocketing his new memory. "But thanks."
"No...you're not. My bad." Ruka nodded. "And thank you, for saving me. I don't know what'd've happened if you hadn't." He extended his hand. Gui took it, clasping firmly. "Until next time?"
The Kid — the Jedi — smiled.
"You got it."
Positive Takeaways
You set the Jakku scene well and had a decent amount of combat, well done.
Can Be Improved
You had a few extra/missing commas (like three total, that’s it, not bad!), and propulsary hurt your syntax because it isn’t a word. Propulsory is, but it doesn’t mean anything close to what you were doing. This didn’t hurt your Story score because what you meant was clear.
The big hit you took in this post was in Realism, as stated in the rubric: “A character acts in a manner that directly contradicts their aspects.” I’m not sure how Ruka became a murderous, cookie-cutter Sith in this post, as his personality and general aspects both outline him as being more of an antihero than a psychopath. Please in the future be more mindful of your opponent’s character sheet. You also took a Minor hit for describing Ruka’s saber as Red, rather than its listed Blue.