Fuming. In his younger days Xolarin would have been throwing some sort of fit. He of course would have been able to stay more on top of the young Eleceos, but the trade-off for rational, calmer thinking was worth it. And thus as he caught up to the young lad, he knew roughly where he was below.
Xolarin had everything put away, with no need for his lightsaber or sensors. His mind would do the rest of the work here. "Come now, Jedi," his voice said somewhat loudly. "I've got nothing else to do, thanks to you."
There was silence as Eleceos tried to avoid contact just yet. There was an air of power forming from the younger combatant, preparing for just the right moment.
The mystic cocked his head, sensing a change around him. There was more life, and more lives - did someone come around to heal the boy? How did someone approach so quickly and undetected? A clever one, the Miraluka was. "No one said we could bring friends..."
At that moment, the culmination of power and build-up hopped out of the lower level. Eleceos leaped from his hiding place and fired one and then two plasma arrows shot out with precision and speed, and the older man's connection to the Force was the only thing that prevented the arrows from hitting him right in the torso. Eleceos' amplified shooting ability was more than a match for Xolarin's agility and precognition.
Xolarin dove to the side into a roll which turned more into a flop onto his side. There was pain in several spots on his body, presumably due to the fall. But when he looked to his other side, there was a singed, burnt, and bloody scourge on his ribs. One of those arrows grazed him significantly, causing a delayed sense of pain shooting up from the wound to his brain.
"Sithspit!" exclaimed the Human.
"That's what you get," said the boy, coming back to the same level as his foe. "Assassinations are not taken to kindly."
Xolarin's anger at the pain turned to confusion at Eleceos' words, eying him as he approached on the alleyway once again. Before he could respond, another plasma arrow shot out and hit the ground right next to Xolarin. Another warning shot, or an accident. But before he lingered on the confusion, he slammed his fist on the durasteel ground, causing a blast of energy to shoot out in waves at anyone around.
Eleceos stumbled a bit, his finely-crafted weapon coming down from a ready state. He was staggered just enough to be ill-prepared for the indirect punch to the face, slamming him back a couple meters.
Xolarin stood up, still a ways from the Miraluka boy, grinning slightly again. "You are confused, my friend. You see--" But the fallen Jedi was unable to finish as the wolf, that ended up being the other body he sensed, leaped out from where Eleceos came and pounced at Xolarin, latching onto one of his forearms and biting in. "Aagh!"
Eleceos came back to a stable state and tried to take aim with his bow, but Ash was too busy wrestling with his foe. I just need a small opening, he thought to himself, getting closer to the melee combat.
Xolarin knew his time was waning, noticing the younger Jedi getting closer. "Get... off... me..." he said exasperatingly. He was mad, moreso than when the boy ran. He grabbed the stiletto out his belt, somehow unsheathed it, and stabbed it into the torso of the wolf several times. The wolf whimpered at the attack and let go, but the noise was quickly overshadowed by Eleceos' shout.
A plasma arrow came at him, followed by others in quick succession. The aim was good, but not as true as it could have been. His amped abilities were being muffled by his anger. Xolarin dodged the bolts, a couple hitting his robes and one dinging off the shoulder of his armor. The smells of burnt clothing and flesh, of the wolf, of blood from multiple bodies, and of sweat, all consumed the olfactory senses.
"Just stop!" shouted Xolarin curtly. He shout out a weak wave of controlled force at the young one. "I'm not trying to assassinate anyone. You wasted this trip and your dog based on an assumption."
"You lie!" shouted Eleceos, still angry about Ash, and the fact that Xolarin called her a dog.
"No, and look what your hubris cost you." Xolarin shook his head, his body aching at the sites of the arrow wound and the wolf bite. "Go back to your master, boy." Xolarin could not spot Rhylance or the ship anymore nearby, but he knew he was nearby. "And I'll go back to my job that has nothing to do with you."
Eleceos started to raise his bow again, but Xolarin reached out his good arm and slammed him with invisible force yet again, knocking the Miraluka down. They had bested each other, and in fact the boy probably would have prevailed if Xolarin hadn't ended it with perceived confidence. The older man walked away, quickening his pace as he got further away, letting the boy tend to Ash and try to sort out the truth.
Tears of sadness and anger for the boy, tears of pain for the older man. That's what was left in this 1313 alley.
Positive Takeaways
A very interesting start. The use of the enviroment, and setting up the characters to fight is great.
Awesome showing and not telling Force abilities, the only thing I would suggest is maybe adding a few more descriptors.
“Suddenly, Eleceos slowed down, his movements not quite as agile. He found himself jogging down the alley until he saw Xolarin down the way. The fallen Jedi was doing something, and it was not a good feeling.”
Can be Improved
There were a few other minor Syntax errors as well, and a bit of jarring text. Since Mystic is a title, it should be capitalized. Also double check when you use descriptive words that mean the exact same thing like ‘quick’ and ‘nimble’ in the same sentence.
This one just needs a different descriptive word:
“...the hair on the back of his neck
wiggled(raised) (or even tingled)...”The biggest hit was on Realism. Neither you helm aspects nor the goggles aspects have a zoom function. The idea was great, just be sure to double check your aspects to make sure you're actually able to use the equiment in the manner you want to.
"He moved his goggles and line of sight up and closer to him, out of the chasm and right on his level before his feelings aligned. Zoomed out now, he could hardly see what it was,...”