"Something wrong?"
There was, and for someone who specialised as a Sorcerer, Appius was surprisingly competent with a blade in his hand. A fact that surprised Cal as he held firm in place in case the Taldryanite tried any more of his sorcerous tricks against him.
"You don't have to do this," replied the tall Miraluka as he tried to appeal to whatever conscious remained within the Dark Jedi.
"This again?" Appius inquired. "Need I remind you that drawing our lightsabers was your idea?"
"Please, I implore you, you don't know what I've seen."
"To be honest, I doubt you've actually seen much of anything without a pair of eyes."
Cal started to get exasperated, his body ached, his muscles burned, and even with the soothing energy of the Force behind him, he was far from one hundred percent. The only upside to this situation was the human was panting heavily himself from overuse of his powers. Regardless, if this fight dragged on for much longer someone was going to get seriously hurt. either them or one of the people standing by watching the fight occur with a mixture of shock and awe.
Yet, no matter what he said to the Taldryanite, he was met by a mixture of smarm or anger. But from what little he'd managed to pry from Appius' mind, he knew he was carrying a lot of guilt. Guilt that undoubtedly twisted his mind and turned him from the light.
Then there was the matter of the unconscious Zabrak that lay just a few feet away. Appius' attention was thankfully diverted away from him, but he had to wonder how long for? He had an idea, it was brazen and foolhardy. But if he had any chance of getting through to him, if Hector was right, then this would be the way to do it. He deactivated his weapon, an action that surprised all those around him, especially his opponent.
"Appius," he said as he took a deep breath. "I forgive you."
Silence dropped between them, the air thick as the embers from the fruit stall continued to burn next to them. Whilst the scent of smoke was unpleasant, it was a welcome change from the natural, toxic fumes of the Refugee Sector.
"What?" Appius questioned as he gripped his blade tighter in his hands.
"You heard me, I forgive you."
The Force revealed the Sorcerer’s aura recoiling slightly at Cal's words. Yes! He was finally making progress! He just had to be careful with his choice of words and what he did with them. If he tried to breach Appius' mind again and he fought back he could lash out worse than before, and with so many innocent people circling around them, that wasn't a risk Cal was willing to take. He had to tread carefully, the next few words he uttered could determine the fate of this battle, and not just his future but Appius' and the Zabrak whom he was trying to kill.
"I've seen a lot, Appius. The deaths of hundreds of people, the horrid burden you place upon yourself, the weight in your shoulders. That is a lot for one man to take. I'm sorry for whatever happened, I don't know what occurred aboard the Nesolat but…"
That was as far as he got.
Jets of blue and white streamed towards that seemed to appear out of nowhere. The source came from Appius' hands and it was only due to the Force's preemptive warning that he was able to reactivate his weapon to defend himself. The streaks of lightning collided into the blade and the sound of the electricity that screeched into his ears dominated over everything else.
It was clear his choice of words was poor.
"I TOLD YOU TO STAY OUT OF MY HEAD!" Appius roared like thunder, the sparks dissipated out of his hands, his breathing ragged, and his amber eyes began to adopt the red circles that Cal feared oh so much.
The Sorcerer raised his hands in front of him and strained as he pulled a burning piece of scorched wood out of the flames and launched it directly at the Miraluka. He only just managed to dodge, though it flew straight into the path of the onlookers who scattered away from the incoming projectile like a flock of cattle.
It was as Cal had predicted and foreseen. Appius' emotional state was getting worse and he was getting more reckless as a result. With his lightsaber in his hand, the Seeker launched himself at Appius before the Ektrosis Aedile could do any more damage.
In response to this advance, Appius gripped hold of his weapon, activating the emerald coloured blade with a distinctive snap-hiss, he launched the weapon out of his hand towards the Miraluka with as much strength as he could muster. It arched through the air and threaten to take off his head and whirled horrifically like a floating guillotine. Despite this, the Vizsla member was able to bat it away from him before it could do any damage.
He closed the distance with the Dark Jedi and thrust with a swift strike aimed directly at his forearm, but before it could connect, Appius' saber returned to his hand and he reactively parried the strike before it could connect with his flesh.
Cal remained steady and reacted accordingly, at face value, it seemed the Jedi was unprepared for combat. His stature oddly lax and haphazard and yet, as Appius was discovering, that was far from the case. He struck out at him like a dragonsnake, coiled and tight one moment then fluid and refined the next like a spring that released its pressure. It was something the dark sider was unaccustomed too. Normally he'd be able to discern which fighting style his opponents were using and adjust accordingly but he was struggling with this one. He could make out the smooth, precise movements of Makashi and the haphazard stance and motions of Niman but outside of that he struggled to recognise any decisive pattern which ultimately led to him doing what most form three specialists do best, hope and pray for a mistake or opening to present itself.
Easier said than done, Appius was exhausted and he knew it. Even his basket-weaved defence was beginning to show cracks in it as a result of fatigue and he was only just able to meet each strike reactively as he backpedaled and circled around the area to try and create some distance between them. Green and yellow crashed in a brilliant display of glimmering lights and colour.
Cal tried to keep pace, advancing on him as he retreated, determined not to let him have an inch of breathing room, and whilst the Sorcerer might have been exhausted, he wasn't particularly fresh either. His injuries and use of the Force up to this point had taken its toll on him. His muscles ached and burned with every move he made and only sheer determination kept him moving. He would not allow his visions to come to pass! Even if his body crumbled and turned to ash, he would fight to his last breath.
Then there was the issue of the crowd. The onlookers were too close to the action for Cal's liking and it caused a horrible distraction. An innocent getting hurt was not something he wanted to do and he decided to do something about it before someone got killed.
He retreated back a few paces and gave himself enough distance between himself and Appius so that the Sorcerer couldn't instantly strike him down. Turning his head to the crowd, his eyeless form met with as many faces as he could, at least ten, before he focused on his mental prowess.
"You want to go home." The Miraluka uttered and then waited. Nothing happened at first until a small murmur broke out amongst the crowd that surrounded the few Force users. It seemed certain individuals were in a trance-like state as they shuffled away. The few other people unaffected by Cal's action were a mixture of confused and bewildered as they left the scene for no other reason other than 'he told them to'.
Appius could see his opportunity and smirked sadistically at the typical Jedi, so concerned about those around him he completely lost focus on what was in front of him, it was a foolish mistake and a fatal one at that.
Appius launched himself from where he stood and ran towards the tall Miraluka with as much speed as his legs could muster, his lungs screamed for him to stop but he pushed through his fatigue as best he could. This was his opportunity to end the fight, consequences be damned. In response, Cal thrust his yellow blade forward and hoped to end the fight with a quick thrust, though it never connected. The Taldryanite called upon the Force to power his feet and launched himself off the ground and over the Miraluka, his sudden mobility caught the Seeker completely off guard and as the Human landed on his feet, Cal turned to face him, a warning from the Force in the back of his mind warned him of the imminent danger, only for a sweeping motion from the tip of a green lightsaber to connect directly into his knee caps in retaliation.
He collapsed onto his sternum and bit his tongue, fighting back the urge to scream as he tried to call upon the Force to soothe his injury, trying to place his right hand as close to the injury as possible until an emerald blade pierced right through his palm.
"GAAAAH!" Cal screamed at the now gaping hole in his hand as it burned with an intensity that felt hotter than the molten rivers of Mustafar.
"Oh no… you don't. No more healing for you… not … today," Appius said between gasps of air. "Stop looking so… pathetic." The Sorcerer dropped to one knee as he did his best to recover from the fight they'd just had. What remained of the crowd began to disperse, now that their 'entertainment' for the evening had ended.
Cal slowly lifted his head, his lips quivering from pain as he forced himself to speak.
"You aren't going to kill me?" The Seeker managed to voice.
"I want to, believe me, I do," Appius replied as a small smile graced his sweat-drenched face. "But I have something better in mind."
Forcing himself into his feet, the Sorcerer managed to catch a glimpse of his target’s body from just a few feet away. Raising his right hand, he gripped around the fallen Zabrak's bulky body like a tether and pulled it towards them.
Cal recognised the being's aura immediately as a sense of dread began to take over. He remembered this exact scenario playing out in his visions.
"I'm not going to kill you this time. Instead, I'm going to give you a lesson in messing with people's minds. I'm going to kill him right in front of you, and you are going to watch."
Cal's heart thudded hard in his ears as he summoned the strength to throw his left arm in front of him in a futile attempt to reach them.
"No, please. PLEASE! It's not too late for you, Appius! You can change!" The Miraluka pleaded and gritted his teeth.
Appius slowly turned his head towards him, his amber eyes coated by a red inner circle full of malice and hate. He smiled at the Jedi one last time as it stretched into a sick toothy grin.
"Oh no, my dear Jedi. You should have known it's far too late for me."
As soon as he finished his sentence lightning erupted from his fingertips and crashed into the Zabrak's body like a wild thunderstorm. The only sound that could be heard aside from the electrical surge, was Cal's pleas of desperation.
Positive Takeaways
This was a great and certainly eventful opening post. Well done. You created not only a purpose for them to both be there, but an intimate purpose for them to fight. This is really great to see in the opening post, cause it really immerses the reader into the story. Along with making the reader feel personally invested in what happens next. I also found it interesting how you wrote from the perspective of your opponent's character, rather than your own.
I also liked your description and interpretation of Force Amplification.
“With the Force injecting itself into his legs like a powerful stimulant...”
Can Be Improved
There were a few minor grammar errors. Quite a few punctuation errors. Watch for run-on sentences and the use of commas, or more, not using enough commas. Otherwise, it was a great opening post.