Mauro was not about to make the first move, and so the Shistavanen lunged, and his sapphire blade cut a wicked horizontal line through the air. The sword was a cutting slash of blue that would have rent a vicious wound across the human’s torso had Mauro not brought his blade up in time. The blow reverberated up his arm. Eyed narrowed, the human brought his off-hand weapon up into a stabbing motion. Clumsy as it was, being untrained in wielding two weapons, Mune caught it on his off-hand dagger.
Mune, however, was trained to dual wield. As Mauro’s physical strength began to force Mune’s weapons back, the Shistavanen grinned. He began to pant with the effort of holding back the sharp edges of the weapons.
Mauro saw his advantage and pressed it.
Muscles burning, Mune’s eyes narrowed in concentration. The Force hummed through him, a thrum of energy boiled through his every cell and infused his muscles. Confusion sparked in the human’s eyes. The tremble that had begun in Mune’s arms had subsided, and Mauro found his advantage somehow lost. Mune knew how long he could maintain the boosted strength, he’d not need it that long, he estimated. He adjusted his footing to get better leverage.
“Brute strength won’t win you the fight,” Mune warned.
The wind whipped past; their cloaks snapped wildly in the blast. Mune twisted, sword sliding harshly along the other man’s. Mune ducked low, his dagger suddenly no longer there, holding back Mauro’s weapons. The suddenness found the human overcompensating. He lost his footing, stumbling forward. He saw the potentially fatal error in time to twist just as Mune, still low to the ground, slashed with the intent of shredding the back of his knee with the dagger. As it was, the cut was shallow. Mauro felt the blood well then run in thin rivulets down his calf. With the feel of the blood came the shock of pain. He only just managed to maintain his feet.
Mune rose, readjusting the dagger into a reverse grip. His ears were perked, and an eyebrow raised ion a questioning look. “Not quite quick enough? How long will it hold your weight?”
“You did not expect me to dodge it at all, did you?” Mauro snapped.
“Did you want me to hold back?”
“This is nothing, come on, come at me,” Mauro demanded.
“Are you punishing yourself for something?” Mune asked, his weapons slowly lowering.
“What?” the question caught Mauro off guard.
“You heard me.”
“Analyzing me, are you?” Mauro laughed, though there was no humour in it. The sound was bitter and even harsh. “Do not assume to know the inner workings of my mind, Mune.”
“We are done,” Mune said abruptly.
“No.”
Mune grinned flashing his long canines, “Why?”
“You challenged me for a reason.”
“And?” Mirth danced in Mune’s ruby eyes.
Mauro found himself frustrated; how could the Shistavanen’s be so flippant? The human opened his mouth to speak then caught himself. His brow knit in concentration. He reflected on what he heard about the Shistavanen, about the ex-proconsul of Scholae. He thought the mercurial nature afforded his opponent were just stories on the part of his new clanmates. He watched the vulpine muzzle split into a well-natured grin. The human dropped his sapphire blade, and just as quickly, his disruptor was coming up for a shot.
The Force was manifest through Mune as quickly as he could blink. The first disruptor shot was sent skyward, deflected by the dagger in Mune’s offhand. The Shistavanen closed the distance, the Force a raging thing let loose through his muscles’ fibres. It fueled his already impressive agility, like fuel to a flame. He was inside the human’s guard, the point of the weapon pressed against the consul’s throat, threatening to draw blood with even the tiniest bit more pressure. Ruby eyes blazed with something that gave the human pause, a certainty that it would take only a breath, and the dagger’s metal would taste blood. Sweet and coppery it would flow over the fur of Mune’s hands and assail his nostrils.
“We. Are. Done.” Mune said firmly.
Where had the mirth gone, the smile? Mauro swallowed carefully, feeling the Sith Dagger’s nick like something aching to release his life’s blood upon the ground. He felt the Shistavanen relax, and only then acknowledged in what he hoped passed for a confident, commanding tone, “We are done.”
“You are not a fighter. Not like this, anyway. Maybe, I’ll get to see you fight in your element some time.”
“My art is with words and ships,” Mauro admitted.
“Stick to one sword. Your sword skills are decent, but you do not dual wield. Use that strength of yours to your advantage. That means one sword. You’d have beat me down, I think.” Mune smirked.
“Thanks.”
“We’ll work on it!”
Positive Takeaways
While you could have played up the locale more, you did make it clear that Mauro is uneasy about the setting itself. You introduced and identified both your and Mune’s character well.
Can Be Improved
Action! Conflict needs to make up something like half your post for it to not get you at least a minor Story detractor, and this post had none. This can include Force powers and Mind Tricks, etc, not just punching the other guy.
On the Syntax front, you missed a space between dialogue and Mune, as well as a comma denoting that Mune was the speaker (when ending a line of dialogue with a character action, in this case Mune’s flourish, it should break with a comma, not a period.) Also, and this is both confusing and annoying to many people, consistency in species naming. As the rubric states: In cases where there is no clear standard, competitors should decide on a particular usage and stick with it - this includes capitalization of species names. You started off by using a capital S for Mune's species, you should do the same with Mauros, because Star Wars grammar is weird.
The only confusing bit I got from your story was ‘boot hilts’, which I assume you meant to be ‘sheathes’.