Mirus would get no greeting, no congratulations; not even any words he would probably want to hear soon after the Sith Lord was dead. Instead, he’d end up with an ornate looking box in his face, Rhiann holding it out to him using both of her hands. With how things went last time on New Tython with a Sith artifact, Rhiann didn’t want to risk looking at it quite yet.
“Here is the artifact.” The Sephi said in a flat voice. Her face was skewed into a smirk though, obviously having fun with pretending nothing went wrong with it all.
“... I’m just fine, thanks for asking.” The Titan muttered, taking the box and sitting himself down on the temple’s floor.
While the man busied himself with that, Rhiann went about getting her lightsaber back at her side. She looked it over before clipping it back to her hip, looking over to her master as his face twisted into an odd look.
Heading back over, the Sephi crouched down next to him right as he was opening the hinge-lidded box, pulling out what looked to indeed be a Sith artifact. It wasn’t as crude or… unique as some others known through history, but instead only made of rough cut purple stones held together with wire, beading and a highly decorated neck strap.
“What kind of artifact is -that-.” Rhiann questioned, though it sounded more like a demand for explanation.
“It’s an artifact. That’s all that matters.” Mirus answered, ready to put it back away when he noticed Rhiann’s eyes were fixated on the crystals and how they sparkled when the few light beams filtering into the temple hit them. Her head moved to continue looking at it even as he put it back into the box and shut the lid.
He could see the sparkle in her eyes diminish as the artifact went out of sight. Either his apprentice was getting a taste for artifacts, or she loved everything shiny. It was probably the latter. As if to test it out and give her a bit of payback for the playful lack of concern earlier, Mirus cracked the box open just barely, then shut it again. Rhiann’s eyes followed-- all her attention focused on the purple crystals. Mirus would close and open and close the box numerous times, it becoming clear now.
“Rhi.” He said while looking right at her to make sure she heard it the first time, “Do you want me to make a copy for you?”
At first Rhiann was confused. She had no clue Mirus could even do something like that; even as Praetor to the Herald. She knew that he would slave over his own lightsabers, including the new one he had made after she got his destroyed, but had no clue that he could do artifacts. If it was in fact going to be a replica even in power.
“Ye...s?” She said, trying to be careful about seeming too eager, “I mean, yes. Of course.”
Tucking the box under one arm, Mirus tried to get himself up off the ground, only to find out during some of the tumbling with the Sith that his right leg had broken below the knee. Rhiann was finished with teasing him and helped him up, shooting the man a worried look. While she had done it before, the emotion seemed to be at its strongest today.
“I think I owe you dinner.” the man said, putting an arm around Rhiann’s back to get his weight off his bad leg.
Rhiann found it a bit difficult to carry his weight, especially since she was a few inches taller, but she tried. “I save your life and all I get is dinner?”
As the two of them started to hobble back toward the ship that carried them to the planet, Rhi’s dark eyes would occasionally glance over to her master and the box he was carrying. Both of these things caught her attention, their eyes meeting as those unholy glowing eyes looked up at her’s.
“And how many times have I saved your life?” His unamused voice would ask in return; the question legitimate. No one was keeping count, but he had certainly saved her numerous times over. Her saving him this time around was just good timing.
Not liking that she was wrong, Rhiann’s words turned into a grumble. This was always one way to tell that he was right. This time around, the Obelisk celebrated his victory with a short laugh. Hearing him enjoying the win just got the Guardian riled up, tripping him up and causing him to hop on one foot until she stabilized him once more.
“Do you want more than dinner?” Mirus asked, getting the conversation back on track as their slow walk back to the ship continued.
There was a long pause from Rhiann, “How did this go again…” She muttered to herself before talking at normal volume, “Something… about dessert.”
One of the thick eyebrows on the man’s brow lifted in question, “What. Cake? Ice cream? Chocolate mousse?”
‘You are clueless.’ Rhi thought to herself in the safety of her own mind.
Clearing her throat, she tried to answer, the subject at hand causing her to lose her train of thought. Despite being married before, this was all new to her. Relationships. Or trying to pursue them anyway. There was no way he’d end up going for this… would he?
“No, no, no...” She muttered, sighing, “How about… breakfast too.”
It wasn’t often that Rhiann showed any emotion outside of her usual self, this throwing Mirus off. How suspicious. Though, this was something he wasn’t familiar with hearing. Certainly they could get together for breakfast too if she had wanted. That is what she wanted, right?
The only response she got was a look for her to further explain her confusing self.
“It is something Humans say when they really want to spend the night with someone intimately. You are a Human. Should you not know that?” Rhiann explained, not looking at the man next to her as she said this and as she waited for his answer.
“Is that what you want?” Mirus asked, his tone serious.
“Ah.. er…” The woman muttered, a rare bout of shyness creeping into her usual attitude.
“Women are so confusing.” He said with a sigh and the shake of his head. Unlucky for him, this warranted a swift kick to his broken leg, Mirus not expecting it. He sharply inhaled through clenched teeth, Rhiann snubbing him for the remainder of their walk to the ship.
If only he wasn't so hopelessly backwards-tribal.
That's what she said :P
'in that instant', or 'in the same instant' would work better syntax wise.
Again, awkward syntax here.
It's a string of awkward wording like this that disrupts the readers ability to read the flow of combat.
Story wise, you don't really tell me anything about the attackers. I don't know their shape, size, demeanor. Are they shadows, people? Hooded and cloaked? I really get no sense of danger or what these threats materialize as.
Syntax.