He had always hated mud. In the back of his mind, he wondered how any Force user could stand such an environment. He hated the feeling of the ground squishing beneath his feet. Something about trudging about in swampy conditions never failed to make his skin crawl.
"I have to wonder what the Headmistress really wants here." Cimozjen eyeballed the wreckage of the Nesolat station. He shuddered a bit as he remembered the hurried escape from the rapidly descending platform.
"Are you really concerned about conducting some pest control?" The question drew the Force Disciple's attention to his companion. Tasha'Vel's tone was laced with a mixture of disapproval and disbelief. She glared at Cimozjen with hands planted upon her hips. "Are you worried about getting your hands dirty?"
The Human Sorcerer forced a tight smile. He saw the glance the Sapphire-skinned Twi'lek made toward the slugthrower at his side. He spread his hands out in a show of acquiescence. "Not all of us are quite as ready to jump into the fray as you are, madam Rollmaster. Are you certain that you have enough blades for this job?" The man's eyes sparkled playfully as he pointed to the ornate sword at the woman's side. “You couldn’t have left that one at home while we are only hunting down some beasties?”
"This sword goes everywhere with me, Augur Kurios.” The Sadowan Rollmaster’s tone became cool as she placed her hand over the hilt. Her stance became less like that of a schoolteacher and more that of the “It is important to me. It is important to my family.”
“That is always the rub, isn’t it.” Cimozjen mused, looking back at the wreckage of Nesolat Station. “Family is important to a lot of your lot. So is this a thing of loyalty then?” The human’s eyes danced, looking out at something near the horizon.
“What of it?” The Sith brushed one of her lekku behind her shoulder. “Do you have a point?”
“I have seen visions. I have dreamed dreams. I am not lead about the nose in the same way that you and your hubby are.”
Tasha’Vel blinked several times. “What about that armor you wear? Aren’t you at the service of the Grand Master as well, Inquisitor?”
“I am never somewhere other than where I ought to be.” There was a tiredness in the words. “As I said, my visions guide me. That is what brings me here today. The request for assistance from Ciara coincided with that perfectly and thus I am here. The Force’s will guides others like yourself even when you least expect it. Yet that does not answer the questions as to the underlying reason behind our being here. They were experimenting on wildlife. I doubt that any of that research is above being replaced. So tell me, madam, how does that leash from the Dark Council fit?”
“You talk a lot. You are just lucky-” The raised finger and bulging eyes of her Sorcerer companion brought an abrupt end to the Marauder’s sentence. “What is it?”
“I could have sworn I just saw something.” Cimozjen’s voice became more hushed. The man drew the slugthrower from his side, stalking forward carefully.
“What did you see?” The Twi’lek insisted. Now the Marauder was watching her surroundings as closely as the Sorcerer had been. A soft wind blew across the swampy ground, rustling the vegetation. Nothing else seemed to move around the pair. A good twenty seconds passed before the Augur placed his weapon back into its holster at his side.
“I must have imagined it.” Cimozjen shook his head as worry crinkled his features.
As though on queue, a roar erupted from behind the Sadowans. Cimozjen had barely turned to regard the source before he felt the weight of the impact. He felt the firearm leave his fingers as he was thrown sideways. Before either Sadowan knew what was happening, the Sorcerer could see a row of glistening teeth hanging over him. A globule of saliva hit the Sorcerer’s face as teeth clacked together mere inches from the human’s face. Desperately, Cimozjen tried to push the teeth away as he intently attempted to get a leg beneath the creature.
“Oh no you don’t!” Filled with fury, Tasha’Vel broke from the momentary shock of the creature’s appearance. The Twi’leki Marauder charged the creature, holding her treasured Vishra'Reyal up in preparation for a powerful strike. Bringing the weapon down in a practiced strike, the Sith was pleased to see the blade make its mark. The nexu recoiled, turning around to face the prey that dared to interrupt the meal it intended to make of her compatriot.
The Force Disciple took advantage of the opening to roll to his feet again. He feared the creature would have its full weight upon the Rollmaster within moments. Now outside of immediate danger himself of being crushed between the nexu’s jaws, Cimozjen’s hand scrambled at his side.
Gripping the hilt of his stiletto, it was his turn to charge the nexu. With a grunt of exertion, the human swung the narrow weapon around in a panicked arc. The blade made purchase, plunging into soft tissue and snapping off at the hilt. The creature retracted with a howl, snapping its teeth at its attacker.
The nexu could not keep its eyes on the both of the Sadowans at once. While the human had hurt the Tasha’Vel seized upon the creature’s split attention, dropping her sword to the ground and grabbing hold of her Nightsister dagger. Jumping on the creature’s back, she held onto one of the beast’s spines and stabbed into it. “You!” She bellowed the word. “Are. Not. Going. To. Eat. One. Of. My. Sadowans!” With each word stabbed the nexu again and again.
This day was not going the way that Cimozjen had expected at all. Igniting his lightsaber, he took a moment to consider how to best attack the nexu. If the two of them worked quickly, perhaps they could bring the nexu back maimed instead of dead.
Hopefully the will of the Force didn’t include one of them being eaten.
Positive Takeaways
You setup the ambiance of the area, mud, swampy, gross, very well. A lot of interaction between your character and Tasha's as well, though some of it went over my head I suspect it meant something to the characters.
I liked that you addressed the weakness of the stiletto, especially in such a scenario, by having it literally break, that's refreshing to see.
An excellent mix of action and story, well done!
Can Be Improved
The initial nexu attack completely ignored part of your own sheet, the +4 precognition would have at the very least warned and given Cimozjen an opportunity to react.
Other than that, you were missing a comma in the very last line (Hopefully, the will of the Force....) and you had an internal consistency issue with Human/human. Pick one and stick with it for race names.