"Thank you, Creon." Elyon said quietly, because she was still absorbing the sensations which she saw and felt in their minds. Even the battlefields of the Clone Wars did not prepare her for such a thing.
"I need to get deeper so that they can trust me and uncover the connection through which we will both be able to prove our intentions to them," Elyon said, looking into Creon's green eyes. At that moment, she saw again his inner light, which was like a guarding star to her. "Thank you for being here," she finally said after a while and tried to smile. "Can I take your hand?" Elyon asked, hoping he would agree.
"Of course," he answered and took her hand. It was important to Elyon for many reasons, but most of all it was a strong connection that would not allow her to drown in the sea of memories.
After she was sure she wouldn't let another wave into the darkness, Elyon closed her eyes and reached back to Vornskrs’ distant mind to pass on another message. She focused on feeling compassion and understanding, but at the same time she was ready to continue listening and learning from them.
She must not be above them but in line with them or even a little below them, she thought.They looked up at the Sith for too long with hatred and anger. Now the two Jedi listen to them and acknowledge their uniqueness and share their pain with them.
The message was accepted on their part. Elyon was again hit by a wave of sensations like a tidal wave, but this time much stronger and more painful. They were hunted and captured as if they were not living beings. Catching eyes were set everywhere, which caused pain and it could even amputate limbs. They were pitted against each other in the struggle for survival. Sith even cut the mothers' bellies to see if the pups would survive at various stages of development. The atrocities committed against them were engraved on their minds and bodies.
Tears streamed down Elyon's face. She was unable to perceive anything around her. She was completely open and devoted to the connection with the Vornskrs.
That's it. Stay with them and listen to them. You're doing well. As if from a great distance, Creon spoke to her through their connection. He sat next to her on a branch and felt everything she did. Through their connection, he felt that Elyon was beginning to weaken under the weight of everything she saw and felt. But at the same time, he felt her determination to help these creatures and end their suffering. He held her hand and watched the sensations, which continued to roll like waves.
Elyon continued to remain in touch with the Vornskr, who passed on to her their torturous lives in fear, despair, hatred, and pain. However, they also showed her one essential thing, a bond that would not break from pain or any command. It was pure unity. There was a connection between them that the Jedi and other species had long been trying in vain for. Harmony in unity.
Suddenly the sea seemed to calm down and just rustle softly. The sensations of memories and pain disappeared. Instead, there was silence and peace. At that moment, Elyon felt the minds of all the creatures sitting directly below her, looking at them. She felt their confidence and the same openness she had. She saw the world now through their eyes. Forest and swamp as a place of refuge that has been intertwined with a number of paths and abbreviations that help them get to safety. At the same time, Elyon felt their attachment to the Force. It was much stronger than she knew of other species. And she appreciated all the more that they had given them a chance to see. It was all an incredible gift for them.
Elyon slowly opened eyes and wiped away her tears. First, she looked down at the pack sitting obediently below them. And then she looked at Creon. "Did you feel it?" she asked him, looking into his eyes.
"Yes, I did, but I've never felt anything like it." Creon shook his head.
"Neither have I. Such a strong connection with each other and with the Force. That's unbelievable," Elyon remarked in amazement and looked down again. "I think we can go down now. They won't attack us anymore." She said and raised her head again to her companion.
"Thank you for being here and sharing everything with me. If you weren't here, I would hardly be able to handle it alone." Elyon said, trying to smile again. It was true, because without his inner light and his power, it would mean that she would drown in a sea of suffering and pain.
"I was honored to experience it with you. I have never experienced anything like this. The memory of this connection will remain with me forever." Creon said, looking into their blue eyes. Their minds reunited to seal the connection with Vornskr, but also between them.
"You're right, we can go down. I'll climb first to choose the best route." Creon said, moving along the branch toward the trunk.
"I understand." Elyon answered and followed him. With caution, the pair of Jedi slowly descended the stumps left of the branches before Creon cut them to secure them.
When the Jedi couple finally re-entered the solid ground, the question arose as to what to do next. Both Elyon and Creon bowed deeply to the creatures to show their respect for them. The Vornskrs followed suit and also lowered their heads.
"What about them now?" Creon asked, looking at them.
"We'll save them. And take them back to their home planet. I've already chosen a more remote place on one of the local continents where they can live without being disturbed," she answered and looked at them as well.
"You're right, they deserve peace after everything they've been through." Creon agreed with joy in his heart that they would find peace and harmony. "How do we do that?" he asked, looking back at Elyon.
"I have ordered a cargo ship to take them safely before this mission start. The captain is from Naboo, and he has guaranteed that he can carry anything. But he will probably be surprised to find out that he will be transporting members of this species." Elyon sighed, then she reached back to distant consciousness to pass on another message. She focused on the memories of the transport and their home planet, but added a glow to them and calm to understand that they will be safe. The next moment Elyon could feel the creatures negotiating, their final verdict was not agreed unanimously, but in the end they agreed to the move.
"So we'll return to the shuttle then you can send a signal to the cargo ship." He understood and looked at Elyon.
"Exactly. Can we go?" she answered Creon and then looked at the Vornskr, with whom she was in first contact. The Vornskr lowered his head again, making it clear that they were ready.
The two Jedi, followed by a pack, left their post and headed back to the shuttle. The luminescent insects began to dawn, they no longer shone around and hid. “Would you be here with them so they don't think we want to fool them?” Elyon asked her companion when they reached the shuttle.
"Yes, I'll wait with them. You're right, it'll be safer," Creon answered and looked at the creatures. Elyon ran to the shuttle to send a signal.
Before long, the engines of an approaching ship rumbled overhead. The small cargo ship made one small ring over and then landed just a few feet from the shuttle. Elyon stepped out of the shuttle, nodded at Creon, and went to talk to the ship's captain. Creon and the pack followed. The moment Creon saw the captain of the ship, Elyon was giving him many strips of credits.
"You didn't tell me I'd have to take these monsters." The captain, who was a man of a stockier figure and not in a very good mood, turned on her.
"They're not monsters," Creon said seriously before Elyon could speak. "They're creatures who need to be taken to their home planet. Plus, you've been paid well, as I see it," the soldier added a little haughtily and forcefully to indicate to the captain who was in command. After thinking for a while, the captain came to the conclusion that he would not win in the next confrontation, so he agreed.
It's time to say goodbye. We were honored to know you and share your consciousness, Elyon told the creature through the Force. At the same time, she sent this message through feelings of respect and esteem. The creatures responded with a sense of gratitude. The main Vornskr female approached them and the two Jedi stroked her affectionately.
You're welcome, we'll never forget you, Creon thought as he watched as the female led her pack into the hold. After they boarded, she looked at them once more and sent them a message through the Force. It was a wave of gratitude and hope. The hope she no longer hoped for...
Positive Takeaways
You quickly set the terrain up, as well as designated the beast you and your companion are tracking.
Can Be Improved
You could have used some proofing on sentence structure and word choice.
Also, vornskr is the name of the species, not the name of the individual, and isn’t a proper noun, so it should not be capitalized.