When Ciara had sent for Aru he never expected to be assigned a capture mission, let alone of a beast. It certainly wasn’t on his job description to be a zookeeper.
But nonetheless there he was, on the swamps of Uskil, looking for a pack of Mastiff phalones.
He had taken time to study the beasts on his way there. They were stealthy creatures, which waited for the best opportunity to pounce on their prey for the perfect kill.
Unfortunately for them, so was the Human. Or rather, that’s how he thought of himself.
Accompanied by his ever faithful R2 unit Tinker, Aru looked around the swampy maze he was in. Whenever a bubble would burst in the water, steam was released, followed by a putrid smell. It made Aru feel sick. He wasn’t really a fan of these type of operations.
“Can you scan the area?” the Gray Jedi asked his droid. “See if you can find any large lifeforms.”
Tinker beeped in compliance and a small antenna came out of his domed head. It rotated around a few times before retracting again into its hole. Then, the droid chirped a combination of low- and high-pitched whistles, and rotated its body towards the direction he had found something.
“Thank you bud,” he said, then adjusted his direction towards the denser part of the swamp.
Thicker vegetation covered this section of the marsh. The air was much more humid and heavier to breathe. Aru allowed his hand to rest on his lightsaber hilt, to assure himself he was prepared for anything that could try to surprise him.
But he wasn’t ready for this.
The Human came to a halt. And so did another Aru right in front of him. He shook his head quickly and blinked twice. He still saw himself, less than ten meters away.
The other Aru waved a sloppy salute, exactly the same way he did. Two fingers stretched on his right hand. Aru mimicked by instinct.
“I really need to stop drinking,” he stated.
“Hm. Yes you should,” the other Aru responded.
“And it speaks! Tinker, are you seeing this?”
His droid was confused. It didn’t understand why its master was so astonished for seeing another Human. It beeped in a very explicit manner to its master.
“What is it?” even though he couldn’t understand the little droid, he knew something was not right.
“Perhaps you should leave the poor droid alone, don’t you think?”
Aru lifted his head to face the other Aru, this time to find a completely different face in front of him. It was that of a man with smooth skin and long black hair which was tied in the back, forming a small tail. The most striking feature Aru noticed was his smile. It reeked of confidence. But it looked too mysterious. Too… fake…
“I’ve heard of you,” the Qel-Droman Aedile said. “I work with your brother.”
The man in front of him was Wyndell Tyris. Aru knew the name well. Their business branch was similar and he was regarded as a local legend in some places.
“For,” he corrected.
“What was that?”
“I’d say you work for my brother,” Wyndell explained. “Half-brother to be exact. But do tell, how is he?”
Aru focused on his senses. He was trying to feel any other illusion or trick the long haired man might be using. But it was to no avail. He couldn’t sense a thing.
“What are you doing here?” the Gray Jedi queried, ignoring the previous question.
“Same as you. Or should I say, doing your job.” Tyris pulled a datapad and peered over it quickly. “It pays well.”
“So you’re stealing my job?”
“No. As I said, I’m doing it for you.”
“And how do you plan on…” A loud shriek put an end to their banter. The noise came from the dense vegetation around them. Wyndell’s eyes quickly covered the surrounding area in search of possible places the beast could be hiding.
Aru, meanwhile, took the opportunity to vanish from view. The Force felt very strong in the area, which aided him in masking his presence.
Wyndell was surprised the Human managed to pull a trick he was very used to himself. Although, he was more attentive to the ever so slight rustle of the brushes nearby.
With a quick draw of one of his LL-30 Blaster Pistol, Wyndel pointed it in the air.
“Don’t move!” He said in a serious manner. The Defender had pinpointed Aru’s location. His movements were betrayed by the Force, for he too could sense them.
The Gray Jedi then appeared right in front of the blaster barrel. Astonish for having been found, something he wasn’t used to.
With a quick and sudden movement of his hand, Wyndell fired a single bolt from his blaster pistol. Aru didn’t move. He was sure it was it for him. But… he missed?
The Gray Jedi looked behind to find a dead beast less than two meters away from possibly killing him. It was of the same species as the ones Aru had been sent to capture.
Ciara was not going to be happy.
Aru chuckled. The near death experience had woken him up fully. He wasn’t sure how to deal with Wyndell right now, but the man had just saved him.
“Thank you, I guess,” he said.
“Don’t thank me. There’s at least twenty more around us right now.”
The confirmation of the claim came when several angry shrieks of different tones responded to the death of one of its species. Although hidden in the bushes, Aru could feel them, faintly. Almost like they emanated an aura that touched the soft tendrils of the Force. But, it was linked. They seemed connected, as if they were one.
“This is going to be fun,” the Human Aedile smirked, to which Wyndell reciprocated. The game was on.
The rustle in the brushes became louder as the hidden beasts moved about. Wyndell had both his blasters armed now and was following their movements the best he could. But there were far too many. Aru, on the other hand, armed only with his lightsaber, didn’t ignite it just yet. They weren’t supposed to kill the Mastiffs, only subdue them.
Both Humans were now back to back.
“We cannot kill them,” Aru explained, “the Headmistress wants them alive.”
One Mastiff charged from Wyndell’s right, to which the Human dodged and fired a bolt, missing on purpose. The beast then quickly scurried back into hiding.
Then another jumped in front of Aru and tried to claw him. It hit an invisible wall. The Gray Jedi had reacted by lifting a barrier around himself. Confused, and most of all angry for having missed its target, the Mastiff shrieked once more and ran away.
More came out of cover. They were getting more and more confident, taking advantage of their numbers. Six Mastiffs surrounded the Humans. They walked slowly in circles. The beasts looked to find an opening in their defence, while the Humans tried their best to maintain visual contact with all of them.
One Mastiff plunged towards Wyndell. The Defender sidestepped, but was forced to duck and roll away, as a second beast tried to gnaw him. He carefully fired at their feet, pushing them back. But his patience was running out. Soon there would be blood.
Meanwhile, Aru was dodging incoming claw attacks, swiftly as they came, using his strongest stances in Echani he knew. Both legs were bent and spread to maximize his base, but his weight was almost always on one of them, to allow the other to move freely and fast. With quick changes in the weight he was almost like dancing with the Mastiffs.
Withouth igniting his hilt, the Human punched hard in one Mastiff’s head. The shrieking beast lost balance, and its beak hit the floor. All the other beasts screamed in unisson.
“They’re somehow connected!” The Aedile yelled.
“I noticed.” Wyndell replied. “That’ll make things more interesting.”
Positive Takeaways
A nice introduction of the characters, as well as the beasts they're hunting. You managed to get Wyn's annoying demeanor across a little too well, even if I question some things (you work 'for' my brother confused me, since Marick is a subordinate of Aru).
Can Be Improved
You had some syntax issues related to tense, some misspellings, and a couple of missing commas. Your last bit of dialogue had a period rather than a comma as well, which is odd since I think it's the only time you messed that up throughout the whole post.
If you ever are unsure of the tense you should be using, say it aloud, see what makes sense.