At Shadow’s command, Kamjin let the chill powers of the Dark Side envelope him into the shadows as he flanked to the right the enraged Alpha Nydak. Shadow had correctly wagered not to engage the beast head-on. What surprised him was just how thick its hide was. Shadow’s white and red blades had barely blackened its left forearm. It barely noticed the attack as its massive forearms dug deep ruts into the soft swampy soil, spinning itself around for another pass.
As it roared, Eqkaesyr bounded at the Nydak’s head. It’s jaw, unhinged and sharpened teeth found perch upon its prey. The Nydak flailed, rocking back upon its shorter rear legs, it swiped at the Tuk’ata. Eqkaesyr was a trained hunter and used his body weight to counter the Nydak’s movements. His spiny tail snapped at the frustrated animal's forearms and body.
Seizing the opportunity, Shadow switched her lightsabers to a reverse grip and hunching over sprinted towards the Nydak. Eqkaesyr, sensing her intention through their bond, rotated his body to spring off with all four paws sending the beast sprawling backwards leaving its belly open for an attack.
Shadow swung both arms into her chest leaving glowing scars along the rib line. As Kamjin watched, concealed in the marshy brush, he shook the mud off his boots. I really wish Shadow had told me we were going out immediately to capture one of the creatures, as his mind momentarily wandered back to the events of the afternoon.
Shortly after landing with the first wave of troops, Shadow had contacted him to meet her. Sensing the urgency in her voice he had set off immediately, not realizing the coordinates were deep in the Uskil swamp.
Returning to the present, he saw Shadow’s move had left her at a disadvantage. The Nydak, no longer distracted by the Tuk’ata, brought its massive forearms crashing down. Whether by luck or Shadow’s skills at side-stepping her opponents the blows did not connect directly. However, as the ground rumbled her balance was thrown off. As she stumbled backwards, trusty Eqkaesyr sprinted back into the fray sinking its teeth into the rear leg of the Nydak.
Shadow took the opportunity to gain some distance, leaping backwards in a series of zig-zagging hops.
Kamjin took the opportunity to remove his command cloak and tunic. There was no need to get them dirty, nor was it wise to give a beast with massive arms and elongated middle claws an opportunity to grasp onto a fluttering cloak or his double-breast admiral’s tunic. He stretched, feeling the freedom of movement that his sleeveless formfit undershirt gave him.
Shadow, to her credit, had maneuvered the beast perfectly. It’s attention focused forward at Shadow’s dodging movements while bucking its rear legs against the continued gnawing attacks of Eqkaesyr. It was time for Kamjin to enter the fight.
Unclipping from his thighs both of his lightsabers he revealed himself as the crimson blade ignited in his right hand and his blue blade in his left. Rushing in from his flank position his blades connected in a criss-cross series of swings upon the beasts right forearm...to little effect. Sithspit, that’s right, it’s impossible to severe it’s arm Kamjin cursed remembering what Shadow had shared during their excursion. Kamjin assumed the glowing trails upon the beasts skin at least indicated it was taking some internal damage. Moving his attacks down the length of the forearm, he found one small weakness. As his crimson blade crossed back across the beast’s hand it connected with its claw, cleaving it off at the nunckle.
It howled in both surprise and pain, reeling to focus solely on Kamjin. Kamjin went to kick-off to flip backwards when his boots, lacking in tread for this terrain and already caked in mud, bit into the soil, sending him falling to the ground on his rear. Only years of training allowed him to hold onto his lightsabers, extinguishing the blades as he fell. His hands took the brunt of the fall. As the beast lunged on top of him, Eqkaesyr attacked again from the back, biting into its neck.
This momentary opening was all Kamjin needed to pull his hands out of the muck, leaving his lightsaber stuck for the moment in the ground, spreading his fingers wide he let loose an assault of Force Lightning. As the electricity struck the Nydak, Eqkaesyr leapt off nanoseconds before they struck. A testament to its familiarity with Sith and the Dark Side of the Force.
Dazed and confused by the seering lightning dancing over its body the Nydak leapt into the tree line. As it grasped the branch with its injured hand, it howled in pain and dropped to a lower branch and swung with its other hand deeper into the swamp.
Shadow lowered her blades and attached them back to her armored belt.
“Are you alright,” she asked?
Kamjin, hunched over extracting his lightsabers from the boggy ground, replied, “I should be fine.”
Shadow turned and gave him an inquisitive look, “I was asking Eqkaesyr.” She was kneeling beside her beloved Tuk’ata petting its fur and looking him over for any signs of serious injury.
“Ah, yes...well, I’m certain Eqqy is fine.”
Both Eqkaesyr and Shadow snapped their heads to look directly at Kamjin with a piercing stare. “There are no nicknames for Eqkaesyr.”
Kamjin held up his hands, with the dripping wet muddy sabers clutched, showing he surrendered the point.
Clipping them back to his thighs he lamented, “Those are going to be worthless for a while until they dry out. I haven’t had a need for insulation from watery conditions like this.”
“It’s alright,” Shadow handed him her Sith Dagger, “I’m sure you’ll be fine with this.” Kamjin took the blade and slid it into his belt. Looking in the direction of the Nydak, he could see damage to the trees and plants where its massive frame had carved a path.
“We’d better get going,” Kamjin said, “The sun is nearly down, and I don’t want to be out too long in the night. Who knows what other predators are riled up having that thing crashing through their terrority.”
“You’re right, we need to find it again quickly.” Shadow stood and gave Eqkaesyr one last loving pet behind the ear. “Eqkesyr, seek. Do not attack. Stay hidden” Kamjin almost believed it bowed in acknowledgement to its master’s orders then, just as before, it was off on the hunt again.
This sentence highlights what I really liked about this post. It was interesting reading about Shadow stepping outside of her Empress role into something in which she’s surprisingly more comfortable. She has a unique skill set with Survival and Creature Handling that you don’t get to read often, particularly not with a character really using those skills to hunt with a trained tuk’ata, and you did a good job of writing those. Good work!
Room for Growth
Unfortunately, you had one major realism detractor in this post that, based on the way you have your sheet set up, I think may have been due to a misunderstanding of a feat. Shadow is dual wielding lightsabers throughout the match, but you don’t have the Dual Wielding skill on her snapshot. You do have the Jar’Kai Technique feat, but that only replaces your Dual Wielding skill with your Primary Martial Art when you are wielding Bladed Weapons.
A weapon’s category is listed on the possession, and while a lightsaber does have a “blade” of sorts, it is a Lightsaber by category and not a Bladed Weapon, so your Jar’Kai feat is really not helping Shadow at all since she doesn’t use Bladed Weapons (+0 on your snapshot).
As far as syntax, this was a very clean read with just a few errors that stood out: a misspelling of “disturbed” in your first paragraph, “standing guarding outside” instead of “standing guard outside” and a duplicated word in “pointed in the direction of the habitat where the Nydak’s habitat was reported to be.”
Also, a fun capitalization note. You correctly capitalized Alpha Nydak because it is a specific subspecies of a nydak and thus a proper noun, but you incorrectly capitalized nydak and tuk’ata, which are generic species and not proper nouns (think German Shepherd Dog vs. dog).