On the one hand, the Queen was now in play on the holochess board, which saved them the trouble of tracking her down. On the other, the tides had shifted rather quickly from a two-on-one advantage to a Force-sensitive lylek against a lone half-Hapan.
Fortunately, one of the operators controlling the arena must have recognized the sudden shift of power, and raised a short wall of stone from the ground between the lylek Queen and the Twi’lek. A long nozzle opened from the sidewall of the colosseum and spat out a gout of flame, forcing the Queen to hiss and skitter backwards on its spear-tipped legs. She turned her attention to the silly contraption, which gave Marick an opening.
Fighting against his primal instinct to rush over to his fallen ally, Tyris instead put some distance between himself and their new foe. As he ran, the Master recalled his telekinetic lightsabers and deactivated them before clipping them to his belt. Similarly, he slung the static pike over his shoulders to keep his hands free.
From his perch on the Arconae’s shoulder, Biddy’s photoreceptors lingered longingly on the Twi’lek friend they had left behind. The BD-unit whistled a soft, somber beep that Marick did not require a translator for to understand.
“Biddy, go. I’ll catch up,” Tyris whispered to the little droid, hoping the task would keep him ready for when he needed him. The BD-unit nodded his blocky head in affirmation before scampering off across the arena, bouncing from obstacle to obstacle with pointed determination. It was only then that Marick realized that a faint sandstorm had kicked up, gusts of wind creating a faint layer of distortion.
Perfect, Marick thought as he pulled the hood of his armorweave cloak tighter to his head.
With the droid gone, the half-Hapan’s body faded from sight over the span of a few elongated heartbeats. It had taken the former Shadow time to adjust, but he was now confident in moving again while using Force cloak. The Arcanist just had to maneuver more deliberately than he had in the past.
With time running short, Marick positioned himself just outside the range of a trio of conductive rods that appeared to be waiting for some kind of motion to trigger their cage-like trap. Once behind cover of a stray boulder, he released his Force veil to regain his full focus. He fished out the glowrod from his belt. He carefully rolled the field tool behind the trap and then did the same with each of his lightsaber hilts.
With those in place, Marick cloaked himself once again and then doubled back towards where Biddy had roosted protectively over an immobile Tasha’Vel. He risked a glance towards the lyek Queen, only to see her rip off a second flame-nozzle that had appeared from the colosseum wall, crumpling it into shrapnel with her powerful tentacles. He knelt down beside the prone Twi’lek, lowered his Force cloak, and cast his gaze back towards the electric coils in the distance.
No time, need to do it now, Marick rationalized as he squinted through the stinging sweat dripping down into his eyes. Reaching out with the Force across the length of the arena, Marick took hold of his two saber hilts and the glowrod resting in the sand behind the static coil trap. He levitated the lightsabers up into the air and triggered the activators, twin beams of azure light springing to life through the haze of sand.
Foolish boy, your bitter swords of light won’t help you either.
Marick lowered himself into a zen-like state of mind that allowed him to ignore the mental intrusion. Even the faintest of reaction to the Queen’s probing would give away his position. So the Master concentrated solely on the task of keeping the twin sapphire sabers and glowrod hovering in place, as if the Arconae was standing his ground and wielding them defiantly.
Most likely due to the obfuscation from the clouds of windblown sediment, the Queen took the bait, stomping her way slowly but surely towards the half-Hapan’s levitated lightsabers and glowrod beacon. To further sell it, Marick made a quick gesture with his hands, puppeting the dual lightsabers and glowrod to make it look like they were now running away in fear. The giant lylek shrieked with delight, further lured by the thrill of the chase...
...and carried its full weight onto the hidden pressure plate between the electric coils. Golden, fluorescent light erupted from the coils as tendrils of static energy formed a triangular link around the lylek Queen. Torrents of high-voltage, electric current singed her long, spindly limbs.
A siren scream filled the colosseum, sending shivers down the crowd’s spines. Even Marick felt his own focus break, which reminded him the trap would not likely hold the Queen for long.
The Master assessed Tasha’Vel’s status with surgical precision as his hands instinctually moved to the inner folds of his cloak to pull out his antidote kit. He pressed two fingers to her neck, timing her pulse, and idly started to run a few calculations relating to body mass and the wound itself, doing some guess work as to how potent the lylek venom was.
The tricky thing with treating venom wounds was not that there was no antidote, more that every creature carried a different strain or variant and there was no magical cure-all one could carry.
“Mar...ick. Can’t...let...her win. Our...daughters...”
Marick nodded his head so she could see he was following her train of thought. “Tell me more about her,” Tyris used an old clinical technique to try and keep her awake and attentive.
“She’s only three,” the Twi’lek’s voice was barely a whisper. “Shorter lekku than mine...but has her father’s hazel eyes...”
While Versea continued on about her daughter, Marick stuck a thin needle into a visible vein on the woman's wrist. In the same smooth motion he deftly depressed the plunger and sent one of his homemade antitoxins into her bloodstream. If Tasha’Vel registered the pinprick, she offered no reaction to it. After a moment, he saw her left hand start to twitch.
“Hey, look at that,” Marick pointed at the Twi’lek’s hand. “I guess Lynna'Vel really wants to see her mother again. Keep thinking about her, and keep fighting against the venom. I’ll see if I can distract the Queen a bit more, and then try and get help.”
There was no telling how quickly or effectively it would work. Still, it should have kept the venom from reaching her respiratory system, which would have been very, very bad. He debated trying to heal the Sadowan with the Force, but there were just too many variables to account for.
“Don’t forget about yours, Marick,” Tasha reminded him with a faint smile as she closed her eyes and tensed her muscles, ready to fight her next battle internally.
Biddy beeped excitedly and hopped up and down in place. Glancing at the droid, Marick spared a moment to think of little Kirra, bundled up in blankets and trying to grab at Atyiru’s curly locks. She tended to have better success with his hair, for some reason. Just as a small smile started to tug at the corner of his lips, a tentacle wrapped itself around the half-Hapan’s waist and jerked him up into the air.
The sandstorm had also subsided, clearing visibility of the arena and its occupants.
Impudent child, you will pay for your deception!
The Queen’s voice roared in his mind, deafening out all other thoughts. She had trampled over the coils of the electric cage and the giant lylek sported scorched scoring marks across its entire cadre of limbs, mandibles, tail, and tentacles. It whipped the diminutive half-Hapan around like a ragdoll, before hurling him into the barrier that barred the amphitheater from the arena below. A hairline fracture formed from the impact.
“Ow,” Marick grunted as pain blossomed from his shoulder and stretched across the rest of his torso. He fell to the arena floor with dull thump. As he lay there, he tried to gather his wits, but all he could manage was a bloody cough that stained the sand beneath him. He heard the Queen’s staccato steps approaching and knew he had little time to heal. So he split the difference and reached out into the Living Force and drew on its fount of ethereal energy to refuel his reserves.
For a moment, the Master felt a second wind of vigor course through his veins. Unfortunately, he was not able to do much with it as the Queen grabbed hold of him with a seared but functioning tentacle as she lifted him up into the air. The giant lylek lashed the half-Hapan into the protective barrier once again, adding yet another imperceptible crack to the reinforced transparisteel.
This time, instead of letting her prey go, the Queen whipped her whippy tail around and then stabbed the tip into Marick’s abdomen. The crowd gasped as more blood spouted from Maricks gaping mouth. She tossed him unceremoniously down to the arena floor and started to turn away. The static pike over his shoulder fell off and landed somewhere in the sand.
Now be a good child and die while I finish matters with the daughter of Rhyloth...
Bloodied and battered, Marick slowly pushed himself back up to his feet. He swayed in place, limbs loose and shaky, but his too-blue eyes burned with grim determination. He could feel the venom coursing through his bloodstream. The retired Voice, however, had spent almost his entire adult life conditioning his body to the various types of poisons and toxins found throughout the Galaxy.
It allowed him, at least, to siphon the Force and bend it to his will. The torn tendons in his shoulder began to knit back together as a wave of healing energy wove through his body, gradually giving him the strength to call out to his trusted droid, who he had spotted approaching.
Marick extended his hand out to the side as he otherwise stared down the advancing lylek.
The Queen reeled around and glowered at the half-Hapan with the fury of a thousand suns. Emerald skin still smoldering, the giant lylek slowly stalked back towards Marick.
*More, still? After I’m done with you, I will kill your partner, your friends, and then, when I find your precious little daughter, I will devour her slowly so that you know the pain I’ve felt as you destroyed my children.”
Life before death, Marick responded with his thoughts alone. He burned the singular image of living to protect his daughter into his mind, and continued to hold his hand out to the side. To that, he needed to keep the giant lylek’s attention. To keep focused, he began to count out heartbeats.
Four...five...six
The giant lylek closed in as a familiar string of concerned beeps crossed his awareness. Out of his peripheral view, Marick noted the loyal BD-unit sprinting towards him, opening the hidden compartment in his base.
...seven...
With a whisper of will, Marick summoned the shoto lightsaber concealed inside his BD-unit to his hand. The azure blade sprung to life just in time to parry a stabbing strike from one of the Queen’s spear-tipped legs. Instinct and reflex alone allowed the Master to sidestep the giant lylek’s next attack and, just as Tasha’Vel had earlier, cut off the tip of her barbed-tail.
The Queen shrieked in bone-curdling agony and retaliated with a grasping tentacle. Tyris slipped past the attempted grapple, but his muscles were starting to feel slow and heavy, as if he was swimming through molasses.
Nevertheless, he persisted. He held his shoto lightsaber out defiantly, shuffled his feet, and focused purely on defense maneuvers. He simply needed to survive, in the faint hope of stumbling onto a solution.
“You forgot about me, schutta!” a familiar voice rang out.
The Queen spun about, just in time to catch a blade of plasma to its split set of insectoid eyes. She hissed and writhed as her vision left her, thrashing around blindly.
Tasha’Vel Versa stood before the Queen with her hand extended, recalling the blade to her hand from its simple, straightforward throwing arc. She glanced over at Marick, smiled, and tossed him her own lightsaber.
The Master caught hold of Tasha’Vel’s saber with the Force, and then sent his own off with it to finish off the giant lylek. Plasma rent through hide and flesh like a butcher block, until the husky shell of the lylek Queen fell to the arena floor in a bloody pulp.
With their tasks complete, Marick recalled his shoto lightsaber and returned Tasha’Vel’s to her.
“Check mate,” Tasha’Vel breathed, muscles trembling, as she slowly made her way over towards Marick.
“Thanks for the save,” Marick replied, taking the opportunity to gradually heal his wounds. He knew there was only so much that even the Force could do, however. They both needed medical attention, and fast.
“Parents stick together,” the Sadowan replied with a faint smile, extending a hand.
The Arconan took the hand and started to return the smile, until the sound of shrieking lyleks filled the arena. On the farthest end of the arena, two more lyleks burst through a sinkhole.
“You’ve got to be kidding me,” Versea murmured.
Marick’s usually passive face flickered with something dark. He’d had enough.
Turning towards the transparisteel barrier protecting the crowd, Marick floated his shoto lightsaber over to the glass and slowly willed the plasma blade to start cutting into the existing cracks that had formed earlier.
“What are you doing, stop this at once!” a panicked, high-pitched voice shouted over the coliseums speakers.
Marick turned and stared directly into one of the macro lens cameras feeding into the jumbo vidscreens.
“End the experiment, or I will shatter this wall,” Marick spoke plainly. There was no actual threat or malice in his voice, no flex of authority or implied air of intimation. He simply said the words with resolve and conviction, and there was little doubt to anyone listening that he would not follow through with his promise.
An anxious aura permeated from the amphitheater, before the patrons began to flee towards the exits. The scientists watched in abject horror, clutching their tools and equipment.
“This is not a game, and you would be wise to do as he says,” Tasha’Vel added her voice, hefting her Mythosaur axe up and readying it, as if she were going to swing it at the barrier as well.
Silence spread. The lyleks skittered closer.
Then the gates at either end of the arena opened up and squads of Iron Legion personnel poured in to take down the remaining beasts.
Marick relaxed, recalled his lightsaber, and then simply fell backwards onto the arena floor. He lay there, staring up, regulating his breathing with some help from the Force. Tasha’Vel Versea joined him, her lekku framing her face, as the two parents took the moment of silence together before deciding to get back up.
Positive Takeaways
Parental bonding is a rare sight to see around here. You introduced not only the creature, a freakish lylek that I wouldn't want to meet in a dark alley after you described it but also the mutation of being at least telepathic. Noooope. Do not want.
The banter was nice, the setup was as well!
Can Be Improved
Proofing! You had some minor spelling errors (everyday instead of every day, etc) and missed a few spaces and commas, especially after the word ‘however’ consistently. Also, while not incorrect it can help your Story score, using italics to denote thoughts to avoid confusing the reader can be very helpful, much like you did with the lylek’s telepathy. God, I hope that’s telepathy and it can’t actually talk. That would be more terrifying.
When the lylek first showed up you capped the name as Lylek, which is incorrect, but did it right later, then wrong again. Species names aren't proper nouns (I know we float on that with character species, it’s...wonky) but most importantly is to be consistent.
Other than that, your post lacked conflict or action, which didn't help your Story score.