Sweat beaded across his forehead. It dripped down from the matted strands of his straight, ashen hair. His breathing was heavy but steady, and on the surface he looked calm and ready. Adrenaline coursed and flowed freely through his veins as he closed the distance between himself and his Aedile.
As he ran, the Arcanist dropped an anchor into the slipstream of the living Force and tapped into its ethereal energy field. Never slowing his steps, Marick drew from its wellspring to rapidly restore his own reserves.
With no obstacles left in his path, Tyris had plenty of time to intercept the giant krykna. His levitating lightsabers lifted higher into the air on either side of him as if their telekinetic holds had been reinvigorated. He started to charge the static pike and honed in on the encroaching mutant arachnoid.
"Beep-boo!"
From his perch on his master’s shoulder, Biddy chirped and gestured with one of his plated feet towards the stands. Marick usually was able to translate the B1-unit’s intent through context clues, but did not have time to piece this one together. The Arconae did turn his head towards the crowd, curious...
And then nearly crashed, face first, into a spire of sand that shot up from the ground like a burst, oversized pipeline.
Preternatural reflexes and a pinch of premonition through the Force allowed the half-Hapan to toe-tap, pivot, and spin away from the obstacle without breaking stride. A second sand stream spouted up a few meters ahead, but Marick was ready this time and juked adroitly around it.
Out of the corner of his eye, Marick spotted one of the scientists standing close to the barrier between the arena and the amphitheater. Close enough that his fat nose was pressing into the glass as his beady eyes flitted between the arena and his oversized data pad. His pudgy fingers were tapping away at...something. Whatever it was, it made the Human lick his lips with excitement and a snicker.
As he deftly dodged a third geyser of gushing sand, Marick came to the conclusion that the operator controlling the arena’s plethora of mechanical traps and terrain tools was most likely the scientist in the stands.
He could deal with that later. For now, he had two directives—protect the Aedile, and kill the giant spider. Then, kill more spiders. Simple enough.
Marick’s lightsabers darted ahead of him as he directed the first azure blade towards the towering creatures's eyes while the second blade angled for its legs. The creature moved a spindly leg in front of its face to deflect the first attack and let the second connect with one of its other legs. Instead of the expected screeching and spray of ichor, however, the giant krykna’s hide repelled the bite of the lightsaber.
Lovely.
Aru managed to down a fourth krykna with a cleverly placed blaster bolt to the eye. “Hah, get some!” he hooted, before nearly tripping over the corpse of the previous arachnoid he had slain. As Aru flailed his arms to the sides, one of the creatures cleverly latched onto the Human’s arm and wrenched away the lightsaber gripped in his hand.
“Hey! That’s mine!” the Aedile shouted as he twisted and fired a point-blank shot into the retreating krykna’s head. A sixth krykna hissed as it leapt in front of its comrade and sacrificed its own hide to take the hit. Law depressed the trigger and mercilessly unloaded into the creature's face until nothing was left but pulpy slime and ichor.
While he was in the clear, for now, he was now without his trusted weapon. Did these stupid spiders have any idea how expensive lightsabers were? Tali was going to literally kill him if he somehow survived this.
That was when he looked up to see the giant krykna for the first time. He watched as two magically guided lightsabers bounced fruitlessly off the creature's evolved hide.
“Meep,” he squeaked. Tinker, his astromech, beeped nervously in agreement.
Marick’s lightsabers had little effect against the giant krykna’s hide, and now it was close enough to try and skewer him with one of its spindly, spear-tipped legs. Fortunately, despite its size, it was not all that fast.
Marick was.
The Master timed his bursts of speed just before the point of impact, weaving and swerving through the krykna’s staccato stomping of its stiletto-pointed legs. Always just enough to avoid certain death while still conserving his energy. Above, his drifting lightsabers continued to harass the mutant arachnoid's head from different angles, keeping its attention split while Marick searched for an opening.
“Hey, ugly, have a taste of this!” a familiar voice called out, accompanied by a salvo of blaster fire.
Marick risked a glance towards his Aedile and would have sighed if he could spare the breath. Still, it did seem to draw the giant krykna’s focus. The Arcanist saw an opening and took it.
“Biddy, go,” Tyris commanded. The little droid saluted with its foot and then bounded off towards Aru and Tinker to lend his support.
With the droid gone, Marick bent at the knees and then launched himself up into the air with an augmented boost. His armorweave cloak billowed behind him until it finally flew from his shoulders and was gone with the wind. The amplified height of his narrow arc allowed him to safely crest over the giant krykna’s limbs and come down at a hard angle for the top of its head.
The Master let out a defiant shout as he rammed the static pike through the creature's eye and straight through to the back of its skull. At the same moment, he discharged the stored energy in the weapon’s tip. The titanic arachnoid started to convulse and twitch and spasm as its limbs lost their virility and coordination and caused it to plummet bonelessly towards the sandy arena.
Marick rode the creature on its way down to the ground. He ripped the static pike free, vaulted away, and then landed smoothly a few meters away. A moment later, the rest of the giant krykna’s body crashed into the arena floor, sending up a cloud of sand and sediment.
“Woah,” Aru breathed. Tinker let out a whistle of appreciation. Biddy beeped excitedly as he leapt up onto Law’s shoulder and opened the storage compartment concealed within its chestplate. Aru blinked a few times but then shrugged and stuck his hand in. He pulled out a shoto lightsaber hilt.
“What’s this?” Aru asked as he inspected the new weapon and then activated its cerulean blade. “Ooo...it’s smaller in my hand than I’m used to, but, hey, it’ll do.”
Tinker whined in what could be considered a droid-like sigh. Biddy whirred excitedly, happy to have helped.
“Hey, thanks Marick, but I totally had things under control.”
The half-Hapan fixed his Aedile with a flat stare. “Mhm.” His eyes shifted to the stands where he finally spotted the cluster of Arconans that had gathered. He neglected to see their Quaestor or other Summit members, but he did spot a familiar, blindfolded face. She had an unusual frown fixed upon her lips, but when she seemed to sense his attention land on her, it changed to a bright and vibrant smile. Lovelier than the moon.
“You can borrow it but I will need it back,” Marick gestured at the shoto lightsaber as he turned away from the stands and continued to assess the developing situation. “There are bound to be more.”
“Okay, fair, but don’t—”
The ground began to shake and tremble. Without any further warning, a square cube of maybe twenty meters sunk down into the ground like a rogue turbo lift, plunging the two Arconans and their droids into a dark pit.
Marick’s eyes struggled to adjust to the change in lighting. The operators clearly knew enough about the former Voice of the Brotherhood’s heritage, because even the faint light from the arena above started to dim. The glow of Marick’s lightsabers and Aru’s borrowed shoto were the only light sources now, making it nearly impossible for the half-Hapan to see.
Aru pressed the frame of his blaster pistol against the side of his head in disbelief. “What the ever loving f—”
“—stay calm,” Marick cut the Aedile’s complaint short with a steady stage whisper. “I’m going to get you out of here, first. I need you to trust me, though.” He recalled both lightsabers but left them hovering in place. He even made a hand gesture to both of them as if he were telling a tooka to stay. He then looked upward and made a few quick mental calculations.
“Sure but what does—”
Marick grabbed the Aedile by the robes and pulled him close, as if to give him a rough embrace.
“Hey, I know I’m your commanding officer, but buy me a drink first at least—” the Human’s quip was interrupted by a sudden case of vertigo as the two Arconans lurched up into the air thanks to an amplified push from Marick’s jump. They barely made it over the lip of the square pits edge, and rolled unceremoniously together before splaying out on top of each other.
As they both scrambled back to their feet—Marick doing so with much more grace—the lighting had indeed seemed to shift towards the hues of a desert night. The temperature, fortunately, did not seem to drop in kind.
While the Arcanist looked around to get an idea of what else they would be facing, he once again reached out into the living Force that permeated plentifully from the planet Arx to briskly refuel his power.
“Wait, we forgot about Tinker!” Aru exclaimed. Biddy, who had been smart enough to latch onto Marick’s shoulder, beeped in concern. Tyris glanced back down towards the stray droid, just as the clicking and clattering of krykna could be seen and heard.
“He’s just a dr...” Marick started to say before his eyes found Atyiru looking down at him. She was not frowning, this time, but had a somber look he knew to be one of determination. He could have been imagining it, but he thought he heard her voice in his head, faint but radiant.
I will protect those who cannot protect themselves...
Marick nodded to her, and while he knew she could not see it, he knew she could sense it. Then, without another word, he jumped back down into the pit.
The crowd reacted to that one, that was for sure, as a collective gasp seemed to resonate throughout the amphitheater.
The half-Hapan landed and quickly grabbed a hold of the astromech droid. Tinker started to protest, but Marick waved a hand and the droid started to float upward. He rose slowly at first, but then accelerated closer to the midway point before being launched the last stretch of the distance and over the edge.
That left Marick, alone, surrounded by an unknown amount of krykna.
“Hmm,” the Arconae murmured as his dual telekinetic lightsabers started to circle him protectively like a pair of sapphire shields. At the same time, he readied his static pike and tapped further into the Force to augment his vision against the dark.
Even an Elder Force Disciple would not be able to maintain this battle tactic for long. At least now, there was no reason for him to hold anything back. No politics or dramatics. The rank of Master had not been handed to him. No, Marick Tyris had earned it, step by step, punch for punch. His hands were soaked permanently with the blood of everything he had done to rise above his station.
So for now, all Marick could do was simply push past his limits, and go beyond them.
Positive Takeaways
You made me laugh out loud (and literally say, "mood," at Tinker), which is always good and worth noting in writing. Besides that, your descriptions are rich, vivid, and loaded with alliteration — which will never not be brilliant — and your post itself takes the time to solidly depict both Aru and Marick in their personalities and their Skills/Powers/Aspects.
In addition to the swift but substantive setup and generous action, your posts were also very clean. I only caught one or two errors.
Can Be Improved
The couple of Syntax errors I mentioned were simple: a missing closing quotation on dialogue, a randomly capitalized "Telekinetic" mid-sentence, and using "suspiration" as a feeling Marick has when the noun form, as you know, is a long sigh. I assume you meant exasperation or something similar.
The only other caution I would give here is that Aru as a character did very little — involving combat or "screen time" once the spiders came out — until the very end, and it was a short moment for him. Compared to Marick's several action paragraphs, his contribution seemed lopsided. It was still present, which ticks the box for any opening ACC post, but in the context of your writing, I suppose I as a reader just wanted to have more to keep reading.