"Hold still, dear. Just a little more."
"Atyiru...that's enough already."
"I say when it's enough, thank you very much. Now, come on. Lean forward."
Marick let out a breath and obliged. Atyiru reached out and cupped his cheeks, gently massaging. Then she moved to his jaw, forehead, throat. The back of his neck. And of course, over his nose and all around his ears.
"Tsk. Let me get the tips."
"You have already applied more than a sufficient amount—"
"Give me your earsies or so help me Ashla and Bogan."
This time he did sigh, but it was a fond thing, just for her. She beamed back, and dabbed an extra dollop of the sunscreen she was wielding like a weapon on the tip of his nose.
Were he not a master of controlling his own body, down to every steeled nerve, he might have sneezed. As it was, he pushed his ashen hair back to give her better access and held still while she smeared more lotion over the very tops of the shells of his ears. He felt a little glob drip inside and nearly twitched violently.
"We're not in the swamps., dear. You'll get sunburn, and we can't have that. People like to wave it off all willy-nilly, but those are first degree burns, you know! The epidermal layer is destroyed, and your body becomes dehydrated, and then blood oxygenation is diminished and it's no good at all. There! All done. Was that so bad?" Atyiru asked, tutting at him and turning away. "Biddy, sweetberry, come here!"
"I have a hood. And I did not say it was bad in the first place."
"Well you thought it."
Marick did not deign to prod that particular trap and instead watched as his little droid left its perch atop a nearby crate to hop over to the Miraluka. She crouched down, smiling and cooing, and squirted more of the UV-absorbing lotion into her palm and dabbed it onto the top of Biddy's "head." The droid gave a few happy beeps.
"Beep!" Atyiru responded gleefully. Biddy didn't seem offended by whatever it was she said in her ignorance, just beeping back. "There you go, dear! All set and protected!"
If the Hapan smiled softly at his wife's behavior, well, there was only Biddy there to see it.
"Too bad Wynnie isn't here. He could surely find Biddy an appropriate hat to trade for."
"Don't enable him."
"With permission."
The Hapan snorted quietly, flipping his hood back up as his droid jumped up onto Atyiru's shoulder and then onto his. His partner turned her attention lastly to Ivoshar, who sat patiently as ever, eyes alert, staring fixedly at the door while his ears swiveled around to each sound the two Near-Humans could not hear. The Miraluka stroked over the cythraul's scarred muzzle and hugged into his broad chest. Ivoshar slotted his nose briefly between her shoulder and ear, rumbling.
"I know, my little wind, but Marry's here. I'll be perfectly alright, you see? And perhaps have a word with Ciara or that Rajhin fellow about this 'no pets in the stands' policy. First of all, rude. Secondly, discriminatory against all animal species! And thirdly, rude again. Even if they do not understand you, Ivo, that is no excuse to be so xenophobic in their thinking…"
"Atyiru," Marick reminded her. "We are already twelve minutes and forty-nine seconds late."
"Yes, yes." She gave Ivoshar one last pat, the two of them pressing their foreheads together. The cythraul barked low at the Hapan, who inclined his head. They both knew how hard it could be, keeping their person safe. "Don't worry so, little wind. I sense the violence too. We're here to help. I'm going to make everything alright."
Ivoshar only grunted.
The former assassin sympathized with this as well. He had no desire to be present, but Ciara had asked for help, specifically with healing, and Atyiru, being Atyiru, had answered. She had even asked Zujenia to babysit their newborn, so that both of them could attend. The trip from the Dajorra system was the quietest, longest sleep either of them had gotten in a month.
Leaving the cythraul behind with a foreboding half-growl, half-whine, the couple proceeded out into the hallway an attendant had earlier indicated would lead them to the arena proper. As they moved, the sounds of shouting and stamping and roaring grew louder and louder, shaking the very walls, vibrating the air. The thudding was monstrous. Surely the crowd could not make so much noise? But it seemed so. The stifling air prickled with anxious, indeed violent energy, and Marick felt it on his skin and in his bones, the Force humming with it. Atyiru's stride was steady, her head lifted and grin bright, but she gripped the edge of his cloak, and he knew how much it shook her, that hunger and restlessness. How much she loathed the sport and glorified battle.
They finally emerged out of an enormous, sunlit archway that spewed them into the uppermost ring of the stands. Briefly, the glare had him squinting. He blinked once to recover, and his too-blue eyes darted about, scanning.
And then everything became absolutely wrong, because he absorbed then in a crystalline second the scene before them.
Stands full of onlookers. Screens splayed with vidfeeds. Cam droids in the air. Equipment everywhere. Banners, whiffs of smoke, shouts. The stink of many sweating bodies. The stink of burnt flesh, blood, and ozone. Screaming. Cheering.
Roaring.
He knew about Ciara's creatures and her experiments. He had been drawn into culling some of them while attending to a meeting with Archenscova at the Consul's order — and because he had owed Lucine a favor. He had known the Shadow Academy was recruiting Arconans and anyone else who would come to recapture the escaped beasts for further study.
He had not known the Headmistress would be including colosseum combat in her studies.
He had not known there would be creatures in distress and under duress here today. Creatures such as, apparently, a behemoth krayt dragon.
Here, with his extremely martyrdom-inclined wife.
He had miscalculated. And he knew what was coming the moment she stiffened at the sound of another roar.
"Marick," the Miraluka whispered, grave. She had gone mountain-still beside him. "Marick, it is being hurt."
"Atyiru..." he began.
"They're hurting it."
Please, he almost said, but didn't. A part of him — the part that had died when she did, that was still grieving — had hoped motherhood would make Atyiru more inclined to caution, to putting Kirra first, and thus to being more careful with herself. But Atyriu was Atyiru. She would put no one else above any other, and she would always put others first.
Atyiru was Atyiru. And he loved her. So instead of insisting otherwise, he merely sighed and flicked back his shaed, the cloak revealing one of his visibly-placed lightsabers.
"Let us take care of it, then," the Hapan told her, and watched the Miraluka vault forward without even a heartbeat of hesitation, landing graceful as a dancer several rows down between a group of startled spectators and bounding across the seats. He took off after her at a silent, deadly sprint. It was strange to be visible, doing so. To be unmasked by the Force and under the shining sun, plain in view as he deftly leapt in a supernatural arc straight down to the bottom of the stands and began running, perfectly balanced, along the rim of the railing. But it was not a terrible thing, for the red-resin rings they carried bonded them in blood, and he could follow that tether anywhere.
He would follow her anywhere.
Atyiru cut a serpentine path down the stands, parallel to his straight one, and met him at the edge of one of the massive sweeps of stairs that lead up to the apex and down into the colosseum's innards. With barely a pause for breath, they both were moving again, his pace matched to hers, down to the edge of the viewing area, right up to the lip of the pit.
And then Atyriu just jumped.
"Biscuits," Marick actually cursed, just like she would have. But he was already outstretching a hand habitually to guide the motion of his telekinetic grip, shaping his will to catch her. The Miraluka slowed to a near stop in mid-air, as if an angel unto earth, toes pointed down and arms outstretched, and then dropped the last few feet into a crouch when Marick released her. He followed, throwing himself out into gravity's mercy with the Force flooding through his every bit of sinew, empowering his leap and flexing with the absorbed recoil of his fall as he met the hard-packed ground with barely a thump, crouched beside his wife. His dark shaed settled around him. Her brilliantly-colored sashes and white robes billowed in the breeze. They stood in unison, and Atyiru belted out as loud as she could.
"ENOUGH! THIS IS OVER! NO ONE IS HURTING ANYONE OR ANYTHING ELSE!"
Her voice, powerful as it was, shaking him to his bones as it always had, did not carry far in the immense bowl of the bloodbath. Not over the roaring of the crowd, excited for sport, and not over the roaring of the krayt dragon or the shouting of those fighting it.
"CIARA TEARNAN ROTHWELL TARENTAE!" she tried again, and Marick reached out and gently turned her by the arm to face the direction of the nearest cam droid, her blindfolded face filling a screen, shouting at the Headmistress in her box seat far away. "CALL THIS OFF, NOW!"
No response. Either the Dark Councilor did not care or was unimpressed with the insolence of her guest. A wave of her olive hand announced for the trial to continue, and the announcer was busily bellowing about two new figures unexpectedly joining the fray. Marick paid neither her nor anyone else watching any mind. He had already catalogued their value as threats and dismissed them for their relative lack of exigence. His quicksilver gaze instead assessed the area in a matter of heartbeats.
The arena pit was the scene following some sort of slow massacre. Here and there lay pieces of bodies, humanoid and animal: the foreleg of an acklay, the foot of, perhaps, a Devoarian, given the silver-hued blood trail. Some wounds on the corpses were evidently from lightsabers while others hinted at the traps he knew riddled the Colosseum: the smoldering scorch on a softly-keening rancor from liquid flames; the remains of a demolished floor panel that would have been electrified; a harpooned mastiff phalone down in an open spike pit. His too-blue eyes counted casualties and countermeasures one by one and still the former Voice and Combat Master knew there were many more waiting for them and the dragon both. There were no other beasts currently left standing — perhaps demolished by the dragon, perhaps by previous combatants — but a straggling of three humanoids in arms and armor remained. One of them outstretched a hand towards the krayt and lampooned it with an explosion of lightning, causing the animal to bellow and swipe out with one massive forelimb.
Then there was the various recording equipment. Brand new for the occasion, the chromium lot glittered in juxtaposition to the filth-smeared walls and floor. It would likely be sending feeds back to the control room, where the technicians that ran the traps were, or directly to Ciara herself. He knew what he would have done to secure the data. But it did not matter. Not at this moment.
There were twenty-three meters between Atyiru and the rampaging krayt. The distance was almost irrelevant, for the beast's size and speed, and for Atyiru's absolute inability not to throw herself directly at the most dangerous thing present and inform it of her adoration. Marick sighed once, taking Biddy off his shoulder and setting him down.
Then he moved.
One of his lightsaber slipped from its sheath as it was called to his hand. He pointed himself directly at the trio of Brethren-turned-bait and sprinted for them. The most expedient solution would be the simplest: remove the stimulus that was hurting the krayt.
The dragon struck out again as he ran, scattering its opponents, who leapt away with Force-enhanced ability or on the wings of a jetpack. Marick took the opportunity without slowing his stride, not even needing the quick flick of his wrist in order to send his saber streaking through the air and slicing through the jetpack's fuel tanks. The liquid ignited in a flashburn, sending the armored figure in an explosively violent spiral across the stadium.
The crowd whooped. The Hapan kept running, unwilling to pause when the krayt was thrashing about. His gaze skittered briefly over the scaled body, spotting blood, cracks, and burns littering its hide, shafts of spears and arrows stuck in it, and there, a chain on one of its hind legs the size and thickness of a docking clamp. That explained the odd movements and tight range; it couldn't move much farther than its current position on its stomach.
His eyes snapped back in front of him, the intervening seconds enough for Atyiru to have caught up in her own amplified dash. She leaped lightly over an open pit and curved her path towards another of the attackers, who was darting in and out to leave plasmic slashes all along the dragon's left flank. Marick followed right at her heels.
Slowing, Atyiru spun low, stepped twice, and slid right up to the Acolyte as he retreated again. She reached out to his saber-arm, grasped his hand by the thumb, and wrenched it back off the emitter with a perfunctory, perfect crack. The man screamed as he dropped his weapon, and the Miraluka released him, shoving him back behind her.
"Go," she intoned, command woven into her voice, shivering with threads of Dark and Light. "Seek medical attention, and be gone from here, or your knee will be next."
"I'll go," the pale-faced man echoed, trembling as his eyes dilated, and then stood and jogged towards the pit entrances.
"I AM THE LAST," bellowed the remaining Zabrak combatant, a Sith apprentice if judging by his robes, his profile highlighted on the screens. He beat his spear against his energy shield. "I WILL SLAY THE DRAGON AND ABSORB ITS SOUL, AND WITH IT, ITS POWER!"
His proclamation earned him a mixture of jeers and approving roaring from the crowd, promptly before the krayt's jaws slammed shut upon him. It was less of a shearing bite and more simply a massive weight that crushed, leaving behind a skin-sewn bag of bone splinters and bile. His helmet, flattened like a can, shone bloody under the lights.
"Oh!" Atyiru gasped, clutching her stomach, as if she was the one bitten in two. Her teeth bared, and it was no smile. "Oh, no...no, no more death. No more hurt. This needs to stop."
Marick's eyes flicked over the arena. The krayt tossed its head back, shaking bloodspray from its muzzle, kicking at its shackling and roaring in fury. It shook through them both, so loud and so close that his eardrums pulsed just shy of bursting. Without a word, they both retreated, racing out of range as the dragon stomped and snapped again. At a safe distance, Atyiru stopped. The Hapan skidded to a halt next to her.
"It's still hurting."
"The combatants have been stopped," he commented. "But the test will not. It is chained. Ciara will not release it. She will simply send more combatants, or use the traps and droids."
"Then we stop the test."
The former assassin looked at his wife. She still wasn't smiling. Her smile only fell when she was truly angry, the stormwall of her fury a cold, looming thing, righteous and windblown. Her white hair lifted in the breeze. Red sand sat on her white boots. Her clenched fists glowed with the light of her whirring cybernetics.
He looked up, at the equipment, the recording droids, the packed-full stands and the box with the Headmistress and her entourage. He looked back over his shoulder, at the krayt that would surely destroy them if given the chance. He looked down, at the splatters of viscera and plate that had been flung away.
Marick kicked the spearman's fallen weapon up into his hand. Shook off the hand still holding on to it. Tested the heft. A pike, well-balanced, with one sharp, piercing end and a mechanism for charge dispersion.
It would do.
"Alright," he agreed, and then telekinetically flung the pike like a javelin and guided its arc to spear one of the cam droids straight through. Metal crunched as it fell straight down, a dropping stone. One of the vidscreens went black. The audience booed.
"What did you do?"
"Taking down the testing equipment seems fastest."
"I won't be much help there, I'm afraid. But I can help our new friend."
Marick almost closed his eyes, almost sighed, but it still was not the time.
"Be careful."
She didn't smile, but she did tap one finger to her lips, like a hush, a secret they both knew. "I can't die, silly," she'd told him once, "I can't die, because I've got to protect you."
Atyiru pirouetted on her tiptoes and tore back towards the dragon. The Hapan fixed his eyes on the downed droid, focusing on the spear punched through it, and summoned the object back to his hand. It shrieked and grated, then pulled free and whistled as it sailed into his grip. He assessed his next best target, then decided on blinding the viewers and control room operators first. Narrowing his eyes at another two cam droids, he lifted the spear again in one hand, using the other to direct his lightsaber once more. Both weapons hovered on either side of him before he jerked his fingers and sent them at the machines. The pinwheel of plasma bisected one droid entirely, but the pike, this time, hit the outer metal shell at just the wrong angle to skim off and rebound to the side.
Another windscreen went out, worsening the crowd's discontent. And yet, moments after, they were screeching again, excited about something.
Marick turned and saw his partner bounding up onto the krayt's tail and running, stumbling, up its length before diving for its hindquarters. The dragon writhed, trying to reach back to pluck her off with its teeth, but couldn't quite manage. Atyiru, dauntless, was dragging herself up along its spine, wiggling between the protrusions on its back and pulling out the occasional spear haft as she went. She seemed to be aiming for its head, but it did not appear as if she'd get that far as the creature snarled and heaved.
"IT'S OKAY, WE'RE HERE TO HELP YOU, LET ME HELP YOU!" Atyiru was shouting praises and comforting phrases as if the krayt might listen.
The krayt did not, in fact, listen. It just raged even more.
His eye twitched. He did not pause to search out the pike, simply calling his saber back to hand and running for the pair.
"I just— want you to— knowaaaahhh! I'm! Proud. OF YOU!" she yelled as she was thrashed this way and that like the dragon was a wild fathier trying to buck off its rider. "I'm— sor— SORRY! I DIDN'T— getheresoooooneeeerrrr ahhhh! We came— as quick— as we cooooOOOOUUULLLDMAAAAARRRYYYYY!"
Her apologies turned into a sheer scream as the Miraluka was finally thrown free, tumbling through the air like a child's toy thrown out the window of a moving speeder.
Positive Takeaways
When you finally got to the match portion of your post the action was well written, the characters consistent and interacting with one another very smoothly.
Can Be Improved
The one comment you knew you'd be getting: You wrote over two thousand words before actually getting to the scenario of the match.
Some inconsistencies in rhetoric, Marick exploding/turning a man into a splatter in the stands didn't bother Atyiru but the dragon eating the last one (that was amusing) caused her physical pain.
This should have been plural.
No reason for brethren to be capped here.
You had a few words you smooshed, flash burn, blood spray, storm wall, all should be two words. Also Devaronian not Devoarian.
And biscuits are delicious and should never be sullied as a curse.