The confused beast lifted its hand and roared in anger. It then looked towards Sage. One moment the towering Zeltron was there, but the other he was five meters to the right, and then back to the left. Its eyes danced between the red clones that came and went. And then it got tired and jumped forward.
The ground shook. Even Lucine felt it several meters behind. The Rancor had struck The Boss, but failed once more. It had crushed nothing more than a few rocks.
Sage laughed. He hesitated before punching the monstrosity on the side of its face. The Zeltron didn’t enjoy beating harmless creatures.
“What is wrong with this thing?” He yelled. Turning to the redhead, he struck a flexing pose, highlighting all of his physique. “This is too easy!”
The Sith woman merely smiled. Such a sweet smile, putting a spell on the Zeltron.
Lucine had been studying the beast carefully, her trained eyes capturing every detail that could be of interest, both for her safety, and for exploitation. One thing most peculiar about the Rancor was some sort of necklace. Although, this necklace seemed to be stitched to its neck with metal wire. And attached to it, were three jewels of blue, red and green hue.
The red jewel seemed to shine brighter than the other two, but the woman couldn’t really tell why. It wasn’t a natural light.
Move
She felt her air get squeezed out of her lungs and a crushing pain on her chest.
Immediately the redhead rolled away from her position. She barely managed to avoid the incoming blow to her person. Lucine laid on the sandy ground and looked in awe at the giant blue Rancor, that was now much closer to her. It had come out of nowhere, and had she not felt a pulling in the Force, she would have been squashed.
The redhead got back on her feet. There was no time to clean the dirt of her dress, not even time to say a word. A crushing, invisible force grabbed hold of her slim body and squeezed her tightly. She screamed.
“Is it using the Force?”
Lucine couldn’t see anything holding her, but she was being lifted of the ground by something she couldn’t see.
Sage was dumbfounded. He too had been fooled. During those seconds he had been fighting a ghost? When he looked behind and saw Lucine in pain, hovering a few inches from the ground, the Zeltron dashed towards her.
“Let her go!” the large man yelled and punched hard on the Rancor’s leg.
The beast roared and tried to shake the Zeltron off with its right clenched fist. Consequently, Lucine too got thrown in Sage’s direction.
Released from the monstrosity’s grip, the Sith woman flew a few seconds in the sky before landing safely in the massive arms of The Boss. He smiled at her, a grin as wide as his lips allowed.
“Thank you, darling.” she said, “Now put me down please. And let us figure out how we can deal with this thing.”
Sage put the Consul down carefully. Then, he ran towards the beast and slammed his fists together. The clinking of his fisticuffs got the Rancor’s attention. The beast tried to stomp the man down, to which he rolled away and behind his opponent. He punched twice, as fast as the eye could see. His first punch cracked open the durable skin that protected the beast’s leg and his second pierced into its flesh, causing the Rancor to roar in pain. It was a higher pitched scream.
Meanwhile, Lucine kept trying to feel the Force around the Rancor, namely its necklace. An aura of sorrow and grief hovered around the beast. It was in pain. Not physical pain from Sage’s attacks, but horror in its mind.
“The stones.” Lucine pondered. Could they be the ones causing the pain? Or were they just amplifying it? She was keen to test it out.
The redhead grabbed her WESTAR-34 Blaster Pistol from her outer right thigh and aimed carefully and precisely at the red stone.
Click
A silent bolt flew fast and true into the stone’s core. It shattered into thousands of pieces, and a red flash traversed the arena.
There was silence. The crowd, the Rancor, Sage and Lucine. All stopped to see what was going to happen next.
“What have you done?” Sage whispered from behind the Rancor’s leg, poking his head out.
“I’m not sure yet,” Lucine responded, very much intrigued with the rather peaceful behavior the beast was showcasing.
After she spoke, however, the blue jewel in its necklace started to shine. The creature’s eyes gleamed in the same color, and it screamed in agonizing pain. It got on all fours, unable to withstand the punishment. Its blue skin started to mutate, growing spikes on its back.
On top of each spike, a bulbous flower bloomed, releasing a yellow dust that rapidly formed into a cloud.
Sage, being closer, noticed the effects of the cloud first. He felt his plumed jacket starting to rot as soon as the yellow cloud touched it. Then it spread closer to his body. In a panicked attempt to save himself, he ripped the jacket away from his body and threw it as far as he could. Before it could touch the ground, however, it dissolved completely.
“Acid.” Lucine noticed, “How interesting”
The cloud of acid covered the Rancor. But it wasn’t hurting it. Its thick skin was, somehow, immune to the corrosion.
The beast roared in challenge, its vigor restored and its hatred for the two contenders amplified. It locked eyes with Lucine and started to beat the ground with its fists, before breaking into a frenzied run.
Sage managed to outrun the beast momentarily, taking the opportunity to grab the Sith woman by her waist and pulling her away from the destruction’s path. Luckily, the Rancor’s heavy build made it difficult to stop and turn, which allowed Sage to run in the opposite direction.
However, anywhere it went, a trail of yellow floating acid followed. And being caught in it would prove fatal.
Sage put Lucine down once again.
“Hey,” he said, “I know I told you not to lift a finger in this battle. But The Boss wants to live. If there’s any trick you can pull right now, it would be much appreciated.”
“Oh, that is unexpected. Are you asking for my help, darling?” Lucine smiled sweetly with her eyes closed.
“Yes. I can distract that piece of kark, but please think of something. There’s gotta be an idea in that beautiful red head of yours.” That said, the Zeltron straightened up and widened his shoulders as much as he could.
“You don’t let The Boss die, and The Boss takes care of you!” And then he ran back into the middle of the arena, hoping to divert the Rancor’s attention away from Lucine.
Positive Takeaways
I love your use of reader perspective here and Lucine’s justifiable annoyance at her comrade in arms. This line is the payoff for what you established earlier in terms of Sage’s blustery personality and the rancor seemingly whiffing its blows. This was a masterful stroke to end the post on.
Can Be Improved
While you did a good job moving things along by having the reader drug alongside Lucine by “the Boss” and his arrogance in the first part but it still took about 700 out of a 1000 words for the creature that is supposed to be the focus of this match to even show up. Opening posts get a lot of leeway to set up the scene and the conflict but in this particular case I think you either could have cut back on some of the opening dialogue or expanded on the action scene at the end to help the post feel more focused on the conflict with the creature.