Lucine sighed as she leaned closer to a bank of deactivated monitors and gave her reflection a dubious look. “Ugh, I look like I have been fighting in a sarlacc pit all day,” she grumbled. “Tabriss, be a dear and give me my compact.”
“I do believe that it is because you have been fighting all day, my lady,” Tabriss replied as he handed her the requested item. As Lucine opened it and began to apply the powder, Tabriss continued. “I confess I am confused as to why you are doing this yourself, my lady. Last I checked, you commanded a sizable group of space wizards who could easily bludgeon a bunch of animals into submission.”
“Indeed I do, darling,” the redhead said. “And a good many of them are here. But some things are better done personally. The best way to gain a person’s trust is to go into combat with them, and I am quite eager to establish positive diplomatic relations with several people here. Therefore, I must fight.”
But that did not mean she had to look wretched while doing so. Her hair was perfectly styled and her makeup was as good as it was going to get. For this particular match, she had eschewed the illusion of the fashionable dress that she usually wore, in favor of the armor that the illusion usually concealed.
Out of the corner of her eye, she caught sight of a crimson Togruta accompanied by a dark-colored vornskr. “Well, I suppose this is as good as it is going to get,” she said with a sigh as she closed the compact and handed it back to her butler. “Here comes my next appointment.”
“I have no idea what you could possibly want from her,” Tabriss said in a sotto voce as the Togruta’s eyes fell upon them and she began to draw near.
Lucine gave him a small smile before turning her attention to the approaching pair. Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae was a reasonably well-known Plagueian with ties to the Dark Council. Her relationship with Ciara Tearnan Rothwell Tarentae was good enough that it made it worth Lucine’s while to get to know her. By participating in the Shadow Academy experiments and possibly establishing a positive relationship with Tahiri, Lucine hoped to gain a much more favorable relationship with the Headmistress.
But none of these thoughts showed on her face as Tahiri got within speaking range. “Greetings, Tahiri! It is so lovely to finally meet you in person!” Lucine said as she extended her hand toward the Togruta in greeting.
“Nice to meet you too,” Tahiri replied. “And this is Hadzuska. Zuska for short,” she added as she gave the vornskr a warm smile and a friendly pat on the head.
“How very charming!” Lucine said with a wary glance toward the animal. The upper levels of Coruscant had very few wild animals, and so she was not thrilled with the idea of being in close proximity to one. Especially not after having spent the day in the arena with them. “Will Zuska be joining us?”
“Oh yes, he goes everywhere with me,” Tahiri said brightly.
“Oh good! Well, I am sure he will be very helpful in the fight against a gundark,” Lucine said.
As the seconds ticked by before the official start time of their match, the Togruta and the Human discussed potential tactics. Neither had actually fought against a gundark before, which promised an interesting battle. Apparently, the Shadow Academy scientists had given the gundark increased strength and had rendered their flesh immune to lightsaber attacks. They took this knowledge into account as they made their plans.
Finally, a light came on next to the arena entrance, moments before the heavy double doors swung open. Tahiri, Zuska and Lucine stepped into the colosseum as the cheers of the eager crowd washed over them.
The fact that theirs was one of the last few matches of the day had done little to sate the bloodlust of the crowd. The sun was starting to slide behind the walls of the arena, but its light was replaced by blinding spotlights that glared down at them from overhead. The white sands of the killing floor still maintained much of the day’s heat. Ominous patches of crimson, larger in areas where the sensors and hidden traps were located, made it clear just how bloody the business of the day had been.
The trio spread out once they drew near to the sensors, being careful to avoid the trapped areas. The idea was simple: the gundark would target one of them, allowing the others to get into a flanking position. It was a simple strategy, and one that would allow them to finish the battle quickly.
But it soon became apparent that their strategy was insufficient when the arena doors opposite of them opened and three gundarks stalked onto the arena.
“Oh, now that is just not fair,” Tahiri grumbled as the creatures began to lope toward them, drool dripping from their jaws and a ravenous look in their yellow eyes.
“Well, they say no plan survives first contact with the enemy,” Lucine replied. She extended her hand and closed her eyes as she drew upon the Force. The gundark that had been in the lead gave a shriek of confusion as it found itself lifted into the air. It hung there for a second, before being hurled against the wall with bone-breaking force.
Or at least, Lucine hoped that it had been bone-breaking. But she was destined for disappointment, as the gundark got slowly to its feet, shaking its head and looking annoyed. “Oh, lovely. They seem to be more durable as well.”
Tahiri, meanwhile, narrowed her eyes as she drew her lightsaber and dropped into a crouch. If she was in any way intimidated by the massive, red-skinned creatures, she did not show it. Next to her, Zuska bared his fangs, his tail lashing back and forth as he prepared to pounce. “It doesn’t matter,” Tahiri said, her voice full of grim determination. “We’re still going to win.”
What Went Well
This was a good introduction as far as introducing Lucine and Tahiri and giving the reader some insight into Lucine’s motivations for personally taking on a task like this. Both Lucine’s and Tahiri’s characterisation made me smile. Though she be but little, she is fierce!
Ba-dum-tss!
Room for Growth
“I have no idea what you could possibly want from her,” Tabriss said in a sotto voce as the Togruta’s eyes fell upon them and she began to draw near.
I’ll admit sotto voce was a new word for me, but I don’t think you’ve used it correctly. Though it can have the meaning of “in a soft voice,” it’s only used as an adverb or an adjective, so it should always be modifying a verb or a noun. So you could have written something like, “Tabriss said sotto voce as the Togruta’s eyes…” (adverb modifying said) or, “Tabriss said in a sotto voce manner/voice/tone…” (adjective modifying whatever word you want to use there).