The best lessons were never taught.
A part of Tali hated the very word. Hard, harsh, unyielding, all sharp consonants, pushing at her teeth. When someone taught someone else, they were really forcing them to learn, pushing them. You were taught to behave, taught to look a certain way, taught to accept orders from your betters, to put the shackles around your own wrists and thank your masters for the privilege.
No. The best lessons were accepted. They were demonstrated through example, explained through simile, understanding encouraged through actual, critical thought. The best way to teach another was not to shove wisdom down their throat and expect them to swallow without protest. The apprentice, the learner, should come to accept it on their own, without pressure...and if they refused to affirm it, perhaps it would be better for the master to re-examine what they were trying to teach.
Or, that was the philosophy that she tried to stick to, rather doggedly. But, Sera had a knack for pushing that patience to the brink. For all that she had accomplished, her former apprentice’s skull could be remarkably thick.
“Vhat do you mean? You didn’t even ask them vhat ve are fighting?” the amethyst skinned Twi’lek groaned, running a gauntleted hand down her face. Tali’s segmented armor didn’t make so much as a clink as they stepped into the arena, golden eyes glowing under Arx Primus’ beaming light.
“C’mooooon Tali. The surprise is part of the fun, right?” Sera stated, grinning. Her two daggers were already in hand. “Don't know if the Head-Lady would have told us anything, even if we asked. She was really leaning hard into that ‘mysterious research’ thing. I think she wants us in the dark. Mostly, at least.”
“...do you remember any of your lessons?” Tali questioned, one armor-stiffened lekku flicking slightly.
“All of them! The Force is all around us, we should defend those who can’t defend themselves, always wear protection-”
“You remember about vearing protection but not about knowing your enemy?”
“I use one a lot more often than the other,” Sera retorted with a mischievous grin, tapping the tip of her Zabraki dagger against her thin breastplate. She turned about as they made it to the arena’s center, her bright blue eyes intent.
Tali sighed, shifting her glaive from hand to hand as she followed the Zabrak’s gaze. Sera could project a convincingly vapid appearance, she had often been impressed by the younger woman’s insight. Aside from the research staff scattered across the tiered stands above them, the colosseum appeared to be empty. But, the sand told a different story. Dropping to one knee near the center of the fighting pit’s floor, Tali drew her hand through the hard packed soil...and found a crack. Or, more accurately, a seam, running deep into the ground. Looking more closely, she could see dozens more, dark lines in the sand, joining into complex, varied geometric patterns, originating from a perfect circle set at the very center. Right beneath where they were standing.
“I think you were right about the headmistress,” she muttered, grip closing tightly on her saber. “I’ve got a badt feeling about-”
“Shshshshsh,” Sera cut in, raising one finger to her lips. Her eyes fluttered shut for a moment, and Tali felt a tell-tale touch at the back of her mind as the younger woman probed at the Force. The Zabrak’s eyes snapped open with a gasp, her brow suddenly furrowing. “I can feel it. Her. Close...closer than I thought she would be. And angry.”
They didn’t get the chance to think about things any further. With the rough shriek of rock grinding on rock, an enormous plume of sand and gritty soil jetted from the arena floor, some thirty meters to their left. Tali thought it was an explosion of some sort, before she saw the shape protruding into the air. A large, circular projection had lifted out from the arena, as if pressed from underneath. A sandstone pillar, five meters tall, seemingly hollow. The seams in the floor suddenly made a great deal of sense.
There was silence, for just a moment, as the plume of dust began to settle. Then, a dark, writhing mass shot out from the cloud, a horrific screech ripping through the air. Strangely enough, Tali recognized the nightmarish form that emerged from the sand. Though she herself hadn’t been born on Ryloth, and had barely any memories of her family life before she’d been sold, the lylek’s reputation was legendary.
This one appeared far more dangerous than most. She was enormous, at least four meters tall, two muscular tendrils lashing through the sand before her. Her carapace was a pure, glossy black; irregular, from what Tali knew of them. And that scream…
Sera cast a glance towards her former master. All they needed was a nod, before immediately moving in unison, the Zabrak cutting left while the Twi’lek sprinted to the right. This was far from the first fight that they had seen together, and it certainly wouldn’t be their last. All they needed to do was flank wide around it…
Pillars of stone sprang out of the arena’s sand only a few feet before her, blasting Tali with a wave of pressurized grit. She pivoted on a dime, groaning under her breath. If the grinding of stone to her left was any indication—especially when punctuated with colorful Zabraki curses—it would seem that Sera was facing a similar blocker. Whatever sadist was running the arena’s controls had just penned them in with the beast, locking them into a narrow little lane, with no room to maneuver. Or, at least there might have been. Grimacing as she backed down, back towards the center of the arena, Tali glanced at the walls that were locking them in, a strategy rapidly forming in her mind.
“Sera!” she shouted, saber-glaive igniting in her hand. “I’ll keep our friend distractedt! You take the high ground and strike down when you see your opening!”
“Sounds fun!” the Zabrak replied. Tali watched her crouch low in the corner of her eye, before taking the amplified, five meter leap up to the top of one of the narrow walls. Then, she shifted her golden-eyed gaze back onto the beast charging directly towards her, reaching out with one hand.
It was never wise to fight alone. A pack hunter, the lylek knew that better than most. Therefore, when a score of violet Twi’lek manifested from thin air just before her original quarry, she paused in her tracks, momentum pulling her to a grinding halt. Tali’s jaw tensed as she held the vivid illusion, charging alongside her illusory twins, their golden-bladed saber glaives whirling through the air. The beast didn’t know which angle to defend, which foe to target. Spear-like forelegs pierced through insubstantial enemies, tendrils whipping through empty air, giving Tali all the opening she needed to press through, driving the long blade of her glaive up at the creature’s torso. It had nowhere near the impact that she had hoped. The thick, glossy carapace parted before the blade, an inches-deep gouge burned into the hide, but something about the material resisted the worst of the lightsaber’s energy.
It should have been a killing blow. Instead, she remained very much alive...and very, very angry. Rearing back, the lylek’s jaws opened wide, unhinging before it released an indescribable sound. It was so loud, so piercing that it hardly seemed to be a noise at all; just an agonizing buildup of pressure in Tali’s ear-cones, sending her stumbling back in a nauseous daze. The illusion fell, and the lylek’s beady, compound eyes settled on her, enormous mandibles grinding. One long, venom tipped tendril lashed out, coiling towards her…
And Sera was there in an instant, her dun cloak flying out behind her as she brought both daggers down onto the tendril, skewering it into the sand from above. Unprotected by a carapace, the fleshy tentacles gave way easily before the blade. But, there was more than one tendril. As Sera danced backwards, the other changed course and shot directly towards her, a venomous sting pointed towards her hearts. She gave a gasp, pivoting onto her back foot and barely avoiding the sting, but there wasn’t much that she could do to prevent the tendril from coiling around her ankles, hoisting her into the air as she fought to keep her balance.
Thankfully, she hadn’t come alone. Shaking off her confusion, Tali levelled her glaive at the creature once more, her jaw clenched tight. It was time to teach this thing a lesson. For all that her former-apprentice was thick-skulled, stubborn, impossible to teach…nothing was going to touch her. Not without finding itself in a galaxy of hurt.
Positive Takeaways
The setup for this was fun, Tali and Sera's relationship is clearly defined and the banter was fun. The ambiance was pretty good and the action was well written!
Can Be Improved
Learn to use hyphens. Hard-packed, Venom-tipped, five-meter.
We don't really mark off for them usually, but they're right damn it :P You had a handful of extra commas, that was about it on the syntax front.