And there Appius was, waiting, watching like he'd somehow heard Von's words across the vast sea of red between them. The Skakoan approached, chest heaving and looking like he'd been smashed through several glass windows.
I can't fail. Von thought to himself. I will not fail! You are coming with me, Appius, whether you like it or not!
The two Force user's stood apart from one another, the Crait sun beating down upon them with a lack of mercy to their violence. Von gripped his lightsabers in his hands, which had become deactivated in his fall and switched them back on.
Snap-Hiss!
Two crimson blades erupted out of the hilts in the Defender's hands. The Skakoan placed his dominant foot forward into the salty, red-stained earth and bent his knees before placing his lightsabers horizontally in front of him, yet he held them close to his chest.
"So, this is what it comes to, is it?" the Taldryanite called out across the short distance between the two. "Two former friends locked into a battle until one of them relents?"
"Or you can surrender," Von answered.
As much as dual-blades provided significant strengths, they provided flaws in other areas too. Appius knew of these strengths and weaknesses, it was just a matter of how to exploit them. The Sorcerer's biggest problem was his fatigue. The Force may have been his ally, and indeed, a powerful ally at that, but Appius' reserves weren't infinite. The Sorcerer's grandiose display of power was beginning to take its toll on him. On top of this, the bruising in his ribs became more and more apparent as time went on. Not to mention the fact he wasn't completely familiar with Von's lightsaber techniques. They were unconventional, showed shades of Niman and something else, but he couldn't pinpoint what.
I need to end this quickly. The Force Disciple mused to himself.
"I'm not coming with you, Von," the Proconsul started. "Firstly because you are wrong, and secondly, and let's face the facts here, you can't beat me."
Von involuntarily winced under Appius' taunt.
"You're just goading me," the Sith answered more for himself than to his opponent.
"Think about it Von, every single time we have fought, what has been the result? You've lost, every single damn time. Face it, Von! You know it is true!" Appius continued to prod. The Skakoan lowered his head and pondered what the Taldryan Proconsul had stated.
"SHUT THE HELL UP!" Von exclaimed. Memories came flooding back from their time together in Clan Vizsla, to the formation of the Deathwatch and even Appius' eventual departure from the Clan. It was true. Every time they fought, trained, challenged each other, the Human had come out on top.
And it infuriated the Sith.
The Sorcerer went wide-eyed, this was the exact opening that he was looking for! In his moment of anger, the Sith allowed himself to lower his defense. Appius stretched out with the Force and wrapped it around Von like a viper coiling around its prey. The Sorcerer strained as he did so, fatigue setting in, but he pulled the Skakoan towards him with as much of his power as he could muster.
The Defender soared across the salty plains like a black hole was pulling him into its centre. Appius inhaled, pulled back his right arm, clenched his fist tightly, and swung it directly into the Skakoan's face. An audible crack was heard from the mask as parts of it splintered, revealing the Skakoan's pressure suit behind it. Von dropped to the ground on his back with a hard thud, covering his face with his forearm. The Vizsla member opened his eyes when he heard a distinct, yet familiar hissing sound above him.
"Kark!" Von swore as he felt the Force warn him of imminent danger. The Vizsla member raised his sabers to block the stream of lightning that thundered out of Appius' hands. The Skakoan grunted and held firm for a few moments. As the electricity faded, the Defender could see his opportunity to end the fight. The Sith defender waited a few seconds for the electricity to stop before he seized his opening.
"GOT YOU!" Von swung both his sabers at Appius' thighs, intending to sever them from the Human's body. Yet, they didn't. They scraped across the surface of the Mandalorian Force User's shins and reflected Von's attack.
Beskar! The Sith remembered. It was a material sought out by many in the galaxy. In particular, Von's fellow clanmates in Vizsla. He knew Appius had it, and even planned for it just in case. But in the heat of the moment, it left the Defender's mind.
Appius attempted to stomp down hard on Von's skull, but the Skakoan narrowly avoided the giant boot as it threatened to plant his head into the salt. The Sith forced himself up onto his feet. Tired, battered, near-broken and his face throbbing, Von was nothing if not defiant. A defiance that cost him dearly.
The Skakoan raised his sabers, his arms burnt and his lungs cried for reprieve which slowed his movements significantly just enough for the Sorcerer to retrieve his weapon. Emerald blades ruptured out of either side of the saberstaff, and with one haphazard swing, Appius capitalized. The Taldryanite's lightsaber cut through Von's left arm at the shoulder and severed it from his body. Appius dropped to the ground, his ribs burning with pain.
The severed limb dropped to the ground with a soft thud as the effects were immediately heard. Von released a blood-curdling scream as Appius recoiled at what he'd just done.
"Appius… Why?" Von suddenly whispered weakly as he dropped to his knees and curled over in shock.
"Von!" the Sorcerer shouted as he crawled over to the Skakoan's side.
"I… Ugh… Erm… Come on, Appius. THINK!!!" the Sorcerer panicked. "I didn't mean to do it. I swear, I promise. Damn it, Von. You had to make me do it, didn't you!? This is your fault. THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!"
No matter how much Appius tried to shift the blame to Von, it didn't help cure the guilt. The Skakoan's pressure suit was now compromised and exposed Von to the atmosphere of Crait. The Skakoan would be fine for now, but he couldn't stay that way.
Suddenly, Appius was alerted by the sound of several crafts bursting into the air above them. The Taldryanite glanced up to an oddly eerie sight. A group of Kom'rk Class Fighters soared up ahead, no doubt looking for Von.
"House Wren…" Appius muttered. "Frakk…"
The Sorcerer glanced down to his friend before hanging his head lowly. If he stayed, he knew he'd likely be captured or killed on the spot. For Taldryan, no, for Ankira, Aylin, Dasha, he couldn't let it happen.
"I'm sorry," the Human said shamefully. The Mandalorian Force User knew if he had any chance of escape, he needed to take it now. So that's exactly what he did. Appius rose to his feet, shot Von one last look and left clutching his chest, hoping somehow, someway his old friend would survive.
Positive Takeaways
As usual, you did a good job setting up the premise of the conflict here, particularly in building in not just the feelings of betrayal across Clan lines, but between two former comrades and friends, making it a touch more personal in the violence. I appreciated that it was basically both of them shouting that they were the wronged parties. The combat worked between the arguments well.
Can Be Improved
You had a couple minor syntax errors here and there, though nothing that made reading a struggle. What you did stutter a bit on, we concluded, was the lightsaber blade cutting through a fuel line not causing ignition of the fuel itself. It was cool to see the jetpack foiled like that, but the plasma making contact with the liquid fuel ought to have caused ignition, and we're left head scratching as to why it just...doesn't, save for plot convenience. I was torn on whether to make this a minor Story detractor or a Realism one and landed on Realism because of how we're dealing with the operation of equipment. So, just be careful in the future there.