Appius landed on his back, crashing with a hard thud among the dry bones and dust. A strong, ringing echo thundered in his ears as he tried to pull himself to his feet.
"Ow…" the Mandalorian voiced. Unfortunately for him, Fenrir wasn't about to allow him to recover. The huge Shistavanen landed on top of the Proconsul and slammed one giant palm into the Mandalorian's visor, pinning him to the ground. Fenrir then removed Appius' helmet and tossed it aside. Enraged, slit eyes stared back into Appius' blue for half a second before the Plagueian unleashed a fast strike at the Proconsul's face.
"YOU… DIE!" Fenrir roared. His claws threatened to gouge out the Taldryanite's eyes, though Appius was just able to move his head to the side so the claws dug into the soft earth rather than him. The Mandalorian panicked when Fenrir pulled back his arm to try again, sweat dripped down his face and his pupils dilated. Fortunately, the Plagueian had made one huge error.
He didn't pin Appius' arms.
The Mandalorian grabbed a fistful of dirt in the palm of his hand and tossed it into the canine-like being's eyes. Fenrir recoiled off of Appius and roared, clutching at his eyes and trying desperately to get the scratching in his retinas to stop. The Taldryan Proconsul took the opportunity to quickly rise to his feet, just as Fenrir's vision began to return to him.
"Oh no, you don't!" Appius exclaimed as he thrust forward his right hand. The Plagueian's pupils undilated as what felt like a flashbang erupted in front of his eyes, a sudden, piercing bright light forcing Fenrir to shield his retinas with his hands again.
Appius could feel it, his opportunity had arrived and he seized it. He forced the darkest side of him to come to the surface. The pain, the loss, the hate and anger he kept locked away except for moments just like these. The Sorcerer let it flow through him like a wildfire through a forest as he drove it to his fingertips. Lightning danced like a thunderstorm from one finger to the next before Appius launched the built-up storm at Fenrir. The Shistavanen, still blinded, yet sensing danger, narrowly escaped being fried by leaping to the side and capitalising by swiping at Appius' face.
Luckily for the giant Shistavanen, the Taldryanite was not fast enough to avoid his first swing. Sharp, elongated claws tore into the flesh above Appius' right eye which extended diagonally over his cheek. A river of red liquid oozed out of the fresh wound, some dripping down into the Proconsul's mouth.
Appius could taste the iron in his blood, and he recoiled at the sensation. His blood was never something he liked the taste of, even in the heat of battle, but Fenrir was like a wild predator hungry for his prey. The cut throbbed and ached, yet there was nothing Appius could do at this current moment.
The Plagueian's vision might not have returned, but he could still smell his foe and he continued swiping and clawing at the Savant like a wild animal. However, just like a wild animal, his attacks were strong, but lacked any kind of discipline, and no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't land another single swipe against the heavily armoured man.
"Impressive," Appius praised, sarcasm dripping from the word itself. "For nothing more than a beast!"
Fenrir attacked harder, throwing more effort into his lunges and scratches, though his opponent might as well had been the open air.
"You… blood!" Fenrir growled back.
"That was nothing more than a lucky hit and you know it!" The Mandalorian retorted. "I'm going to enjoy taking you back to Taldryan. Forget being a member of my Clan, I'm going to make you run laps around the Citadel just for my amusement!"
Fenrir roared, the slits in his eyes growing thinner, all his hate and rage consuming him, the dark side pouring into every crevice and muscle in his body. Appius responded in kind just to keep up with the hulking Shistavanen, though with how liberal both men were with their use of the Force, fatigue was beginning to take effect. Breaths were getting harder, and Fenrir, in particular, was getting sloppier.
"Some monster you turned out to be! No wonder Plagueis abandoned you here, it's all you deserve!" Appius taunted, and this got to the Shistavanen, who, in his fury, overextended towards the Sorcerer, giving Appius the opportunity he needed to grab hold of Fenrir's oversized wrist. Appius dug his back into the Plagueian's sternum and allowed the canine sentient's momentum to carry him over Appius' body, crashing into dust and bones with a sickening crack.
Appius staggered back and rubbed his face with his hand, staining it red. He was going to need medical attention for the wound, and his chest heaved in and out, the fight having taken more of him than he expected it to. Yet, when he gazed upon Fenrir, he witnessed someone beaten, broken, and exhausted. When Appius listened, he could swear he could hear wheezing, like a puppy that had gotten too excited and worn itself out. From the corner of his eye, the Taldryanite took notice of a single, glimmering object that lingered among a pile of dusty old bones. Recognising it as his lightsaber, he wrapped the Force around it like a tether and summoned it back to his hand, placing it back on his waist.
Appius loomed over the Plagueian like a shadow of death, a scowl present on his face and a fire burning deep within. He normally wasn't one for executions, but considering Fenrir was a member of frakking Plagueis of all places, that same damned Clan that had been the cause of many of Appius' woes, he was sure an exception could be made. As far as the Proconsul was concerned, he was doing the Brotherhood, and the universe as a whole, a favour. Besides, what good was recruiting Fenrir if he was stupid enough to attack him?
"Sorry, Fenrir. I gave you one chance, but this is the end," Appius declared.
Electricity danced between the fingertips of the Mandalorian's hands like a tazer eager for a victim. Fenrir mustered enough strength to open his eyes, and Appius expected to see the Shistavanen express some kind of fear, or regret, or at least shock! But no, instead, he bared what looked to the Taldryanite to be a large, toothy grin.
"Why are you smiling?" Appius questioned, his curiosity getting the better of him.
A shadow suddenly overtook them both, massive in size, and Appius shuddered when he realised where it came from. He turned, and there it was, the rancor was back on its feet, glaring down at the Mandalorian like he was little more than a womp rat. Suddenly, a vicious roar boomed across the Felucia Graveyard, spittle dropping to the ground from its jaw.
"Sithspit!" Appius exclaimed in a panic. The Mandalorian activated his jetpack, the thrusters thundering to life. It kicked up dust as it lifted the Proconsul into the air. This, however, would prove to be a huge mistake. The humongous beast slammed its forearm into the Sorcerer, swatting him like a fly and sending him careening into the distance several feet away. Appius rolled to a stop, unmoving, and unconscious.
The rancor then set about helping its master, and it scooped up Fenrir in its arms and carried him to safety, far away from Appius.
Aliso
39 ABY
After the battle.
"So, Fenrir survived, did he?" The soft, gentle tone of Selikah Roh voiced to the only other individual in the room.
"Indeed he did," Qormus answered. "Supposedly, he tamed a Rancor and used it as an ally in the battle against Taldryan's Proconsul."
"A rancor!" Selikah roared with laughter. "Absolutely brilliant. I'm sure Erinyes is loving the fact her second in command was taken down by a dog and his pet. In that case, it appears we may have use for Fenrir after all."
"Does that mean…" Qormus started.
"Indeed it does. Have Fenrir and his pet retrieved from Felucia immediately. Oh, and do me a favour, Qormus. Keep this from Aleister. I could do without his complaining."
Qormus bowed his head before leaving the room. Selikah allowed herself a small, confident smile to cross her face. It seemed everyone had some use to her in Plagueis from the Di Plagia to the slaves and dogs. It was good to see some things never changed.
Positive Takeaways
Decent amount of combat, working with what was available. The descriptions of the graveyard were solid.
Can Be Improved
Had a few extra commas for short sentences that weren’t really compounded. I understand the frustration of writing off a sheet where your opponent doesn’t actually have any combat skills, and you did fine by the end, though the idea of Fenrir knocking Appius’s saber hilt away with such precision was questionable at best.