Cethgus growled in pain, his ears just making out the distinct sound of Galleros hitting the water. His left hand released the saber letting it hit the sand ramp as it started to roll gently down the slope, with his free hand he grabbed at the closest Lizard ripping it free from his skin and tossing it down the hole. After what could have easily been several minutes the Obelisk had finally cleared his body of Lizards, allowing the last one to meet his boot as the splatter cascaded up the side of his robes. Pain gently irritated the skin of the Iridonian, each bite had punctured his skin and droplets of blood tricked from each of the wounds.
Cethgus allowed his eyes to glance around the cave, now noticing the slope descending down which he knew would lead to the bottom. Stepping down the slope once more he knelt down briefly, picking up his dropped saber, letting his fingers curl around the hilt and remove it from its resting place against the wall. Gently pulling himself up, the dull sting of the wounds cascaded threw out his system, it was clear that the Iridonian had to make sure his opponent was killed. As he walked down the slope and descended into the dark, sun deprived hole, the crystals illuminated his way as they reflected what little sun was able to find its way down here.
As Cethgus reached the end of the hole, his white blade bringing light to the dark in front of him, allowing his eyes to scan the pit like area, its open ceiling and large circular formation making it the perfect make-shift battlefield. Watching the well of water rippling it was clear that the perfect stillness had been ruined by the fall of the Quaestor. Ripples could be seen heading to the shore as the form of the Zelosian dragging himself from the water. Taking note of the fact that it seemed the fall had not been so perfect after all, it was clear from the panting and dragging of his left leg it had suffered at the hands of this basin.
“So you did survive that fall then Galleros.” The Quaestor's voice cut through the gap between them and echoed into the ears of the green skinned Krath.
Sjl instantly tried drawing himself up using the wall of the Basin he staggered up to his feet, his hands searching his body for his saber hilt, finding the weapon wet and damp he grasped the hilt in his hand and reignited the blade. Hearing the clear hiss of water evaporating from the hilt only made Cethgus smirk as he knew the fight was once more back on.
Breathing deeply, the Priest prepared himself for the oncoming attack, his stance showing his readiness even in his weakened state. His right leg was having to take the bulk of his weight and that would be his downfall in the eyes of the Proconsul. Cethgus walked slowly towards his opponent, it was clear with the fall and his useless fingers meant that even gripping his saber was taking its toll right now on the combatant. Feeling the blood trickling down his wound it only infuriated the Obelisk that Galleros had the nerve to challenge him to this fight, let alone stand there already beaten and not give up.
“Its already over Galleros, you just don't know it yet.” Cethgus' voice echoed for a second before the sound of the Primarchs increased advance echoed through the basin.
Cethgus swung the blades with ease hearing them collide with the red blade of his opponents saber, feeling the force of the blades collide it was clear that the Quaestor had taken the time to heal some of the bones that had been destroyed, enough to take the impact of the hit at least. Pulling away, the Primarch spun on his heel and slashed upwards, feeling blades lock together and he pushed against it, forcing himself towards his opponent before slamming his shoulder into his opponent's jaw, sending the Krath spluttering backwards and watching his face twist in agony as the strain on his leg was apparent.
Following up the Iridonian brought his elbow to bare on the green skinned jaw hearing the sound as bone dislocated from joint, blood trickled from his mouth and splashed into the water. Before the Krath could recover he felt the agonizing pain of a saber blade piercing through his skin, the pain blurred his vision as it overrode all of his senses. Trying to swing his blade back Sjl felt his body failing, as he forced it to endure one last time. His red blade coming up only to feel the blade fall free from his grip. Making out the shape of his hand falling away from his wrist knowing it had been destroyed by the Primarch.
Cethgus deactivated his blades allowing the Quaestor to collapse into the shallow part of the basin, knowing full well that the fight was over, he stared down and the broken and beaten form of Galleros, reaching down he grabbed the lightsaber hilt from the amputated hand, clipping it to his belt as he glanced at the slow breathing from.
“If you survive this, come and find me. Get stronger and maybe one day you will look upon this mistake and understand why I let you live.” With those words, the Iridonian walked away from the basin and starting his way back up the ramp towards freedom.
Desolated waste- Shouldn't that be desolate waste?
"Cethgus allowed his hands to come down to the belt, which holstered his sabers, gently unclipping the weapon with ease." Come down to his belt?
"His body moving with speed born from the momentum, bringing his blades slashing down, he smashed them against the Quaestor's causing sparks to hiss from the weapons and gently fizzle down to the floor." A better way to say this would be "His body, moving with speed born from the momentum, brought his blades slashing down and smashing them against the Quaestor's..."
You refer to him as Lexic in this post.
"...the former Arconae lunged in with his blade aiming at the neck of his opponent." if you use lunged, then aiming should be aimed.