Kordath stepped gingerly, eyes locked on Uji as sweat beaded on his brow and plastered the shirt on his back to his hair covered body. The Human was similarly tracking his subordinate, gritting his teeth as he felt an ache in his lower torso and blood soaking his training garment. Both men were gifted with uncanny abilities of awareness, stepping carefully over scattered coals that smoldered on the throne room’s floor, avoiding potential burns. Despite his focus Uji was still having his gaze drawn, ever so slightly, towards the Ryn’s tail as it waved languidly back and forth behind the Krath’s head.
Blinking and trying to maintain his focus, the Templar waited for the Priest to make his move. Kordath cocked his head slowly, refusing to blink at the Obelisk as he slowly spun the knife to a blade down grip, barely breathing as he stepped over another pile of burning coals. Thoughts flitted across the Priest’s mind as he tried to gauge his Captain’s current capabilities. Trying not to allow a twitch of emotion cross his visage, the Ryn noted Uji’s eyes slow crawl to the left or right of his focus. He’d often felt his tail had a mind of it’s own, but usually it recognized when a clear and present danger was in the cards.
Watching as the Templar’s focus shifted to follow the swaying tail, Kordath released his grip on the Obelisk’s connection and let his tail drop towards the floor. As Uji followed the movement by reflex, Kordath redirected his command of the Force to gather a batch of burning coals from the floor and flung them towards the Obelisk’s face. Uji reacted with unparalleled speed, dropping by bending his knees to allow the flaming lumps to fly past his face. Overbalanced by his dodge, he fell prey to Kordath’s followup attack, a swift spin with a kick to the outside of his right knee. The Obelisk cried out in anger and surprise as he hit the hard floor and rolled to the side when he realized that his clothing was starting to smolder at some points.
Kordath was trying not to laugh as he watched his Captain start patting out garment fires, over the muttered curses coming from Uji he could hear a faint laughter coming from the throne.
“Tried to be nice,” growled the Human, patting out the last errant embers and pushing himself up off the floor, “I did, I really did, Bleu.”
“Hey, mate, the Shadow Lady demanded a show. And I try not to ever disappoint a Lady,” replied the Ryn, taking a mock bow, caught up in the spectacle. “So if you’re done whining...come at me, mate.”
Uji felt the facial muscles around his left eye twitch violently, as he dropped his hand towards his belt and grasped the saber hilt hanging there. “I tried to be fair, Bleu, don’t forget that when you wake up in the bacta tank later.”
“Bah, hate that stuff, makes my hair smell for weeks. No thanks,” replied the Ryn, smiling and still holding just his knife, though his left hand was behind his back. As the Human advanced, Kordath tugged at the sash entwined about his waist, letting his rumpled and sleep wrinkled robes loosen. Uji noted the movement, balancing in a moment the threat a piece of cloth might present him, and brought his blade up to attack. Taking a deep breath, the Priest curled the end of the sash around his hand and dashed forward with his knife.
Uji shook his head at the reckless attack, his blade arcing out to cut the Ryn’s knife in half. Without pause the Krath dropped the useless hilt, and threw out his left arm to whip the sash forward, tangling it in the Obelisk’s feet. The Templar sighed in annoyance as he turned to track the Priest, swinging his saber low even as the Ryn dived sideways. Kordath scrambled to hands and knees, sash still clutched in hand, and scuttled past the bewildered Templar. Uji was slowly growing more angry, lifting his blade to cut the sash as he felt it slowly tighten around his ankles. The Templar cursed the restraint he’d shown throughout this little show-fight they’d been putting on for the Consul, he could have ended the Ryn near the start if he’d let himself go.
“Ah! No!” shouted the Ryn, lifting his right hand up and snapping his fingers; Uji could swear he heard and echo from the snap, as the world went dark. First he blinked his eyes, wondering if Bleu had blinded him again, before feeling a sharp pain as his elbow was twisted far past comfort. Kordath was being silent, focusing far to much on maintaining the artificial darkness engulfing the Templar and himself, as well as providing the physical might to disarm the Obelisk. Uji gritted his teeth as he heard his saber clatter across the smooth, cold floor of the throne room, while he tried to straighten his arm.
Something was holding it in place, he noted, tugging ineffectually before realizing his other arm was in similar straits. The Ryn’s foot planted itself on the inside of the Human’s knee, dropping him to a kneeling position before a kick to the back pushed him to the floor. Uji thrashed a bit in discomfort as the complete and utter darkness faded, the flickering lights of the braziers and the purple flames behind the throne painting shadows around him once more. He found himself unable to move, arms or legs for that matter, as the Ryn stood proudly over him.
“Ta-da!” shouted the Ryn, taking a bow towards the Throne again, one hand against his chest, the other outstretched over the wrists to ankle tied up Templar. Atyiru was clapping slowly, a vicious grin on her face as she got to her feet and began walking down from the dais. Kordath turned to squat next to his friend, “Sorry mate, had to make it look good after all. You really sold it at the end, thought you’d cut me down for sure.”
Bleu’s hands roamed across the Human’s clothing for a moment, causing the tied up Templar to roll on to his side to get eyes on the Ryn, “What the kark are you doing now, Bleu?”
“Ah-ha! Huh, just borrowing some credits from your wallet, no worries. But I need a drink mate...oh, ummm, my...Lady…”
“So, Uji is buying then, is he?”
“Well, I suppose….umm, do you want me to untie him?” asked the Ryn, suddenly not feeling nearly as confident.
“Oh, no, let this be a lesson to him on sharing personal information that isn’t for him to share,” spoke the Miraluka sweetly, twining an arm through the befuddled Kordath’s elbow, “now then, he’s buying. And while I hold issue with your little fiction, I can’t say it wasn’t written...enticingly.”
“Ah, good, umm, good to hear, my Lady,” mumbled the Priest, walking awkwardly past his Captain, towards the door.
“By the way,” spoke the woman, as they left the throne room, “you have another one of those sashes with you?”
“W...what?”
Uji glared at the pair as they walked out, before realizing what the Consul had asked. The glare turned into a grin.
“Oh, right. She needs to see him ‘punished’ as well. Have fun Bleu. I think I may have gotten off light.”
Dude, I get that your species is Ryn. I’m not, however, all that certain on why you need to repeatedly write the species appellation in lieu of any other descriptor for the first two paragraphs.
The sudden viewpoint switch seems a bit overdone. While there is no particular rule against it, it kind of undercuts the whole “I’ve been bagged and have no idea what’s up” feeling you went with in the previous paragraph.
I’m not sure about the curse in Huttese. The rules lawyer in me wants to point out that Kordath doesn’t know Huttese. The more practical side of me then pointed out that I can swear in languages I don’t understand, so why not Kordath? So he gets a pass.
Descriptive prowess isn’t the best, but it’s far from the worst, either. My main complaints are mostly with wordiness, such as “slow the disaster down” instead of “slow the disaster”.
Overall, however, I like this post. It is one of the most bizarre openings to an ACC Match I’ve ever had the pleasure of reading. Well done. There’s little to no action here, but I suppose that was inevitable given your elaborate setup. You have three posts, and using one of them to set things up is a perfectly fine thing to do, especially if the setup is good, like this one.