Hevan had arrived on Corellia 2 days prior, sent by his clan to 'dispose' of a dangerous individual. His intel had been limited, as only a low level guard had been bought off, but he knew his target and where they would be that night. There was some meeting happening between the target and a buyer, and that he was to stop it. Now, to Hevan, stopping something and shooting someone coincide remarkably often. The meeting should be on the roof, but there would undoubtly be guards surrounding any entrance - and, if the target was good at his job, guards at any vantage point that overlooks the meeting area.
Hevan arrived at the club 3 hours before the meeting was due to happen, and began checking vantage points. Climbing a ladder on a tower that housed one of the searchlights, he encountered the first piece of security. A small laser tripwire, likely an alarm or explosive, was attached about halfway up the ladder. It was small, hardly noticeable, but it left a slight green glimmer in the air. Hevan climbed back down, but instead of looking for a new tower, he grabbed the safety cage that surrounded the ladder. He clambered up the cage on the outside, much more exposed than he would normally prefer, but this was the best option for him.
Reaching the top, he silently climbed through railing and, finally, had his feet on solid ground again. There was a guard up at the top, sitting and watching the club with electrobinoculars. Hevan stalked nearer, completely silent, unsheathed his duskblade and prepared to strike. As he was about to, a crackle came from the man's commlink.
"Tower three checking in. All clear here." The guard responded to the indecipherable crackle.
Hevan waited for him to turn off the commlink, then struck. He stuck the blade into the man's throat and held his mouth to stop the shout. The guard struggled for less than a second, then went limp. Hevan pulled the corpse from beside the spotlight, making sure it would not fall, and wiped his blade on his sleeve. Now he was alone and could set up his nest. He pulled out his rifle and tripod, setting it up just behind the searchlight. Anyone looking for him would only see the light, and he could be shrouded in the darkness. He searched the man's body, pulling the commlink and a few credits from the man's pockets.
Now, Hevan waited. While he did so, he surveyed the club with his own electrobinoculars, noting guard positions, snipers and exfil routes. Eventually, he got bored and began to snack on some miscellaneous foods pilfered off the guards now cold corpse. His legs hung off the edge - anyone looking wouldn't be able to tell it wasn't him - as he ate. Crumbs fell about 200 meters to the ground as Hevan practically tore the food to shreds. He was never neat, even at the tables of lords and ladies and other rich folk. He grabbed his flask, thankful for his foresight of refilling it before coming, and felt the alcohol rush down his throat, warming it.
He finished, leaving about half of the drink left, nearly dropping the flask from the tower as he put it down. He thanked his reflexes for catching it - if it had fallen, it would have been a disaster. Another hour passed, Hevan practically banging his head on the railing out of boredom. He could be patient when needed, but this was something unique. There was nothing to entertain him save for making up stories about people trying to get in, watching kids attempt to sneak in and chuckling at people getting thrown out. It entertained him for a bit, but it soon became boring and tiring. Finally, the comm crackled back into life, a voice asking for a check in.
"Tower three, checking in."
Another hour and a half passed. Nothing. At least in cold areas there was the bite of the wind, at least in deserts he could be at home, but here, standing hundreds of meters above the ground, there was nothing to do aside from listen to the wind. Another hour passed with Hevan wasting time by checking his rifles sights again and again. They were late. He began to worry intel had been faulty, but as he was about to pack up, the door on the roof opened. Guards walked out, holding crates, and spread out in a wide circle. Then, the target walked out, followed by more guards. Then, several stormtroopers walked out.
Hevan cocked an eyebrow, zooming in with his sight and standing ready. He knew who the buyer was, just not the individual buying yet. Scholae Palatinae were on Corrillia. A small person walked out, surrounded by guards, wrapped in a deep cloak, before pulling the hood down. It was a woman, brown hair in a bun. Hevan, as typical of him and his disinterest in anything that doesn't immediately affect him, had no clue who she was, but knew she was likely important. Killing her could lead to all out war between the clans, something that, despite the smile the idea brought to Hevan's face, was probably not the best idea. If she attacked him, he would fight back, but he thought it would be best it he did not kill a high ranking member for a rival clan.
He watched through his sight at the deal, the sight focused on the target's skull. They seemed to be shaking hands, and Hevan's curiosity got the better of him. He watched as guns were pulled from crates and displayed to the imperials, and Hevan knew now was the time. He knew that once this deal was secured, a trade agreement might be set up and that would frankly be bad. He took the shot.
The rifle cracked and the man's skull exploded. He reloaded and shot the sniper on a opposite tower, but by the time he had looked back, blasters were firing and the searchlight was out. He saw men running towards the tower and Hevan knew he was in trouble. Probably could had figured some exit strategy, but Hevan was never really a man famous for his foresight. He grabbed a winch, assuming and hoping the cable would be long enough, and set it to unwind. He fell faster than he thought he would, but slower than if he had jumped without anything.
He landed. Hard. Hevan rolled as he did so, but still was winded and stunned, and he tried to get up but collapsed. Cursing, he resolved to wait until he could actually walk before trying to exfiltrate, but soon heard the sound of feet running and men shouting. A guard burst through the bushes at the edge of the club perimeter and spotted Hevan. Hevan played dead but the man moved to inspect his now less painful body. The guard went to check a pulse, but was stopped by a stiletto piercing their kidney. Within 5 minuets the man would be dead of blood loss. Hevan sped the process up by slashing the guards throat with his duskblade.
Covered in more blood than he usually preferred, Hevan shakily stood up in time to see several stormtroopers aiming blasters at him.
"Ah. Suboptimal"
This post certainly had me feeling Hevan's growing impatience right along with him, so well done there in creating such an immersive step by step process.
That said, as far as an ACC match goes, the most important part of the Story is typically conflict -- or cooperation, depending on the Hall -- of some nature between the opponents. While Hevan did encounter challenges as early as the trip wire mine on the ladder and a lot of boredom, he only even saw Ras about three quarters of the way through a post over a thousand words. Even Ras being the one to notice him and attack him herself at the end would have been a more direct engagement. Without any action between the two of them, the post and the battle overall suffers.
This is a solid piece of work for a standalone fiction about a sniper completing a job, but remember that you aren't writing alone.