Locke knew that he had no chance to win this fight as it was. There were too many enemies. When he slew one, another took it's place. Occasionally, Locke could see Cethgus between them, looking for an opening.
He had to retreat, spread them out, and fight them on his own terms. Cethgus would have to wait. Locke doubted that the Obelisk would lead the attack. So far, he had waited for an opening to strike, letting the Massassi strike first.
As three more of the creatures attacked, one made a strike at Locke's head. The Krath sidestepped, sweeping his lightsaber out to the side, cutting the wrist off another. A third howled with triumph, stabbing at Locke's exposed midsection, but the Krath's sweep turned into a spin and he avoided the lunge, completing the spin with his weapon outstretched, removing the warrior's head.
That done, Locke risked a glance behind him. This clearing seemed to be an anomaly. The jungle was dense behind him, and there were no clear trails into it. He assumed the Massassi had thinned the jungle around their temple, using the wood for various tasks. The further they got away, the more dense it should be.
Seeing no obvious path to continue, Locke breathed deeply, trusting his Force-honed instincts to guide him. He dived into the jungle, hitting the wide leaves of low-growing bushes and ferns. He dived through vines, dodging what he could, slicing others apart with his lightsaber.
Behind, he heard beastial shouts as the Masassi attempted to follow. They charged into the dense forest, loudly crashing through smaller plants and pushing aside thick undergrowth. Despite their familiarity with this world, they were wider than Locke and less acrobatic. The jungle slowed them significantly, allowing Locke a lead. The Massassi began to string themselves out as they relentlessly hunted their quarry.
The first that reached him brought his axe down toward Locke's shoulder. The Krath pivoted, stepping around a thick, low-growing bush as he retreated. The Massassi slowly stumbled through it. Locke used the opportunity to cut the warrior's weapon in half. Then he spun, sliced once across the Massassi's chest, and continued on his way through the forest.
He heard more shouts in the distance; loud commands, howling, and wordless shouts of rage. Something akin to a horn blew, a long note that loudly pierced the jungle. Locke knew he was being hunted, but he was dangerous prey. He would not fall easily. Sweat beaded on his forehead and his chest. The air here was thick. It was almost like swimming. Running in it was truly a relief.
Locke charged through the jungle. He didn't take a straight path. Instead, he zig-zagged wildly, using the thick forestation to string out the Massassi warriors. They could have devastated an army in this tangle, but Locke was not an army. He was one man, and hunting one man in such an environment was a difficult task. Locke began encountering the warriors in little bunches. Sometimes there were two or three, sometimes only one. Each time, he quickly dispatched them and continued on his way. He didn't need to deliver a killing blow, as long as they were out of the fight.
Finally, after what seemed an eternity, Locke stopped. He panted, wiping his arm across his brow. Even a soldier's body could not continue forever as he had been moving. He reached out with the Force, searching for more pursuers nearby, letting his Force connection wash across the wilderness around him in a gentle wave. The jungle teemed with life, the trees seeming to glow in the Force. Larger creatures that had retreated from the loud fighting now crept closer, probably curious about the beings who had invaded their realm. Locke searched for the more complex signatures, the ones of those who hunted him. He found only a few nearby. One seemed different somehow, but Locke could not place why.
Surely that is not Cethgus, he thought. It was not the strong, dark side-infused essence he would have expected of the other Dark Jedi. As it came closer, he sensed a small group following it, though he could not say how many. It was not the army he had faced before, nor the small groups he had been fighting, but instead something in between.
Turning, Locke jogged further into the wilderness, letting his Force sense of the followers fade away. He began to hear sounds as they crashed through the forest, encouraging Locke to pick up speed.
Suddenly, the jungle ended in a steep cliff wall. Locke turned, following it, and it looped around in a wide half circle. He froze, turning toward the approaching beings. Somehow, a few of them had cornered him. He was tired, but he told himself he could deal with this.
Five Massassi lumbered out of the jungle, approaching cautiously. They formed a semicircle around Locke, one particular warrior at their head. This one was adorned in unique war paint, and Locke recognized him as the War Chief from the temple grounds at the beginning of the battle. He carried an axe with a large, long handle. The Chief stepped forward and spoke quickly to the others, apparently intending to fight Locke by himself.
The Krath stopped, lightsaber angled to face the approaching Massassi. He could probably fight them, but decided to try something different, first. The presence of the Chief afforded Locke an opportunity.
Calling on the Force, Locke amplified his voice, speaking much more loudly than he normally could. Words erupted from his throat, deafening to his own ears.
"Stop!" he bellowed, "you hunt the wrong prey. I am merely a test. The other wishes to manipulate you and use you! He is your true quarry! Your masters would be very angry to learn that you killed the Consul of another Clan. We are allies, and I possess much knowledge they would be interested in!" In truth, Locke had not spoken to anyone from Taldryan in years, and they were enemies on the battlefields of Korriban, during the Great Jedi War. Locke breathed, waiting. His throat ached, not used to such force pushing through it, but that was a minor concern.
The Chief stopped for a moment, before letting out what might have been a chuckle, in a deep voice, rumbling like the sound of boulders rushing down a mountain side. Then he hefted his axe and moved forward, showing no indication that he had understood or intended to listen.
Very well, the Krath thought. It seemed this Chief had a death wish. Locke waited for his attack, circling slowly, lightsaber ready at his side.
"Come at me," he growled, voice cold. The Chief's response was some taunt in his own language. He charged forward, and Locke prepared to sidestep and cut him in two. At the last moment, the Chief leaped to the side and aimed a wide sweep at Locke's legs. Unable to cut the weapon apart, Locke jumped back himself. He heard a growl behind him, and abruptly, pain enveloped his head and everything went black.
Locke awoke sometime later, though he could not say how long. There was a pounding pain in his head, pulsing with each breath. Two warriors were holding him by his arms, and his feet were dragging along the ground. Distantly, Locke wondered why the Massassi had not just killed him. He breathed slowly, blinking to clear his eyes, seeing that only a few additional warriors had joined the Chief and his minions. One, a few meters away, held his lightsaber.
Then Locke saw a familiar face. Cethgus stepped out of the trees, lightsabers in hand. It seemed the Massassi had been waiting to present Locke to their new master. He breathed deeply and calmed his mind. The Krath cycled ideas through it. He was an Epis, not some flighty Novice. He had been in worse positions before and would not give up now. His anxiety and his fear seemed to dissipate, and Locke prepared himself, drawing on the Force, not only from himself, but from the world around him. It pulsed along Locke's muscles, filling him and seeming to ripple along his skin. He raised his head and smiled at Cethgus.
Light exploded from Locke's body. The brief flash caused the warriors holding him to let go, and Locke rolled forward, seizing his lightsaber from the one who held it. He ignited the weapon, surged to his feet, and charged at Cethgus.
The Obelisk recovered, blocking with his own weapons. Locke felt his tiredness melt away as he pressed the attack. The Krath angled his lightsaber toward Cethgus' head, expecting his strike to be deflected. As it was, Locke spun away, deflecting one of the Obelisk's lightsabers and summoning the Force to his free hand. Electricity discharged from Locke's fingertips in a brief, crackling flash, targeting where Cethgus' second weapon should have been, but the Obelisk was not there. Instead the burst harmlessly evaporated.
Instead, the Obelisk had spun. Grip inverted, Cethgus sweeped each lightsaber toward Locke in an x-shape. He leaped back and danced around one of the watching Massassi, too fast for the warrior to follow. Surprisingly, Cethgus cut straight through the warrior, barely slowing in his assault.
It seemed the charade was over. The remaining warriors howled in rage, but the two Dark Jedi had already moved into the forest. Locke sidestepped in front of a tree, Cethgus' weapons cutting deep furrows in it. Locke used the brief slowing of Cethgus' attack to spin and strike toward the Obelisk's head again, but his opponent ducked and rolled beneath a low-hanging vine..
He came up much faster this time, attacking with a blindingly-fast flurry of blows, pushing Locke deeper into the wilderness. While the Krath desperately defended himself, he called the Force once more, willing the essence of it to gravitate from the air around Cethgus and envelope him. The shroud of dark side energy countermanded his enhanced motions, causing the Obelisk to slow. He tripped over a root that he otherwise would have easily cleared, giving Locke an opening.
The Krath retaliated immediately, stabbing through the Obelisk's shoulder. Cethgus continued forward, one lightsaber shutting down as it fell from his grip. Locke turned quickly and slammed the butt of his lightsaber into the Obelisk's head, sending him to the ground, Cethgus' other lightsaber shutting off.
As Locke approached the fallen Obelisk, the world seemed to slow around him, reverting to it's natural order. His breathing seemed louder and more labored as he stood over Cethgus, who had rolled onto his back. The Krath had not realized that battle had taken so much out of him.
"Well?" Cethgus croaked.
"I would kill you," Locke said, "but the Brotherhood needs you, and so do I."
Crouching next to the Obelisk, Locke retrieved his dual lightsabers and clipped them to his belt, doing the same with his own weapon. Instead, the Krath readied his blaster pistol. Then he hefted the Obelisk, struggling to get Cethgus over his shoulder.
"Fortunately, you are not too heavy," Locke grumbled, stumbling into the wilderness, away from the shouting calls of the nearby Massassi, blaster ready to defend them. Their battle done, he now had to find a way to escape this world with both of them alive.
"Locke smiled slightly as the Massassi warriors stamped their feet. The ground shook with rhythmic thunder. Locke looked around, slightly uncomfortable at the size of the circle. He looked at his opponent, the Zabrak Cethgus Tiberius Entar." Just a suggestion (this didn’t cause you to lose points) but when you said “The Zabrak Cethgus” it would have been better to use “the Zabrak known as”
"Must we fight?" he asked.- I think this is a little cliche, especially when it is two clan mates dueling.
"They stumbled, quickly raising arms in defense, as if stunned." Seems odd. If they're stunned...how are they quickly moving their arms in defense?