“Do you have any idea who you are talking to?” Zednich’s face twisted into a wry grin. “I told you, I was born for this. You should stop worrying about me,” the Jedi began running at an angle. As Bentre tried to draw a bead on the muscular frame, the the Jedi shifted his weight, sending himself into another direction.
“You are making this too easy.” the Obelisk muttered as he corrected his aim, and pulled the trigger. The blaster bolt easily found its mark, causing the Sentinel to let out a cry. The Massassi around them erupted in cheers. “I hope you have another trick in your book, buddy.”
He knew that the Jedi could not hear him over the din surrounding the pair, but he secretly hoped that his opponent could push back this setback. The Jedi Hunter wasted more than enough time sitting behind the console of a shuttle traveling from mission to mission.
Who can deny a chance to kick some Jedi ass when the situation presents itself? Bentre felt an innate desire to prove himself against someone who boasted so many battles.
The Sentinel grunted as his eyes glazed over slightly. A vein in his forehead was throbbing visibly now. With a wild cry, the Jedi charged forward, his eyes taking on a feral quality.
It didn’t take much for Bentre to sidestep the haphazard charge, though. He sidestepped easily, taking a few pot-shots as the Juggernaut passed him. The blows hit the Jedi’s torso but it didn’t look like he was as fazed as was expected. Instead, he kicked off the ground and brought his fist hard around a smooth motion.
Every fiber in Bentre’s body screamed, as he twisted just out of reach of the blow. Instead, the metal knuckles stuff his shoulder, causing him to wince, and pain radiated from the point of impact.
“Valiant effort,” the Assassin commented as he backpedaled. “Really, but come on n-” the next blow followed close behind, and the Jedi Hunter let out a gasp as he managed to step back just beyond his opponent’s reach.
“Stop talking,” Zednich growled, lunging forward into another strike.
“No, no, no I don’t think so.” Bentre shook his head, changing direction quickly to keep out of the Juggernaut’s reach. He took rough aim, and loosed two shots at the Sentinel, aiming for the feet this time. One shot made its mark, the other hit the ground noisily. “
The Massassi’s cries were growing into a dull roar now as Wolfram kept pushing his advance, even as each other step was drawing a painful wince.
“You have plenty of strength, I will give you that.” the Obelisk loosed another two shots, one into the Jedi’s thigh, and another into his torso. The looks of pain in the eyes and the slowing of his strikes made the final conclusion pretty clear. “I can keep running longer than you can. I don’t have to be but a little bit faster.” As the Sentinel’s movements slowed, his opponent had more chances to take shots freely.
“But see, my power pack is getting a little bit low, now.” Bentre leveled a final shot, bringing the inside of his elbow up into his off-hand palm to stabilize. “So as fun as this has been, I think we are going to have to finish up here.” With that, the Jedi Hunter pulled the trigger twice in quick succession, hitting the Sentinel in the center of his chest, and sending him backwards with a crash. He did not move immediately but after a moment tried to turn over with a groan.
“See, I cannot have you running back to your little pow-wow of Jedi. I am sure they would find this planet so very fascinating, but that data is above your clearance level, anyway.” the Assassin tilted his head with a smirk, placing Wolfram’s head in his direct sights, and pulling the trigger. The blaster smoked, but the its discharge could not be heard over the crazed screams of the Massassi.
As soon as I hike back to the Taldryan Military Institute, I will send my report to old man Locke. Then I will have to send a nice little message to Keirdagh and Howlader both while I am at it. I am sure the Consul and Proconsul will be displeased to know that a Jedi got onto their planet. He sighed, Good thing a disciple of Sadow was here to save the day.
He had smirk at that thought.
Wait until master Daedric hears about this one.
You should pay more attention to the venue descriptions. The Massassi are aligned with Clan Taldryan, and as a race are a subspecies of the Sith. Setting up this premise hurts how believable the story you are trying to convey is.
Your opponent is an Obelisk, and Human. Which nullifies both current applications of the term "Sith". This wouldn't be an issue in dialogue, as it is safe to assume a Jedi would use a blanket term, but you are referencing this in the meat of the story, to denote who he is.
Be more wary of the tiers of your skills. At +1 Endurance, this is borderline believable but could get you in trouble if you fall on the wrong side of the line.
You tense danced here. "Saw" is past tense, while "is" is present. As well, the last sentence is present tense while the writing thus far has been past.
This entire paragraph is in present tense, against the tense you have set before and after. Additionally, your opponent has +3 Athletics, which governs his ability to move, whilst you have +1. It isn't realistic for your first blow to connect so easily, with no apparent restrictions to his ability to move. Small typo at the tail end, "starring" should be "staring". Again, he is not "Sith".
Missed the closing quote on the dialogue.
Should be "Massassi".
"Sith" again, and a slight continuity error. You wrote Bentre as drawing his saber but never igniting it, so "back on" is out of place. This is a small tick, but I wanted to point it out so you might improve.