Tasha squinted at the Human derisively. "Do you really want to rush your own defeat Bentre? I would think you'd want to drag it on by flapping your lips as long as possible."
You see!? The voice hissed the words in rage. She mocks you and all you do is stand there and take it? Pathetic. No wonder she decided to go Sith. After seeing an Obelisk as weak as you no wonder she abandoned your Order.
"You little piece of bantha-" the words trailed off into an enraged growl. Stahoes rushed toward the Twi’lek, bringing the glowing blue blade down in a fierce chop. Tasha’vel’s eyes grew wide, and she barely managed to meet the blow. To his surprise, the Obelisk was knocked back by the force of her retaliatory blow. What is happening?
“You’ve been practicing,” he growled.
“You are slipping.” Tasha’s gaze was as ice, her focus clear in the sparkling of her green eyes. She lacked his finesse with a lightsaber. The next strike was just a fierce though. What she lacked in skill, she more than made up in ferocity.
The Corellian twirled his lightsaber about in a tight circle, tightening his grip on the training blade. The motion caused a pain to ripple through his shoulder. Kark. I tore something. That will make this a lot harder. He gripped the weapon, bringing the blue blade up near his face.
As he brought the weapon around at a different angle, Bentre realized that with the pain he lost a lot of the strength and momentum of his swing. As the Sith blocked the blow, Bentre felt his weapon leave his fingers. The training weapon clattered away, and its blue beam disappeared with a familiar whoosh-click.
“Are you giving up?” Tasha’s voice was a lot calmer than it had in previous fights. He was sure that the presence of her weapon helped this a lot. He would just have to take away her advantage.
“Never!” he leaped forward with a growl and a lunge forward. His fist aimed for her head as he threw everything he had into the blow with his good shoulder behind it.
“Idiot.” The word was simple, burning, and punctuated as the Twi’lek grabbed around his shoulder and arm and twisted hard. To her good fortune, it was the injured shoulder. Bentre let out a deep bellow of pain.
“Learn your place, Bentre. You may have bested me once. I am just as fast as you are though. Without your blaster,” she turned his arm prompting a grunt of pain and a slight whine in Bentre’s throat, “you will not defeat me. You do not want to encounter me again, Human on the wrong side of either blade or lightsaber. Next time, it may be your last.”
“I will not surrender,” the Corellian growled, trying to free himself from the vice-like grip of the female Sith.
“You have no choice,” there was laughter in her voice. “unless you would prefer I dislocate your arm.” She did not bother to wait for an answer, however. Instead of following through with the threat, Tasha pushed the Human to the ground and walked from the room.
“Just so long as you know the score, Bentre. An Obelisk like you should stay with what he knows. Don’t get in my way anymore. Or else you may pay for more than my lekku being stabbed.
The words were simple, their message clear. Stahoes glared after her. The Corellian had trouble simply picking up the lightsaber however, so he had no means of retaliation. Instead, he was left in the room, to wallow in his own pain.
I will have to make my way to the infirmary. He thought after sitting for about ten minutes. I will have to figure what to do from there. He nodded, seeing the sense in his thought.
To plan revenge. To get back at the little piece of slime for what happened today. He smiled at these thoughts. There is always plenty of time to work towards that.
Quotes around thoughts as if it's dialogue and italicized.
Should break up paragraphs of text so the post has better flow.
Some misplaced commas and grammar issues in areas - "The thought of becoming the best warrior, sharpened her as she repeated the phrase like a mantra."
Shit is not a thing in Star Wars - frak or some variant would be more realistic.