Kordath Bleu smiled at his fellow Arconan while drawing his saber. The Sith before him was younger, more muscular and far better trained in the arts of war. Bleu smirked at the thought that just because somebody was better trained, it somehow made them the better combatant. Sometimes it came down to the experience and the ability to adapt to the situation. Revs had his saber already activated, the emerald blade angled towards the Ryn in a classic duelist’s stance. Blue shook his head as he recalled the reasons the Consul had sent the two of them here.
’Take him with you to Karufr, Bleuboy. I know Celevon did a very good job teaching him to fight, and to kill for the Clan. Maybe you can show him the Massassi. An old and traditional group of warriors could be a good influence on him. And try and get him some more culture, for goodness sakes! It’s hard to send him off as an assassin if he just looks like a swoop ganger.’
Kord smirked, Atyiru had sent the kid off with him to ‘get some culture’. For the past week they’d been bouncing about Karufr taking in the sights and hitting the pubs. The whole time the Miraluka had seemed distant and tense. Kordath hadn’t expected much in the way of social skills from someone Edraven had trained, but he was bored of him at this point. Sure the kid acted laid back, however, he didn’t seem to give half a frakk about anything they’d done. So the Ryn had relented on ‘culture’ and brought the Sith to the temple of the Masassi. Somehow they’d wind-up in the sparring ring, because eventually everybody tried to kick the crap out of the Priest.
“They want a show, Revs-milad! Let’s make this good, eh?” he shouted over the din of stomping feet.
The Miraluka flourished his blade and tracked the Ryn as they slowly circled each other. A small smile played across the Sith’s face as he began to close-in on the Priest.
“This’ll be the most fun I’ve had on this fieldtrip, Kordath.”
Revs spun his blade once before moving forward and coming in with a downward slash. Kordath quickly stepped away, batting aside the follow up lunge and hopping back from the Sith. The Priest kept up this defensive strategy for a nearly a minute, parrying blows and dancing away. Years of alcohol and spending far more time studying scrolls and tomes had taken their toll. He was sweating and the young Miraluka wasn’t getting as frustrated as Bleu had hoped. The Sith looked focused, determined... not like he was exerting himself at all.
Feeling his shirt start to stick from the exertion of running away, Kordath glanced quickly to the side and had noticed the Massassi onlookers had started to turn ugly. He glanced between Revs and the restless red-skinned giants.The Ryn fell back a step and away from the younger Arconan's well-crafted strike. He grit his teeth and tried to keep the emerald blade from singing his moustache.
The blindfolded man smirked as he pressed against the Ryn’s guard.
“If this is the limit of your skills, Bleu, no wonder the Clan has to put together a rescue mission every few months for you.”
“Oh that’s just low, Blindy,” The Priest growled as he watched the Sith’s jaw twitch and clench in response to the name calling.
“Really? Are you going to resort to verbal jabs to make up for your lack of talent with the blade, little Ryn?”
Keeping a watchful eye on the other man, Kordath grinned as he used his tail as a counter-weight and fell backwards from the guard. The Sith stumbled forward, with a few choice words that his mother certainly wouldn’t approve of, before gasping in surprise as the Ryn used his momentum and a booted foot to drive into the Miraluka’s groin.
“Not...nice!…!” Revs choked out as he fell forward. Kordath grinned as he stood up tall before turning to take a little bow towards the Massassi warriors. Elated by the reaction of the crowd he failed to notice the Miraluka, properly angry now, already getting back on his feet.
Synonym rolls? Just like Grammar used to make?
Not a negative point, but just commentary since you are always complaining about hating to write combat: one minute doesn't mean anything to me, as a reader. How long is a fight really? How long is that minute? It's lazy, and a really simple thing you can adjust to drastically increase your combat writing ability without much effort. You can talk about how the attacks start to wear down a defense--arms growing heavier, breath getting labored. SHOW me how time is passing by SHOWING me how it effects the two fighters. Don't just tell me about it.
The first line was perfect though. You can write combat, I know you hate it, but if you say "I can't" you're selling yourself short because you very much can. /end WallyRant
I giggled.
MOUSTACHE. But yea, I know Vegetta can sing it, but I think you meant "singeing".