The teal blade flashed through the air as it met Kanis' own blue-hued lightsaber, connecting in front of the two Arconans as they dueled for supremacy before their earnest crowd. Screams of excitement from the onlookers had turned to grumbles of discontent, however, as their involvement via shrapnel was drawing more negative attention than they'd like. Besides, this had drawn out long enough - it was uncommon for two unknown Dark Jedi to be fighting here. Sure, on Karufr, the Taldryanites would get very drunk and start fighting each other, but these were newcomers with a lot of power. This didn't usually happen - most people recognised the Old Folks and their underlings. Someone higher up had to know.
The Titan had to approach this situation very carefully. Without a doubt the agents of Clan Taldryan were already swarming this place. In fact, Mirus could see someone talking into a throat mic very similar to his own in one of the shadier corners of the bar, a drink in his hand as a cover. This was not good. After all, Mirus Cavataio had been the apprentice of Consul Aslar - and for his betrayal thanks to the alchemists of Naga Sadow, was an extremely wanted man in this space. Mirus Hi'ija was not precisely the same person, but for all intents and purposes was - likely they would dispatch the Wardens to bring him in and present him before the Wroonian that was once his Master, before they removed his head. If they caught the traitor, then his death was an inevitability. Betrayal was rarely taken lightly by the Dark Side.
"Kanis," Mirus said quickly as their blades clashed, faces pressing closer together in a feigned sign of aggression.
"What's up?" the youth enquired.
"You need to defeat me. Excessively."
There was a moment in which the young Mandalorian raised an eyebrow, exceptionally confused. No opponent he had ever fought had ever asked to lose before, so this was indeed a first for Kanis. Hesitation scrawled its way across his face, unsure if this was the right course of action. He paused momentarily, lightsaber wavering ever so slightly.
"Don't question. Just do it," Mirus said, chiding him with but three simple words.
As far as combat experience and seniority as an Obelisk went, Mirus outshone him - Kanis couldn't question someone who had fought on so many battlefields too. If that was what Mirus wanted, then it was a thorough asskicking that he was going to receive. It was perhaps a little against his morality to fight a man who was going to give up that easily when he was relishing the challenge, but then again, beating the snot out of someone was great too and he could definitely make this a great story back home.
Kanis' focused face turned into a predator's smirk. Well, if he wanted it, he'd just have to do it.
Immediately the young Obelisk launched in with his lightsaber, the lion-pommeled blade flashing through the air in a vicious series of two-handed swings. Mirus drew his saber high and the two fought, equally matched to begin with as Kanis kept his strikes precise and measured, aiming for different parts of the body - slash, thrust, parry, driving Mirus further back and back with every single step that Kanis refused to give ground on. It was a focused fury that drove Da'uul onwards, battering back the Titan with every slash.
"Come on! You're not even a challenge!" Kanis taunted - and then he drew the Force into himself, letting it explode through every vein as he let the anguish of an opponent refusing to give him the fight he deserved push him, turning the dials to 11 on every setting in his body.
The saber swings became savage now, driven only by the desire to crush Mirus beneath the heel of his boot. The flying sparks cast by the clash of blades as the Titan fought desperately to keep himself going were the only sign that there was resistance - token as his defences were, there was still that deep-seated need to put on a good show for the onlookers. Such being the case, Mirus pressed against the young man's guard, their strength playing directly against one another - and finally Mirus found purchase against his foe's blade as he pushed his enemy back slightly through the Force, knocking him away momentarily to follow up with a charge.
The dance began again.
Every time Mirus stepped left, Kanis would swing right, blocking the Titan from every move he had like he could read the bulky warrior as if he were an open book. Skill and practise versus the preternatural sense that was the Force was on display here and Kanis' skill edged him out in that moment. Every so often Kanis would gift himself with a burst of speed to keep the Titan on the back foot, to confuse and confound as he approached from new angles. It was too much, when he was not trying his hardest. Mirus was willingly losing.
As the Mandalorian dashed right to come around the Titan's right side, Mirus could see where he was about to go and what he was about to do, coming in with a quick horizontal slash. Kanis' blade was flying through the air and the Force screamed at him, telling him to move, get out of the way - and yet Mirus raised his blade a little higher instead, allowing Kanis' weapon to slip under his guard and catch across his skin. One touch seared his right thigh. The next thrust gashed across his left arm and the third on his right thigh. Were it a perfectly committed strike aimed to kill from the expert lightsaber duelist that the youth was, then it would have been a perfect mou kei - the removal of all four limbs of the opponent, removing any ability to fight back. It was only the nature of their duel that the Mandalorian had not just brutally ended Mirus' combat career for the rest of his life.
The three burn marks seared like nothing else, like three suns blossoming to life across his arms and legs. Mirus crumpled instantly as the blade touched skin three times, collapsing to his knees as his body refused to fight any longer. Only the fact that he was incredibly resilient and a liberal application of the Force to push through the pain spared him from falling unconscious. His saber clattered to the floor inactive, the teal energy blade dying away like the final notes of a beautiful sonata. Unholy blue eyes looked up at Kanis as the youth raised his blade higher, ready to decapitate Mirus and end the man's life in that single moment with a single precisely savage swing of his sword-
Then, in the next moment, the world was consumed by darkness.
Voices cried out as the unnatural spread of thick black fog consumed the cantina, Mirus scooping his saber up through the Force and pushing his ability to ignore pain to the maximum. Kanis leaned down to offer his fellow Shadow Gate member a hand, helping the Titan to his feet as he regathered his senses. Every step, even to stand, was followed with a wince; being seared by a plasma blade was not the best way to spend a day. But he had to push through. They had to escape, now, before Taldryan realised what was going on. However, Kanis was not going to leave Mirus behind here. With an arm wrapped around the heavier man's shoulders while his adrenaline-fueled anger subsided, he helped Mirus limp away. Drinks were shattering and people were screaming, letting the chaos consume Spanky's as their fled out the door.
The agents of Taldryan were fully expecting to see the victorious Da'uul standing over the beheaded corpse of Mirus Hi'ija - but when the darkness subsided, there was nothing.
In the corner, an operative crushed his recorder out of rage - the Arconans had managed to escape. Damn them. This would not be a good report.
For the Arconans, though, a tall tale of Kanis destroying Mirus in combat to be told to shame the Titan would be a wonderful story over drinks after a successful mission.
Run-on sentence. Break this up.
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Run-on sentence. Break into two sentences.
This is actually good combat writing. Run-on sentence. Break this up. It's almost impossible to read clearly.
Battleteam is one word in the DB
Always capitalize the Force. Unless you are talking about a force of inertia.