If the Force possessed a voice with which to scream, that would be the sound permeating through Atra's skull. Time seemed to slow, so far as the pair's perceptions were considered, as the fatal puzzle pieces slipped into position. The muscles of Shi's arm shifted beneath his bronzed flesh, veins popping in protestation against the sudden force being exerted. Contained within the clenched fist of that arm, Nenshogeru carved a glowing path through the near non-existent space between the two Dragons. With each beat of Atra's heart, the pulsating blade of plasma grew ever closer.
...How disappointing... You showed such promise...
In a show of defiance, the Dragon of Snow's will lashed out, manifesting itself alongside his power as the invisible presence of the Force solidified into a barrier at his side. A triumphant growl hissed from between Shi's parched lips, his blade crashing into his opponent's metaphysical resistance. The sheer force of contact was inhuman, the wall of energy collapsing in upon itself but the momentary resistance it offered managed to throw both combatants off balance. Shi's long strides, pushed onward through his body's momentum, carried him past Atra completely, while the Quaestor's knees buckled and forced the Umbaran to the ground. What would have been most assuredly a fatal blow turned into a cleaving strike; the barrier shattering under the weight of the attack and allowing the sun kissed blade to cleave through cloth, flesh, and muscle.
Atra let out a long howl of pain, rolling in obvious discomfort upon the ground with his left hand pressed firmly against the faintly smoking wound. For what it was worth, the wounds of both men agonizing but not messy. As was so often mentioned, lightsabers were a more civilized weapon, the plasma neatly cauterizing any wound they created. Still, it was an experience far from pleasant for even the most masochistic of individuals. Planting his feet, Shi Long managed to halt his momentum before spinning about, his free hand gingerly exploring the fresh wound on the side of his face. "Maybe not quite that slow," the crazed man said with a glimmer of chaotic joy in his eyes.
After all, it meant he could play with his toy a little longer. The others broke so easily.
Vestigium of Duriel clattered across the floor of the training room, released from Atra's previously steady grasp as he struggled onto his hands and knees. The pain searing from his side like liquid fire fought to consume him, making his muscles weak as he fought to stand.
...You fail yourself, like you failed them all... Your parents died, you remained. Your daughter died, you remained... Perhaps this time it would be best that you did not remain, and the cycle continues...
Atra could feel Shi stalking ever closer, his aura of deadly intent preceding his coming. The pain was becoming too much, however, and Atra couldn't summon the will to silence the voice in his head, let alone focus on combat. He could feel himself standing at the precipice, staring into the void... or was he? Was that merely a lagging sensation? Had he already fallen into the darkness awaiting him?
Unable to control himself any longer, or unwilling to, Atra felt the last of his control slip away as a red-tinged fog fell over his thoughts. The heady rush of power consumed him, feral rage scorching through the fatigue and pain that ravaged his body. Taking a deep breath, Atra curled inward, his muscles coiling for several heartbeats before throwing his head back into a savage howl. Xue Long spun about and sprang to his feet, surrendering completely to the darkest depths of the Force whilst charging headlong towards Shi. Commendably, considering the abruptness of the change, Shi reacted impeccably, bringing his saber down like a cleaver. Xue kicked to the side, his body shifting just to the side of the blade.
Still, the weapon carved a glowing line through Xue's left arm, the cybernetic limb falling to the ground in a twitching mess. Within a breath, Xue was inside Shi's guard with his hand firmly grasping the human's throat. His grip was hard and vicious, gripping more with his nails than his fingertips as evident by the crimson stains that were forming around them. The momentum of their collision sent them several steps back, slowing as Shi found his footing once more. The Stone Dragon flexed the tendons of his neck for a moment, fighting against Xue's grip even as the Umbaran pressed forward with another show of might, slamming them the final few feet towards the wall. The sudden impact sent Nenshogeru falling from Shi's grasp, the fight quickly devolving into a brawl.
With a grunt of effort, Shi brought both of his hands up and slammed them against each of Xue's ears. The impact sent an obnoxious ringing coursing through the Umbaran's brain, his grip loosening against Shi, who seized the opportunity to slam his forehead against the Quaestor's own. Xue's legs buckled for a moment, forcing him down to one knee for support. Saliva sprayed from his lips in a snarl as the Umbaran shook his head hard before spinning about with a low kick that Shi managed to hop over. He kept the momentum of the kick going, planting his remaining hand hard against the ground and using it as a pivot point to swing his other leg into the air like a club. His strike connected, bringing Shi crashing to the ground as he was no longer supported by his firm stance.
Xue half hopped, half crawled towards Shi as he fell, as best he could with one arm and a crazed look consuming his gaze. As he did so, klaxons and flashing red lights filled the sparring room. It would seem that the powers that be had taken notice of their rather spirited match. Shi Long already had his arm outstretched, Nenshogeru sliding with haste into his waiting grasp, even before Xue was upon him. Even still, before either could finish the bout, the entry way hissed open and several troopers poured through the opening, firing a series of shots towards Shi and Xue alike. The shots were non-lethal, as clearly evident by the unique blue circular shape of the discharges. The stun blasts struck home, causing both men to cry out in frustration.
"What in the—" one trooper began to exclaim as his eyes traced the trail of havoc that had painted the chamber.
"They're still moving," another trooper interrupted in response to Shi struggling to raise his head. Another sequence of shots brought silence to the room once more. An officer pushed his way into the room, surveying it with a sigh of exasperation that was accented by the look of annoyance in his eyes. The man's fingers flicked over a datapad as he pulled up the records on the pair of Sadowans, letting out another audible groan as the data spread across the screen.
"Contact Consul Sonjie at once," the officer stated towards his second in command, "have him come deal with this mess."
The other man nodded in compliance and disappeared from the room, leaving the officer to figure out a way to keep the two men from continuing their rampage when the effects of the stun blasts wore off.
Grammar could be better. Reads awkwardly.
Love the imagery. You tried to cram too much into three lines, though. Breaking this up into two sentences would have read better I think.
This is technically not grammatically correct, but it kind of works in cadence with the rest of your writing. So, I guess there is that ;P. Not a mark, just something of note.
Excellent opening post. Sets the stage pretty simply, but cleanly. Ready Set Fight.