Darkblade stalked across the rooftops, watching carefully as his target moved through the bustling side streets of Nar Shaddaa far below him. Having masked his presence the Krath knew he would be completely untraceable for the the Sith through the Force. It had been hard to track the human down, as he seemed just as capable of masking his presence as the Anzat. Finally, after a three day hunt, Darkblade had finally managed to get a visual on Ingram, and had been following him for two days now.
What the Sith was looking for though was still a mystery to the Knight. Sometimes it seemed he was just running around with no real purpose, and sometimes he headed off towards places with a clear intention. More than a few times however, the Krath noticed that the Guardian was easily distracted by shiny objects. This brought an idea to the Anzat, and he had prepared a trap just slightly ahead of the Human.
Up ahead of Ingram the street turned into a 4 way crossing, where he noticed a slight scuffle, hearing blaster shots and screaming. The passing people gave a wide berth in the middle of the crossing as the Sith pushed his way to the center. There he saw a Rodian lying on the ground, shot between the eyes. The other victim, a human, was pleading for mercy as he tried to stuff his intestines back inside his cut open stomach. The attacker, another human, stood over him with a vibrosword, and chuckled slightly. “Tell me and my partner,” he said as he waved his sword lazily through the air towards his companion, “where you stashed the jewels you stole from us and I’ll make it quick and painless.”
The victim started to go into shock, but pointed towards the street heading to the right generally known as a dead end. The human flopped to the floor, his guts finally spilling out onto the street as the life fled from his eyes. The crowd quickly rushed in to scavenge any valuables from the fallen criminals, and swept the two killers aside. The Guardian started to shuffle towards the street he saw the now deceased human point towards, interested in the mentioned jewels. Darkblade had him hooked now, and watched as Ingram fell into the trap. As the Sith made it to the end of the mentioned street the two killers from before dove up behind the Sith. They had been hired by the Krath and would do his dirty work for him.
As the two assassins closed in on the Sith, Darkblade aimed his Lanvarok at the Guardian, took aim and fired with a smirk on his face. However, the Anzat’s smirk quickly faded from his features as he realised his projectile wasn't heading towards its intended target. Instead, it struck one of the assailants, the Krath rolling his eyes as the body tumbled to the ground. I really need to practice more with this thing, the Knight thought to himself.
Sighing, he watched as the Sith turned around, as quick as a snake and within the blink of an eye assessed the situation before him. He dodged the incoming attack with ease and reached for his blaster. As he got in behind his assailant, Ingram turned sharply on his left heel, pivoting his body around and fired off a shot at point blank range into the back of the enemy human’s head. The result was an explosion of gore, as bits and pieces of the skull flew across the street in all directions, painting the walls with the now deceased human’s brain. The now headless body slumped to its knees and fell chest first into the street with a sickening thud as blood gushed out and quickly flowed through the street.
Darkblade raised an eyebrow in surprise, he hadn’t expected a blaster, let alone that the Sith seemed so proficient with it. Jumping down from his vantage point, the Knight made his way down to street level, and after a few jumps from roof top to rooftop, he landed a comfortable distance from of the Guardian, weary of the blaster and turned to address him.
“Impressive work there, i didn't expect that at all Ingram.” the Krath said. “I’ve been tracking you for days wondering what you are doing out here. I’d like to know now.” The Anzat emphasized the last word with a growl.
The Sith had other ideas though, and brought his blaster to bear while pushing off with his feet and going into a sidewards dive towards Darkblade's left as he aimed down his barrel sights and pulled the trigger.
Good job setting up a background to the encounter without it feeling forced or disjointed.
It would have been nice to have more elaboration on the focus required to do this, considering you only have +1.
You repeat "Finally" in this sentence.
Good use of the aspects, but maybe incorporate it a bit more organically next time, describe the kind of things that drew his attention, etc.
The phrasing here is a little awkward. Maybe a different verb would ease this up.
You aimed and then took aim. Case of repetition.
This should have been "wary".
The "i" should have been capitalized.