As they passed through the heavy crowd of Menat Ombo’s central market, both Jedi earned curious glances from the local shoppers. Solari, however, found himself under their gaze the most. Mar on the other hand had been growing increasingly more distracted by the heavy thoughts weighing on his mind in tandem with the consistent and highly audible clunks which succeeded each of the Augur’s droid-host’s steps.
Meanwhile Solari, due to the lack of dialogue between Mar and himself, began to listen to the dulcet tones of his droid-host finding the sounds of advanced technology soothing amongst the hubbub of the market. Processing Mar’s demeanour and analysing it alongside all previous memories he had of his former Aedile, the Shard determined that the Human was not acting in his usual manner; Mar seemed worn-down, if he didn’t know any better Solari would’ve considered Mar to be ‘conflicted’ in some way.
“I have assessed your current state, factoring demeanour, gait and expression and as a result have determined there is something wrong, Quaestor Sûl - is this result correct?” The droids voice box thrummed in its familiar manner. Solari turned his head toward Mar as he spoke to him, emulating ‘normal’ Human interaction and in doing so he noted that Mar had moved his hand to grip the hilt of his lightsaber.
“You are aware, Councillor that there are many former creatures of Darkness amongst the Disciples of Urr, many of whom have been greeted to our ranks with open arms. Some of which have gone so far as to be given the honour of sitting on our Council, and yet they have not been called for their crimes against the Light and have avoided any chance at penance.” Mar took a pause as he spoke, looking at the Droid-hosts emerald eyes wielding a stern face. “I must test everyone who falls into this category, one of whom is someone I consider to be one of my closest friends. I do not seek punishment, instead I must see for myself that all repent their lives of wrongdoing and have truly converted to the Light.”
The familiar green glow ebbed through Solari’s ‘body’ followed by a few whirring noises before asking another question, “and you must begin with me? Here?” Solari dramatically waved one arm to indicate his distaste toward the idea of fighting in front of the markets' crowds. Mar nodded.
“They must see and it must be you, do you understand why?” the human asked as he drew and ignited his pure-white lightsaber - the dull hum of the blade was more than enough to halt all market-goers in the immediate area. Solari’s new lightsaber popped out of a compartment hidden within the arm of the droids body and ignited his light-blue blade in response.
“Your logic is that if you begin your hunt for justice with a friend then you will be free of nepotistic judgement in the future and it will show others that nothing will deter you from this crusade.”
Mar adopted the traditional stance of the duelist form, angling his body away from his opponent, immediately going for a deft lunge at Solari’s bodily working-parts - in response Solari brought both his arms up barely in time to direct the attack away from himself. Shien’s reverse grip and stance allowed for a swift response as he punched outward, arcing his blade toward what he believed to be Mar’s exposed flank. The exchange was fast, but even within the first few strikes Solari noted that the Human had the upper hand in a saber duel - he began to step backwards guiding the Quaestor into the alleys of the Market and away from the larger crowds. He knew distance was imperative whilst dueling Mar so he could utilize all of his own assets but the Human’s Makashi allowed him to always stay well within melee range, each parried strike only allowed more insight to the Shards fighting style and skill, inevitably revealing weaknesses in his defense.
losing footing Solari processed, defeat imminent - action required. Mar’s golden hilt danced through the air as it came around for another agile strike, the Droids arm slipped in between the incoming strike and as the light flare of clashing blades ignited within the small alley the glow of sabers were subsumed by the emerald glow of Solari’s ‘core’ before a great telekinetic force erupted from the Shard. Mar, knocked off his feet, felt as if he had just been hit by a speeding skiff but the fire of combat still seethed through him - adrenaline allowed him to tighten his grip on his Saber hilt and jump back to his feet.
Solari was no longer in the alley.
It seems like you have a tendency to miss possessive apostrophes. Several examples:
It seems to me that this is just a bit of sloppy proofreading, as a number of other times, you use it properly.
This should probably be formatted as:
Losing footing, Solari processed, Defeat imminent - action required.
Formal thoughts are usually expressed as quotes with a substitution for quotes (in this case, italics). This is not to mention the missing capitalization here.
Overall this is an interesting start to a fight among lightsiders, and it makes sense given the characters' backstories and preferences.