As the Warrior flew in, Andrelious, having been forewarned as to what his enemy was doing, thumbed the activation switch of his lightsaber. The crimson blade came to life with a sharp snap-hiss. Armad cursed and activated his own lightsaber, quickly altering his trajectory slightly so as to avoid giving his opponent an easy target.
Once again the two Sith began to duel, the taller and younger of the two flashing his blade around rapidly in an attempt to beat his slower, more experienced rival. Andrelious was finding the Sadowan far harder to defeat than he had expected, but kept striking with determined, powerful blows, not daring to give Armad even the slightest hint of an opening. He’d seen enough of the Warrior’s fighting to know that doing so could prove fatal.
After another exchange of blows allowed him to force the Sadowan’s blade to lock with his own, Andrelious saw his chance and hit with another wave of lightning. Armad pulled out of the lock to avoid the powerful current, but doing so left him vulnerable to a follow up. Andrelious slashed forward as the lightning died back down, but the Umbaran, still incredibly light on his feet, managed to dodge that attack, too. The Seeker snarled in frustration, yet managed to keep his nerve.
It was now Armad’s turn to appear to take the initiative as he continued his fast paced attacks, the curvature of his saber’s hilt only helping to further make his blade difficult to block. He moved to the left, and, almost before Andrelious had moved to block him, changed direction and attempted to move to the right, only to find the Warlord’s waiting lightsaber.
Using his short height to easily duck another attack from his opponent, Andrelious stepped back, knowing that Armad would follow. As he moved away, he used his free hand to begin to push at the cave’s roof with the Force. After a few moments, he returned to giving full attention to the duel, trying his best to ignore that a few smaller pebbles had begun to rain down among the pair.
Armad again tried a fast left-right combination, and thought he had Andrelious beaten to the punch when his blade cut through a falling stone. The Umbaran pulled out of his attack, resuming a defensive stance, and afforded a quick glance at the roof. To his horror, he realised that Mimosa-Inahj’s manipulation of the roof, whilst small in its initial impact, was beginning to start a chain reaction. Ever larger rocks soon fell, but Andrelious seemed to not care, and kept attacking, testing every inch of the Warrior’s defences.
“Are you insane? We’re both going to die here!” Armad yelled. He found himself forced to use his lightsaber for two things at once; both defending himself from parts of the collapsing roof, and from Andrelious’ continuous attacks. Eventually, the Sadowan’s patience snapped and he charged for the cave’s exit, hoping that his opponent would take that as the cue to begin his own escape.
Both Sith sprinted out of the cave, Armad far faster than his opponent, but soon stopped within a few feet of each other once well clear of the danger zone. Once again, their blades met, their attacks full of venom towards one another.
The intensity of the battle had begun to take its toll on the two combatants. Armad was a little slower, whilst Andrelious’ blows were less powerful than before. Reaching high above his body, Armad tried to take advantage of his superior height to end things, but, with fatigue now affecting his decision making, he’d neglected to adequately defend his lower half. With a growl, Andrelious ducked, slashing forwards directly at his opponent’s knees. His weapon cut through the Warrior’s left leg in one swift movement, destroying bone, flesh and tissue alike, leaving the Umbaran standing awkwardly on his remaining leg. With no time to adjust for the sudden change in his centre of gravity, Armad fell to the ground, screaming in agony. The crystal he had come for dropped out of the inside of his jacket, sliding along the rocky ground. Andrelious smirked at the Sadowan, before calling the crystal to his hand.
Pocketing the stolen item, the Warlord walked away, staring at Armad as he moved out of his defeated opponent’s sight. He still had the difficult task of getting back to his ship without a light, but he had got what he came for. Gaining a new rival was an unexpected bonus.
You fought well, Sadowan. One day you will seek me out for revenge. But I will ALWAYS be ready, Andrelious warned, speaking via the Force.
Armad lay on the ground, cradling the remaining stub of his severed leg.
One day indeed.
I would have liked to see more emphasis placed on the fact that you do not require much, if any, light to navigate based on your Species. Feels like a missed opportunity.
"As turned" should have a "he" in the middle, or some other identifier.
The question mark and comma are redundant here, especially with the comma misplaced outside the quote.
This is awkward repetition that would be better suited for obvious thought based dialogue than narrative.
A nefarious single space inserted itself before the period!
Would have liked to see a more descriptive use of the power rather than just a flick of your hand.