Foolish girl…
Spires of celeste and crimson danced over a stage of broken glass, their furious glow dimly reflected by puddles too shallow to be a danger to anything but the sparks that died in them. The embers hissed as they fell, accompanying the ceaseless screams of colliding plasma blades.
“I’ll never forget,” the young Miraluka spat at Andrelious, her face cast in a garish hue from the locked sabers that crept closer and closer. Her left foot shifted back through liquid and debris, digging into the ground as she pushed back against his weapon. Tiny swirls of blood mixed with the water and whiskey, scarlet stains appearing at the soles of his opponent’s white boots. “I remember, and I won’t turn my back on my promises. What about the promises you made, Andrel?”
The Sith scoffed as he leaned closer, pressing his advantage. “Arcona betrayed me first with that ludicrous trial. You and your summit branded me a traitor — it serves you right that I become one.”
“I’m not talking about the Clan, you ignorant bumblefluff!” Atyiru cried, blade shoving against his as her body twisted away, pirouetting out of their lock by the barest of breadths. The stink of singed hair followed her. “I am talking about your family! When you married Kooki, you swore to do what was best for her, through good and bad. When your girls were born in a bar just like this one, by my hand, you swore you’d see them safe and happy. What about all that?”
She struck at him, blade scintillating in a circular arc that met his parry in another shower of sparks. Her saber bounced away, carrying smoothly into another spinning strike that he again deflected with a flick of the wrist.
“I’m doing exactly that,” the Warlord sneered, turning away another stab aimed to disable his knee. “And nothing you spout is going to change that.”
The Seer frowned and took two steps away, twirling lightly on her cut feet, saber brandished wardingly before her, stance passive. “Andrel, if you just—”
The familiar chirp of a communicator came from her belt, four times. Her jaw clicked shut around whatever she’d been about to say.
“Fine,” the Arconan stated coolly, angling her body. Her brow furrowed as if in great concentration. “No more trying, Andrelious. I gave you a chance to leave peacefully. Now you go the hard way.”
“The Serpentine Throne has gone to your head, Knight Eight,” Mimosa-Inahj snapped, lifting his saber again, angled away from his form, and readying himself in the Force. “You’ll not accomplish anything here but defeat.”
He charged once more, saber arm whipping upright in a tight slash. She stayed utterly still even as the crimson of his blade lunged for her throat.
And then it...slowed...before it reached her.
Andrelious blinked sluggishly, feeling in that single instant like he was moving underwater, his limbs heavy. He could see as his arm kept moving, his clenched hand carrying his saber towards his opponent. He could see as she moved one step, ducking around the strike and into his guard.
The heartbeat passed, and time seemed to snap back into clarity just as her hand reached for his extended one, so close their cloaks brushed. Her fingers clamped down around his thumb and wrist and gave a very precise, very sharp, Force-fueled twist.
Crack!
Andrelious gave a shout as pain lanced up his right arm, his saber falling from his numb fingers. Atyiru’s grip changed, and she yanked him forward as she side-stepped, sending him face-first to the muddled floor. The old Imperial caught himself on his injured hand and collapsed in agony as it gave way beneath him, his entire arm throbbing.
The menacing hum of a lightsaber filled his ear, held so close that the left side of his face prickled uncomfortably from the heat. He turned his head just enough to save some of his skin from burning while peering up at the woman, the Shadow Lord, who stood over him, face cold and unforgiving.
And he felt from her, then, the same icy hate he’d seen directed at Sephilios Braxant.
=x=
Two beeps. A heartbeat. Two beeps.
It had been the signal she had been waiting for, the call to end this little farce of a dance she’d been leading the Taldyranite through. Everything was in place, everyone in position.
A small, quiet part of her regretted the necessity. But the rest…For all that you’re wrong about me, you were right about one thing. The Dark gives clarity just as the Light does. I won’t kill you, but I will use it to protect those that I must.
Holding her lightsaber carefully to her former clanmate’s neck, the Consul knelt down and placed a knee squarely in his back, over his kidneys. With her free hand, she plucked up his discarded saber and removed his blaster from his belt, tossing them aside.
“Listen to me very carefully, Andrelious Mimosa-Inahj,” Atyiru murmured, pitching her voice low and enunciating each word. “At this very moment, Timeros — you do remember him, don’t you? — and his agents have disabled your wife and taken your youngest daughters. Saskia is already in our custody.”
”What?!” gasped the Imperial, face twisting in a rictus of rage, pain, and panic. She dug her knee in sharply, drawing a strangled hiss from the man.
“No talking, just listening, or I give the kill order here and now.” She lifted her comm from her belt, waving it in front of the eye that glared up at her. “You will find Kookimarissia in the warehouse two streets east of that little shop you sent her to. Now, here is the very important part: you and she are going to meet your eldest child at the spaceport, and you are going to leave Brotherhood space, in silence, and never return. Your twin daughters’ survival depends on this.”
“You baby-snatching whor—”
Atyiru pressed a button on her comm. A voice on the other end, emotionless, immediately responded, “Orders, my Lady?”
“You have the children?”
There was a crackle, and the sound of infants crying somewhere in the background supplied an answer. She arched an eyebrow.
Andrelious made a sound like a choking growl and hissed out, “Please, no.”
“That is all for now. Proceed as planned,” the Miraluka said into the device, lifting her thumb and cutting the line. She turned her attention back to the Human in her grasp. “You and your family will be monitored. If you ever so much as breathe a word of shadows or think of Dajorran space, the girls will die. Remember that when you wake up.”
Embracing the Force, she drew her arm back and snapped it forward, fist cracking into the base of the Human’s skull. She heard a small, cartilaginous crunch as his face — and nose — smashed further against the ground, and gave a grimace. Waiting a moment, the medic checked his breathing and then rolled him onto his side so that he wouldn’t suffocate in his sleep on the blood draining from his sinuses.
Standing with a wilted sigh, Atyiru deactivated her seraphic blade and returned the hilt to her belt clip. Tabbing her comm again, she stepped delicately over the unconscious Imperial and starting wringing water out of her braid with her free hand.
“Yes, Lady Consul?” the familiar, stoic voice on the other end answered once more.
“Brother Caesus, dear, are you still in place?”
“Yes, Sister.”
“Good. Inahj has been taken care of. Make sure one of your men makes it over here to clean up. Maybe two. He’ll be heavy.” Exhaling another sigh, she went on, “How are the girls?”
“The infants are unharmed.”
“Good, good. You know what to do. Just leave them at the Praxeum’s doorstep when dusk rolls around. If anything goes wrong, Sorenn is in the know and can help, but I suspect it will be just as well. They’ll just be another pair of orphaned Jedi initiates.”
“As you command, Sister.”
He cut the connection, and she frowned briefly at the lack of goodbye. Shaking her head, the Miraluka turned from the ruined taproom and walked back out into the sunlit market street, drawing her cloak around her.
Ashla and Bogan keep you, my little goddaughters. You’ll be safe in the Light.
Missing the dash in "Odan-Urr".
The multiple "t"s aren't exactly a problem, but I would recommend something more creatively implemented in the future. The actual issue, though, is that there should be a comma before the quote ends.
You just established that there was only one Force user, then you use a plural identifier here.
You never noted your own saber activating, merely stated you were armed. This is a bit confusing for the reader.
As a general post comment, I really like the in-depth story and scenario you created. However, I'm not too fond on you moving into the cantina before any conflict actually concerns. After some discussion with the other Judges, we feel that this is a continuity issue, as you created a new venue entirely for the conflict to occur.