In the gloom and darkness Vorsa smirked. She hadn’t underestimated the man so much as tested his resolve. After all, getting a beating from time to time will show you your opponents worth. She enjoyed their little back-and-forth, the banter, the fistfighting; it all gave her a second wind and excited her to no end. Combat excited her to no end. It was a necessary breather from her usual monotonous day in the office.
Still, for being ‘just a Knight’ Delak was proficient, focused and effective. Her usual habit of poking and testing at someone's physical and mental limits was at an end, though. Now it was time to finish this little bout and get back to ‘business as usual’. The Neti picked herself up with an audible groan, straightened her back and neck, and walked slowly towards her adversary. Delak’s combat stance loosened ever so slightly as Vorsa extended a hand towards him in a peaceful gesture.
“This was a fine bout, Knight. It has been an honor,” she said with no small amount of gratitude in her voice. The Knight, slowly at first, took a step towards her and sheepishly extended his hand, taking her own. Their eyes met as their hands shook and time seemed to slow to a crawl.
Delak sensed the impending strike even before he registered any movement - an elbow smashed into his teeth, several of them flying away, chipped and broken. He ducked just as the Neti’s other arm moved in his direction, aiming his own uppercut at her midsection. Her knee struck him first, smashing across his lower jaw and cheek. The Knight stumbled backwards, unable to immediately perceive what had happened. She was so quick, so violent, he hadn’t even see the movement happen.
Vorsa called her blade to her hand again, igniting it with a swift whipping motion, and charged the bewildered Knight who had only managed to raise his own weapon in defense. Her strikes were wild and wide this time. In the complete darkness of the room, even her superior senses couldn’t make out what was flesh and what was steel. Though their sabers shone an eerie, ethereal light, their frequent locks would bathe them in blinding flashes, forcing both combatants to relent, recuperate and continue.
Delak held his own against the Herald once more, deflecting, blocking, dodging and retaliating in turn. His jaw hurt, his head ached, but he managed somehow. The duel became a ‘rush for the finish’, and one combatant would fall from exhaustion soon enough. But Vorsa was quick and Delak became more sluggish after her knee rattled his teeth. She was more precise in her art, in her deadly dance and where Delak held the better hand in endurance, Vorsa held it in pure skill.
Her saber blade connected, searing Delak’s shoulder. It was a flesh wound but one painful enough to make him back away. The General wasted no time whatsoever and charged the man, slamming her shoulder into his solar plexus. His breath escaped him as she slammed him into the floor. His skull banged against metal, spinning his vision in every which direction all at once.
“You still have much to learn, boy,” she growled, reaching through the Force to open the doors to the sparring room. “Now, begone.” The Neti focused all her mind and effort into a strong push through the Force. Delak felt himself being lifted off the ground and flung like a sack of Fern potatoes into the corridor outside.
Vorsa sighed, replaced her saber on her belt and slowly walked out. She gave Delak a passing glance and a smile. “Sooner or later…” she said without finishing the reference and walked down the corridor, followed closely by bewildered looks other students afforded her.
While the combat writing was good, there's not much story development here. Need more, particularly for a Story Mode battle.