Cold crept into KUDF Lieutenant Salazar’s bones, frost littered his clothes and a none too comfortable chill went down his spine every time he heard a creak or crack in the ice. It was unnerving how unstable the caverns were, but that was precisely why the General had chosen them. Having a military exercise in, what was most likely a death trap, was something only she would have done. Fear was a mind-killer and she wanted her men to have godly resolve and balls of steel. Deep down he believed that she wouldn’t have ordered them down here without good reason and without a back-up plan. At least he hoped.
“Yo, Lieutenant,” one of Salazar’s peers gave an offhand salute and delighted smirk as he approached from behind, “General wants to see ya in the command tent. Good luck.” Salazar groaned audibly. when the General summoned it usually meant something bad. He walked without delay through the camp their platoon had set up within the cave itself, moving past all other squads — as well as their amused looks — towards the General’s shelter. He stood at attention in front and before he could even announce himself an order came from inside, from Commander Sorenn: “Lieutenant, come in.”
Salazar slipped under the canvas the Commander held out for him and saw that the makeshift table was already set up, seismic data and info datapads littering its surface. There was one small bed in the corner for the Commander — since the General never slept anyway — and not much else except backpacks and climbing gear. The General and the Commander, both Jedi trained, lived a simple life to say the least.
Vorsa stood above the table, glaring at the data, calculating the multitude of outcomes of every action she planned. She wore a somewhat uncharacteristic winter uniform emblazoned with her KUDF rank insignia. Her face was dark and worried, which gave Salazar even worse chills than the cave outside.
“General, ma'am. Reporting as ordered.” Salazar clicked his boots together in a very stiff salute and maintained eye contact with the farthest wall.
“At ease, Lieutenant. Please take these with you.” She handed him a bundle of datapads haphazardly, speaking in a serious and none too friendly tone of voice, “Have them examined and analyzed by your tech. Your squad has spent the most time observing these cavers and you have the best insight and the most data from your sensors. Send me your results by oh-nine-hundred tomorrow. Dismissed.” She smiled weakly, clearly trying and failing to make nice, and turned back to her work.
Salazar gave Turel a confused look as the Guardian simply shrugged, smiled and pointed him towards the exit, again holding the canvas up for the man. As the Lieutenant literally escaped the premises, Turel rolled his eyes and turned to his mentor.
“Will you relax?” he asked with deliberate annoyance. “Most of the squads are already on edge because you are. Making him feel nervous makes it even worse.” He walked up to her right hand side, leaning on the table. Even through his clothes, his very masculine figure popped up at Vorsa like a magnet pulling metal: if she could have blushed, she would. His proximity made her even more jittery and irritated as she moved away from the table, hiding her unbecoming expression.
“I apologize if you feel me incompetent to run this operation, Commander, but the situation is what it is and it is keeping me restless. KUDF Command has no place ordering me and my men into a pit of death like this. What were they thinking? And the fact that you seem to be relaxed disturbs me far more than any of that,” she quipped a him in the same irked tone of voice.
“What can I say, Master? I have faith in your abilities, despite what you may think. I feel very comfortable in your company.” He smiled and bit down on an apple he took from his rations not a minute earlier. “Besides it is Command’s job to make our lives harder, though I must say spending time on a mission with you again has me all giddy.” He chewed on the apple with delight, making her even more flustered and annoyed. Everything about the man attracted her and drove her insane to the point of losing her focus, especially that sassy smirk. Had she the courage, she would have told him long ago, but this was neither the place nor time to do that.
The Neti groaned and trudged around the tent, frustration kicking in. Frustration at the current situation they were in, but also frustration that she was on a mission with Turel again, after a very long time, and that they were almost alone in the middle of nowhere. It was maddening. In fact she would have screamed were she allowed to, but she simply contained herself long enough to regain control of her feelings.
“It is also unnervingly cold in here. I can feel the frost crawl over my skin and this winter uniform does me little good,” she commented, trying at least to move onto another topic and keep herself focused on the moment.
Turel walked over to her and put his left hand on her shoulder. Usually she would feel at ease at his touch, calmed and serene just like so many times when they meditated and rested in the Glade of Meditation in the Praxeum. But today it only made matters worse. His touch was too intoxicating for her as it sparked their Force connection in ways telepathy never could. Her feelings would certainly skip across the ethereal bridge that joined them so strongly. He would know.
She moved away from him, rubbing the spot he touched with vigour. “Cold. Your hands are cold,” she lied, badly.
“If you’re that cold, I’ll keep you warm. Here.” he inched closer, unzipping his coat, wanting to share his body heat with her, to at least keep her leaves from withering. They had shared personal spaces before, many times. Never in a fashion she desired, but they did nonetheless.
“What are you doing?” she yelled out, clearly misunderstanding his intent. Inadvertently pushed beyond her own limit by her own imagination, Vorsa shoved the Guardian forcibly away. Turel stumbled backwards over the table and onto the icy floor behind it.
“The hell was that for?” he yelped, picking himself up and dusting his clothes off. “I just wanted to—” Vorsa’s punch to his jaw silenced him momentarily.
“That was for calling me incompetent earlier,” she replied with a raised eyebrow, rubbing her fist. “The push was for being too close.” She realized then that this might have been just what she needed: a small fist fight to get her soul burning. She always did her best work in combat or right after it.
The Neti moved back, giving her protege enough space to recuperate, and spread her feet and arms, readying for the confrontation. The Guardian stood up, clenching his aching jaw. “What the kark?! I won’t fight you.”
“You will,” she replied. “Honor demands it, as does my need to teach you some respect, my very young apprentice.” Her legs shifted closer to him, arms ready to snap at the slightest movement, but the Commander just stood there perplexed.
“If you will not fight me, I will fight you,” she lashed out with a jab which the Guardian easily deflected away. The follow up punch he could not deflect. Her uppercut landed squarely in his gut, followed closely by an elbow jab to his defending arm. The Neti pushed her apprentice back and smiled. It was a spar more than a fight: a friendly match between companions to loosen stress and pressure. They just had to make sure it didn’t spread outside the tent.
Syntax!
Note: This whole section where we see Salazar's reaction to the summons should also get its own paragraph in my opinion. As is, it is confusing because people could think that Salazar is talking, when in fact it's one of his buddies.
Didn't ding you for that French stuff, but being French myself, ALT-130 would give you the "é", but enough of French from me. ;)
Realism! (1/2) Technically, an uppercut goes to the jaw. Your fist starts from your gut and the movement heading along the chest and right under the opponent's jaw. Turel knows this, and continued the post with a hurt jaw and abdomen (which is a continuity error in his next post).