It is way too hot here, Bentre grumbled silently as he walked along the metal walkway. He wiped his head with his arm, bringing away a trail of sweat. It’s my own fault. I could have found a nice forest somewhere to camp, spent a weekend visiting Bastion, gambled at a casino on Nar Shadda, or even just found some backwater world to meditate. I can’t ever seem to find anything simple to enjoy anymore. He chuckled to himself and flexed a bit, letting out a slow breath.
The Corellian fidgeted as sweat ran down his back. Shaking his head, he shucked off his worn jacket, and pulled his shirt over his head. I very seriously doubt any of the droids or engineers on this planet are seriously going to stop a man mad enough to run around a facility like this without his shirt on. The shadow crossed his arms over his chest, enjoying what little comfort was afforded by shedding his clothing.
I wonder what kind of work Daedric has the others doing while I off on this little holiday.
Bentre had read a little about the history of this planet on his journey there, but even so he had to admit he was a bit disappointed. The warmth of the planet was making him feel a little drowsy, but the Sith wasn’t about to leave just yet. Spending hours in a freighter had made him a little stir crazy, and as long as he had come this way he might as well visit the sights.
“Gods help me,” he muttered below his breath, looking down at the magma below. Drawing a breath to calm himself, the Shadow sidled towards the edge. Lowering into a crouch, he stretched out a hand to ease himself into a sitting position. Drawing his knees to his chest, Bentre tried to assume a cross-legged position as he had many times in his own quarters.
Once in a meditation position, the Sith closed his eyes. In his mind, he tried to stretch out in the Force. As he sat, he began to get a sense of unrest about the planet. It wasn’t emotion such as might spark a rebellion or lead to a fight. It was a slow and gnawing feeling of unhappiness.
So some of the engineers here are less than happy with their chosen occupation. I can’t say that is the first time I have heard of such a thing.
As he sat, Stahoes realized that something else was amiss here. He could sense a hungry presence nearby. For a moment, the Corellian felt his face twist in a grin of anticipation. The presence was not only nearby, but it was getting closer.
No matter.
In his early days as a Battleteam Leader, the Shadow had made a practice of stalking about Myrmidon while shrouded in the Force. He had found that people were a little more honest with themselves when they didn’t believe the boss was watching them. It also allowed him to try to understand people like Rosie or Vicious. By seeing what they were like in relative seclusion he had gained a better sense of who each member was.
Hopefully this will work this time.
Letting out a slow breath, the Corellian submerged himself in the Force. He imagined a stream, flowing around him smoothly as he lay still below its surface. He was determined to be calm and was determined to go unseen.
It was only as Stahoes had disappeared from view that he heard the sound of a gruff voice rise over the ambient noise. “We can provide all the things you need, but you have to realize that you are asking a lot of me.”
Just stay out of sight. Just stay calm. Just stay out of sight. Just stay calm. The Shadow repeated the silent mantra.
The footfalls of what sounded like two sentients quickly approached.
Just stay out of sight. Just stay calm.
“I understand your predicament,” a deep voice rumbled over the hiss of the molten rock below. “I also would not ask if this were not of the gravest importance.”
“Yeah well,” the engineer did not sound wholly convinced, “I can only tell y-”
Just stay out of sight. Just stay calm.
“What is this?” the engineer’s voice became more clear as he drew closer. Opening an eye cautiously, Stahoes glanced at the source of the voice. A Rodian had picked up his clothing, and was examining it. A large sentient being stood nearby, dressed in unfamiliar garb. Orange eyes shined out even with the light from the fires below. “What is this doing here? These don’t belong to anybody on my team.” The Rodian seemed to pause for a moment as he withdrew a blaster from the holster inside the jacket.
“That’s the thing,” Bentre let out a loud sigh as he allowed himself to slip back into view. “Those clothes are mine.” He unfolded his legs, and slowly proceeded to stand back to his feet.
“Who are you?” the engineer demanded. He held the blaster loosely at first, but there was agitation in his voice. The Rodian’s grip tightened on the worn blaster, and he pointed the SE-14 in the Sith’s general direction. Somehow though the Corellian was not very worried. Stahoes continued to take his sweet time getting up.
“I think you will want to drop my blaster,” Bentre commented as he drew to his full height. As his hand dropped to his side, he allowed the illusion covering his eye to fade. “I really would rather I didn’t have to cut off more than one hand if you damaged it.” To emphasize his words, the Sith ignited his lightsaber, casting a sapphire light across his face in sharp contrast to his glowing red left eye.
“No,” the gruff-voice uttered the single word with authority. “You will be doing no such thing.”
“Who are you to think you are about to stop me, buddy?” Bentre flashed a challenging smirk as his eyes caught the glint of a lightsaber at his opponent’s side. In response, Xan ignited his own weapon, his yellow blade humming to life.
“So it has to be that way, huh?” The Human flourished his blue lightsaber playfully, watching the Dashade with an almost childish delight. “Let’s have at it already then.” He drew his body back into a firm stance, his hands sliding into their familiar hammer grip. “Maybe this trip won’t be as dull as I thought.”
Awkward wording due to the repetition of "seriously."
This is really nice imagery.
This confused me for a while. It wasn't clear when you initially wrote taking off the shirt that the blaster, and it's holster would have come off as well. You mentioned "clothing" bunch of times, but didn't say anything about a weapon until the Rodian already had it in his hand. To avoid something like this, in the future I'd at least reference the fact that the blaster left Bentre's body as well initially.