A bell peal of pain-tinged laughter answered her.
Her grip on her pistol spasmed, heartbeat galloping in her chest so hard that it felt like her ribs would crack. She clenched her hands so tightly that her joints cracked.
Arcia wasn’t even a half-breath from pulling the trigger when Atyiru gave a strained smile and shook her head. “Ashla and Bogan, you are an absolute bumblefluff, Destri.”
“Stop calling me that,” the Admiral hissed, feeling another tremor under her feet. It wasn’t at all like the vibrating of deck plates and ship hulls that she lived and breathed, and each shake rattled her raw nerves even more.
“Oh, shush. You’ve got one shot left in there. You’d best be very sure of where you want to put it.”
“Or what?” spat the trembling Human woman.
“Or nothing, save a wasted bullet. Look, I just wanted to have a talk, Destri—”
“I said STOP!”
A sharp crack split the frigid air, not a bullet, but the ice beneath their feet. Arcia felt it in her bones more than she heard it, a terrible shockwave of sound and pressure that stopped her heart and wracked her marrow as the frozen ground rent itself apart at the seams. The glacier heaved, ripping her pistol from her hands and off her feet, throwing her across the sheer, crystalline floor that split open around her.
Reality upended and inverted, over and over, tossing her body like a child’s toy. She hit the ice twice, three times, pain blossoming in countless places, and then—.
The ground disappeared underneath her.
Her stomach lurched in the half-heartbeat of weightlessness she knew, and then she was falling, a scream ripped from her throat as gravity caught her and dragged her down into absolute blackness.
She thought she heard another scream, thought she felt a hand clamping down around her flailing arm, and then something warm wrapping itself around her, spinning her about. Her blown-wide cybernetic eyes caught a last glimpse of the cavern’s ceiling lit by weak lich-light, far above through a crack in the world, and then there was a vague sensation of impact.
Then, darkness.
=x=
Consciousness came slow, and pain came fast.
Arcia blinked open her eyes to a cobalt-tinged gloam, barely able to make out the pale lines of her hand crumpled in front of her nose. Her whole body throbbed and ached, and stabbing agony shot down her spine when she gasped in a short, sharp breath. Her dim vision swam at the pain, and for a moment her mind faded back into murkiness before it resurfaced.
Her thoughts crawled. What...where...ow...I…
And then they clicked, like bullet in a barrel.
I’m alive. How am I alive? The fall. I fell, we fell? Atyiru. She knows. She— The cave collapsed and we fell and—.
“A...ar…” a voice croaked underneath her.
Arcia jerked, sucking in a startled breath, and immediately regretted it as the pain came back double-time, muscles and bones all over pulsing.
“Ar...cia...yo...okay?” came another question, and this time the Human felt the ‘ground’ rise under her cheek at the speaker’s wheeze. She realized right then that there was a body below her, soft curves and strong lines, and half-pushed herself up on numb arms, scrambling backwards.
“Atyiru,” the Admiral said, spying the white lines of braid and robes and squinting at the Consul where she laid prone on the icy floor, limbs splayed awkwardly.
More pieces clicked in her quicksilver mind: an earthquake collapsed the cavern. I fell down a fissure. And she...dove after me? Shielded me? Saved me.
The Miraluka did not respond, just panted shallowly where she lay. Arcia’s neck prickled, and she watched as the other woman gave a pained sigh, silver brows furrowed deeply.
Long minutes ticked by, making her anxious. She eventually asked again, “Atyiru?”
“Just going about...not dying...my apologies,” Atyiru replied slowly, shifting to painstakingly sit upright. She wrapped one arm around her middle while the other hung limp at her side. “Are you okay? I spared some energy to heal yo—”
“I’m...I’m fine,” Arcia snapped, drawing back a little further and standing despite the knifing sensation of what was surely a cracked rib in her chest. The crevice they’d landed in was wide but short, quickly turning into a cleft to narrow to fit more than a knife blade through, as far as she could see by the vegetation’s dismal glow. The fissure must’ve closed up behind us as the quake progressed. She was not familiar with much in the way of geological behaviors, but it was an easy enough inference.
“Are you...going to keep...acting all hostile and giving me kark...or are you going be nice and help me...find a way...out of here?” Atyiru asked, some irritation leaking into the Miraluka’s ever-cheery tone.
“Oh, don’t think I can’t do both, Jedi. I am quite the multitasker.”
Unexpectedly — or, perhaps, predictably — the Consul laughed, although it quickly cut off in a groan. “Ow, ow, kark that’s sore.”
“Our injuries will be the least of our worries soon,” Arcia stated, wrestling all her lingering panic and fury and imagining jettisoning it from a mental airlock. She had a task at hand, and she clung to it as hard as beskar, anchoring herself in it. Her expression smoothed even as her brow wrinkled in alacritous thought, sharp eyes flickering around. “I’m stuck down here alone, thanks to you and all your absurd secrecy. Unless there is some alternate air source, we’ll suffocate. And, even if there is air, we’ll freeze to death without an escape route.”
“Hey, look at the bright...side. You’re not alone! You’ve got me.”
“And the good news just keeps coming!”
“What do you know, you can act like a witch and plan at the same time. Praise my gods”
Arcia glared at the Seer. “Can you move?”
“Yes.” As if to prove as much, the Miraluka climbed gingerly to her feet, wincing slightly. She stepped towards Arcia, reaching out. “Now let me take care of that rib already. I can sense your pai—”
“Don’t touch me,” the Admiral snapped, twisting back. Her injury twinged, making her hiss. “Stay out of my mind and stay away from me. We’ll get out of here, but then…” she trailed off. She did not know what then was going to be, but she knew she couldn’t trust the Miraluka, couldn’t let Atyiru ruin all she’d built out of the ashes of Destri Corden.
The Consul drew herself up and frowned. Arcia turned away, briefly examining her person to check for her tactical knives before returning to her inspection of their prison. She thought she heard what sounded like a trickle of water and wondered if there was an underground reservoir of some sort nearby — the lichen would need some source of damp, after all. If they could reach it, perhaps the water would lead out somewhere, either to its source or its end.
With a microscopic grimace, Arcia wrapped an arm around her ribcage and started walking, hearing the dogged footsteps of the Shadow Lord behind her.
A very beautiful introductory post which included some lovely foreshadowing..!
Another description I liked, with a nice way to describe Mind Trick:
Nicely done..!
Syntax!
No comma needed after flakes.