The Kiffar’s sapphire stare roamed the inside of the shop as he considered his answer. Bolts of synthcloth lined shelves along one wall, and the opposite wall displayed natural fabrics and leathers. A large circle was marked on the buffed hardwood floor next to a ceiling-length mirror; the light filtering in from the window opposite the mirror no doubt made the spot ideal for fittings. A muffled groan drew Terran’s eye, and he saw a man - the shopkeeper, presumably - bound and gagged in the corner. So there’s a witness. Lovely. A smooth rumble from the back of Uji’s throat pulled the Kiffar’s attention, and he turned back to face his fellow fugitive.
“I was visiting my sick mother, not that it’s any of your business.”
The Human quirked an eyebrow. “You’re an orphan,” he deadpanned.
“Look…” Terran began hesitantly, mentally cursing Isshwarr for telling his peers about his parental search. Kark it! What’s a good lie he can’t easily check on? “Princess Rainbow Sunshine sent me to ‘maintain diplomatic relations’ with our new allies, whatever that’s supposed to mean. I was just—”
“That’s why I’m here,” Uji replied. His voice, if possible, was even dryer than before, and his eyes showed nothing but disdain for Terran. Shaking his head in frustration, the Galeran pushed past his Kiffar counterpart and stomped towards the door.
Frak it all, Terran thought aggravatedly. If he leaves now, like this, I’ll get pinched.
“Fine!” Terran clamored, “Fine…I’ll tell you.”
Uji Tameike stopped short, turning to face the Qel-Droman, his arms crossed in front of him. With eyes colder than Hoth, he inclined his head briefly to the Kiffar.
Sighing, the Kiffar lowered his eyes and spoke, his voice hesitant. “I met her a few months ago.”
“Her? Don’t tell me you were visiting some whore,” Uji sneered.
Terran’s head jerked up and he stared blaster bolts at the Obelisk. “Watch your karking tongue before I rip it out.” His voice cut the air like a vibroblade. Then he breathed deeply, twice, before continuing in a more stilted tone.
“She was a soldier in the Tythonian army during the O’reenian incident. Somehow she got separated from the bulk of the forces in the forest outside the city. I came across her running and hiding from a squad of enemy combatants. I got them off her back, but I was injured in the process. Shot in the gut...she patched me up, half dragged me off the battlefield to get sewed up. I’ve still got the scar. In a way, it makes me glad of the bacta shortage at the time. Everytime I see it, I see her face.”
The Kiffar paused for a moment, gathering his breath or his wits - or both - before continuing in a tone that was both smoother and more sullen. “Anyway, that’s how I met her. After the fighting ended, I tracked her back down here in Menat Ombo. Turned out, she had been injured herself before things settled down. A piece of shrapnel from a frag grenade tore of up her knee and she ended up getting discharged. She stayed with her dad for a while as she healed, but he got killed by some crime boss over his gambling debts and she ended up in those lovely accommodations you saw. I offered to help her out, or to let her come live with me...but she’s as stubborn as a Wookiee and twice as fierce.”
Terran sighed through his nose and ran his hands through his sweat-damp, tousled hair. “So there you have it. I visit when I can get some time away from Port Ol’val. We’re trying to make the best of the situation. I’d be down on my knees begging her to marry me if she wasn’t so determined to right her own ship.”
The Galeran eyed him suspiciously for a few seconds before replying. “Why haven’t you ever mentioned her before?”
“...We’re part of the Dark Jedi Brotherhood, Uji. We’re the bad guys, here. No one in our lives is ever truly safe. Especially not the ones we love.”
Silenced stretched between them as the Obelisk considered Terran’s words, their eyes locked. Eventually, the Kiffar looked away and ran a hand through his hair again.
“So what’s her name?” Uji asked after a moment.
“Layla. Her name is Layla.”
For a time, the Human was silent, his eyes crinkled at the edges and his lips pursed in consideration. Finally, he nodded his head - in acceptance, if not belief. That’ll do, Terran thought to himself. He doesn’t have to believe me, so long as it buys enough time for us to escape and for me to get offworld.
“Alright,” Uji said, his voice steady despite the edge of irritation. “The first step, then,” he explained, walking over to a pile of garments on a chair near the shopkeeper’s till, “is to get out of here. I have a landspeeder parked just outside the district gate on Market Street. If we can get there, we’ll be set.” Rummaging through the pile, he tossed a riot of color to the Kiffar. “Here, put this on. It’s the perfect disguise.”
Terran pulled apart the tangle of clothing then stood there, alternating between staring at the clothes and back at his temporary companion. “You have got to be kidding me,” he exclaimed, holding up the striped gown and pink shawl in exasperation. “There’s no way my duster will fit over this!”
Uji opened his mouth almost immediately, as if expecting a protest, then paused with it agape as he processed the Kiffar’s words. “Your duster?”
“Yes, there’s no way it’ll fit. Just look at it,” Terran replied, pulling it open on one side as if displaying it on a runway. “You can do what you want with your clothes, but there’s no way I’m leaving my baby behind.”
The Galeran through up his hands in frustration, then extended a single finger. He wasn’t pointing at Terran. “Just put it on over the top. No one will spot you in a crowd.”
Grinning at his counterpart’s obvious consternation, the Kiffar buttoned up his calf-length coat and slipped the dress on over it. He glanced in the mirror, his expression disgusted, then turned back to Uji. “This thing is hideous.”
The Human gave him a flat stare, and Terran couldn’t stop himself from adding, “And it doesn’t accentuate my curves in the least.”
Suppressing a grin, he made sure the gown wouldn’t drag the ground and strode lightly towards the door, grabbing a lacy chapeau from a rack as he passed and settling it onto his head. He looked back towards Uji and made a motion with his head towards the doorway. As the Shadow took a step over, the Kiffar pulled the door inward.
And found himself face-to-face with a surprised peace officer.
The man’s fist was raised in preparation to knock, and Terran quickly debated whether he could raise his voice enough octaves to fool the officer. Then the man’s narrowing eyes reminded the Kiffar that he hadn’t shaved in a few days. Scratch that plan.
Before the lawman could reach for his blaster, Terran grabbed the man’s raised wrist in one hand and placed his flat palm against the door. He shoved the door forward with a Force-fueled burst of strength even as he quick-stepped backwards, yanking on the policeman's wrist hard enough to dislocate his shoulder with a dull pop. The heavy wooden door slammed into the man’s face, crunching his nose flat in a spurt of crimson before Terran’s backwards momentum brought the officer careening into the shop’s interior. The lawman fell to his knees and Terran took another large step back before pivoting on his left foot and kicking the officer with his right. The blow landed solidly on the man’s temple and he collapsed in a heap.
“So much for the perfect disguise,” Terran muttered, stooping to strip off the officer’s coat and using it to towel off the blood spatter on the door.
“I said they wouldn’t spot you from a distance, dragqueen.” The Human’s voice was overtly aggrieved, but Terran was fairly sure he detected an undercurrent of amusement creeping into it.
“Fine,” the Kiffar replied, satisfied that the doorway was clean enough to not draw attention. He motioned for the Galeran to lead the way. To his surprise, the Shadow considerately returned the gesture.
“Ladies first.”
A growl sounded in Terran’s throat as his magnanimity resolved. He pointed at Uji, his eyes turning deadly serious in an instant. “If you breathe a word of this to anyone, I swear by my pretty floral bonnet, I will end you.”
Before the Human could reply, Terran turned back towards the doorway and stepped out onto the side-street. A handful of citizens were standing near enough to have seen what happened to the peace officer. Most of them did their best to pretend they had seen nothing. One, however, leaped into motion as the pair exited the shop, making a beeline for a half squad of guards thirty meters down the byway.
The two Arconans stopped and exchanged a glance.
“What now?” Uji asked.
“Umm…” the Kiffar trailed off, considering their options. “Run?”
The Obelisk sighed. “Run.”
While I love the pun, your space ran away that belongs after the ellipses. I also notice this continues in the rest of your dialogue here. So I won't bother pointing those out.
It's a touch unclear who is talking initially, though it can be inferred that it is Terran muttering out loud. Your reader shouldn't have to make that assumption though.
This was a good post. The intro portion risked running too long, but you managed to cut it off in time to set up the scene. I've seen this a lot in your writing and it is something you do well; you create a believable scenario and bring in enough detail to draw the reader into that tale.