He's too powerful, Aexod thought, spitting half coagulated blood that was dripping from his mouth. He was in no shape to fight back. He felt as if he was being drained of his life force, growing weaker every second. The bitter taste of his blood mixed with the sour taste of shame that he felt for the first time since he was a child back on Iridonia. He was defeated, and there was nothing he could do about it. It was foolish of him to think that he could defeat a Knight in direct combat. He had never been humiliated like this in his life.
"I am sorry, Master, I have failed you." Aexod said in a semi-whisper, the words leaving his mouth reluctantly. When word of this got to the rest of House Marka Ragnos, he'd be condemned to death for sure.
"You'd better be, next time you won't live long enough to apologize." The Anzat responded, loosening the grip he had on his apprentice. "Now get up, we have to get out of here."
It was too late for that. The rustling of Turu-grass implied they were no longer alone. In a matter of seconds, they were surrounded by four of the same orange beasts that had attacked Aexod earlier. He stood up, using the Force to dull his pain receptors, making him able to focus on the urgent matter at hand. Darkblade redirected his attention to this new threat, and took up his Makashi lightsaber form, preparing for the attack. Aexod, desperate to survive, picked up the two blades left over from his zhaboka being cut in half. As the beasts charged forward, the master and his apprentice stood back to back, in a formation they had practiced many times, leaving no weak sides open.
Darkblade made quick work of one of the beasts, using his lightsaber to split it in half, watching as the intestines spill from the now desecrated body. Aexod didn’t have as easy a challenge as his master did. Using one blade to parry the furious leaps the Akul made, he only managed to summon enough strength to inflict minor injuries to the rough skin of the savage with his off-hand. Finally, in its ferocity, the Akul made a reckless jump toward the Neophyte’s left hand, which left the right hand open for a forceful strike on the beast’s neck. The Akul fell to the ground, it’s growl diminishing into a painful whimper.
The split second Aexod had to regain his composure was enough for him to realize what had to happen next. As the second beast charged at him, he tapped into the Force once again, making sure the beast couldn’t change his direction. At the very moment Darkblade had slain his second Akul, Aexod leapt out of the way, watching as the last of the beasts tackled the Knight from behind with full force, sinking it’s teeth into his back. A scream of pain exited Darkblade’s mouth as he was knocked to the ground, dropping his lightsaber. The Akul kept lashing at his opponent, spilling his blood all over the already drenched savannah ground. Aexod quickly rolled to the side, grabbing the Anzat’s already ignited lightsaber, and swiftly cut off the beast’s head, stopping him from killing his master. That was his job now, and it was served on a golden platter.
“You’re too forgiving for a Sith. Your empathy and trust got you where you are, rolling on the floor and screaming in pain!” Aexod yelled, pointing the lightsaber at it’s former owner. “You should have killed me when you had the chance, but you were too weak. I don’t need a weak master.”
Darkblade rolled over and let his gaze fall upon his apprentice. The injuries from the battle left him scarred, his lungs were pierced, preventing him from breathing normally.
“You...will never...succeed…” he said, and exhaled deeply for the last time in his life.
“I already have,” Aexod replied, thrusting the lightsaber in his hand into his former master’s chest. He made his way back toward their ship, hoping that the scent of fresh blood from the battle would redirect the other Akul’s attention from him.
Good start to the conflict. I like the idea of the impatient student Daniel-san type vs. Evil Miyagi.
Also, good use of your sheet and your opponent's with the Beast Control and the Force Interrogation I Feat from the other player.
Well done..!
Syntax
This section above was a bit confusing. At first I though that you had been subjected to a Telekinetic strike or had been shot at because of the "piercing blow" to the left shoulder, and that because of the blow, you noticed the Akul up in the trees... (above you). But he couldn't get the bite off kinda clued me that an Akul got the better of you.
Summary: with a small rewrite, that section would have been much clearer.