The Zabrak's chest rose and fell steadily beneath the clinging shroud of his tunic, the fabric drenched in sweat that seemed to add a perceptible weight to it. His pale, tattooed flesh shimmered in the reflected light of the lava flow, belying the extent of exertion that Cethgus fought not to show. His lip curled in something akin to a snarl as Ata's words reached him, travelling through the heated air that separated them. "Your life was forfeit when you reached planetside, Quaestor," the Proconsul spoke with finality.
Such unerring arrogance.
Resolve fell over the Entar like a familiar cloak, steeling his focus and his thoughts towards a singular goal: to end everything now, in a single instant. His grip shifted around his weapons in an attempt to reaffirm his grasp as the hilts threatened to slip free as his pores continued to exude sweat. Bending the Force to his will, Cethgus felt a surge through his body like a jolt of electricity and sprinted forward, waiting until the last possible moment before planting his feet in the shifting dirt of the ground and coiling the muscles of his legs in preparation to launch into the air.
Through the haze, Atra held both hands outstretched with a look of impressive concentration contorting his expression. For only a moment, just one, Cethgus' thoughts were painted with confusion. Then he felt as if deaf, for the first time since the battle began. Deaf—for how else could such a sensation be described—to the existence of the Force itself. The Proconsul could still feel its power, like a whisper upon the wind but he could not hold it within his grasp, the strands of power flowing through the cracks in his metaphorical hands like water through a sieve. He could still call upon it, but only with what little remained within his palms.
It was too late to halt his momentum, his body was already working through the motions before the shroud of Atra's most sinister ability fell upon him. All he could do, for what it was worth, was adjust his intended launching angle. The Zabrak leaned his body forward just before his legs pushed off the ground with as much augmented force as he could muster. Instead of the intended, graceful arc that would have allowed the Proconsul to crash down upon his foe like a bird of prey, his new vector was one of pure distance, low over the flowing molten substance beneath him. Cethgus could feel the heat licking at his flesh, the promise of pain the likes of which he had not experienced before. The hanging fabric of his tunic ignited into flames as it hung even closer to the radiating warmth.
Luckily for the Proconsul, this particular lava flow was far from the widest of those that scoured the surface of Oricon like molten veins. He crashed into the far bank like a projectile, pain searing through his left shoulder as it absorbed most of the impact as it fell into a mixture of dirt and debris. His sabers deactivated moments before he made contact, eliminating the possibility of self-mutilation as he rolled hard through the spraying dirt, a trail forming in his wake as the shifting surface absorbed his remaining momentum and brought the Zabrak to a skidding halt.
Fury painted the edges of the Entar's vision with a red hue as the reality of his new pain dawned on him. He spat dirt and blood upon the ground as he shifted his gaze towards where he knew Atra to be. His left shoulder was, at the very least, dislocated though he could feel bits of metal shifting beneath his flesh, and he knew his target would not allow him to time to heal the damage.
In that Cethgus was not wrong, as his vision locked upon Atra who had his hands now stretched outward from his core, his right hand holding his saber in a sort of half-grip with his fingers outstretched. Atra's power lashed out, using his extended arms as a focusing channel, tendrils of the Force wrapping about small pieces of debris, little more than sheet metal leftover from the tattered ships of old. With a grunt, the Umbaran swung both arms inward, crossing over each other in front of him. The sound of groaning alloy fell harshly upon their ears for the briefest of moments before the debris gave way to Atra's desires.
Cethgus scrambled to his feet, grimacing through the burning pain throbbing outward from his shoulder. He was not about to allow himself to become sandwiched between the newfound projectiles, if only for the sake of his own sense of pride. Even as his body lunged forward, his left arm swayed limply behind him like little more than a flowing scarf. One of the ship panels crashed into his forearm and sent a fresh wave of pain crashing through the Zabrak's body. The Entar bit his tongue bloody rather than allow himself to cry out, refusing the Quaestor any such satisfaction. Still, he had to glance back to assess the damage. It was only then that he realized his secondary saber was gone.
He had no time to search for it, however, and no real ability to properly wield it in his current state for that matter.
He toggled the activator on his remaining saber, the pale blue blade hissing to life and cutting through the center of his vision. Cethgus let out a battle cry, forcing himself into another sprint to towards the Umbaran. Atra pushed up from his kneeling position and centered himself wearily, his muscles burning in protest just as Cethgus' were. As the men squared off once more, it seemed like little more than their resolve and honour remained to fuel their actions.
The Entar raised his saber high, leaving himself completely open in favor of an aggressive strike, or so it seemed. He rolled forward, while bringing his arm down like an executioner's axe. The maneuver allowed the Augur to close the gap with sudden speed, not allowing Atra any time to prepare a counter. The Seer stumbled to the side, biting through the pain in his leg and almost snarling in anticipation. Cethgus managed to rise up once more, his left arm hanging limp at his side, coated in a mud formed from dirt and blood mingling. Dirt clung to the sweat upon his face as well, coating the right side of the Zabrak's panting face.
Atra thrust his cerulean blade forward, his mouth hanging open as he took in air through ragging gasps. His movements were sluggish, a far cry from the speed and precision he had exhibited at the beginning of their bout. Cethgus' swatted the thrust to the side, but lacked the energy to bring it about into a countering strike. Instead, their weapons remained locked and Atra took a shaky step inward.
The Proconsul pushed back against his towering opponent, but neither of them were performing at what could be considered their peak levels. Even as one pulled upon the Force to reinforce their strength, so too did the other. More to the point, Atra did not tire as quickly as was expected, his body surging with adrenaline in answer to the thrill of combat. It helped him to power through what would be his limits and keep going, if even for just a little longer.
"I will not," Cethgus hissed through clenched teeth, "allow you to cause strife in my clan."
Atra growled, an almost completely animalistic sound, pressing forward with the last of his remaining strength and causing the Entar's knees to buckle and the same time as his arms gave way. "You brought this on yourself," he managed to grunt out just before his saber met the slight resistance of flesh.
The Umbaran fell forward, collapsing on top of the Zabrak even as the combination of both their blades nearly cleaved cleanly through Cethgus' torso. As their bodies slammed against the ground with a resounding thud, both sabers deactivated and an uneasy silence fell upon the field. Atra's chest managed a heaving, shaky breath as almost his entire body rose up and down in the effort. His body was on fire, pain and exhaustion mingling to the point that a strange numbness coarsed over him. The Umbaran's mismatched gaze fell on Cethgus' as the last of the light began to fade, the final spark of life retreating into the darkness. "You chose your path," he grumbled wearily, "and this was the only end to be found."
A series of roars in the distance reverberated with such ferocity that Ventus could feel it rumble inside his own chest. He had to stay awake, but the world was already fading to black around the edges of his sight. His fingers worked numbly over his belt, fighting to feel the cold sensation of his communicator. When he finally managed to grasp the device, he was already struggling to keep his eyes open. He managed to activator the emergency transponder before his weak, quiet words followed. "Atra Ventus... in need of immediate extraction... These coordinates," his words trailed off even as the sound of the predators grew louder.
He just couldn't stay in the conscious realm, the battle having taken the last of his body's strength and then some. As he drifted into the unfeeling embrace of unconsciousness, he wondered if he would awaken again, or if this was—at long last—his final battle.
Wouldn't that be something?
With Cethgus?
"Hue" not "hew."
There's a lot going on here. The first sentence doesn't really make sense, on its own or in context. Repetition of the word "advantage" in the second sentence doesn't really help the matter. You could also do with a more liberal use of commas in the middle couple sentences to separate the dependent and independent clauses.
"Romantic" is a really odd choice of words for this particular locale.