The heat and pain of the blood pulsing from his wounds reverberated up Lexic’s leg and wreaked havoc on his threshold for pain. The Quarren shrieked in deep agony with each fearful tug of his punctured leg from the rusty and bloodied shrapnel, which clung to the torn ropes of his muscle and refused to budge. The predator marched to the edge of his rickety trap and leered into the eyes of Lexic, who was now both his slave and his toy. Praying to the gods of haste, the Quarren frantically assessed his reach for an escape route or tool to battle away the Iridonian. His tired and tearful eyes were intruded by flashes of lava bubbles and the stench of smoky sulphur thicker at this level. Begging for the aid of the Dark Side, Lexic clawed at the weak fabric guarding his orange shin and in one clean stroke his removed the material from his leg. Digging into the weakened muscle, the Warrior summoned his Dark Side pool and flooded his torn leg with the ability to mend. Patching the blood loss and stitching up the skin around the broken muscle, bone and nerves, Lexic structured a make-do ravine in his limb. The bleeding was now guided deeper into his leg instead of onto the shrapnel and the Quarren tugged his leg clean from the metal.
Lexic carefully peered up the paramount of the rickety embankment and saw the Iridonian with both of his favourite weapons reverse ignited, ready and able to reap the Quarren’s soul clean. Without hesitation, the Warrior punched the air towards his stalker and a ghostly fist planted strongly into Cethgus’ stomach. The Augur soared and curled his body into the air, then glided down into a graceful step onto the spine of a wreckage behind them. The Iridonian admired the quick and mighty punch as it proved there was a combatant hidden inside Lexic, he only needed to draw it out long enough for a memorable duel. The Quarren gritted his fangs and forced himself up the crumbling ramp his opponent created, then stood tall and proud at the summit. He awaited his final confrontation with insurmountable passion, his bloodied fists clenched tightly and his sapphire eyes glaring to the lime spots of Cethgus’.
“It’s now or never, stumpy. You can run, but you can only dodge so much.” Lexic’s mocking tone came with a sly wink that set Cethgus into fury.
Bolting through the air and crushing the metal and soil beneath his feet, the Augur raced at his opponent with sound-breaking speed. He held his lightsabers behind him that streamlined himself and was a smaller target. Lexic erupted into a dance of strikes and somersaults through the air, the Dark Side arching from his fists and shooting through the air towards Cethgus. Streaming through the archway of phantom fists blasting towards him, the Iridonian found no difficulty evading the incoming attacks from the weaker warrior of the two. With his strength failing him and the precipice of internal bleeding cusping the life from within, the Quarren limped forward and met his opponent at the median of the battlefield and sent a much stronger strike through the Dark Side and against the Augur’s chest. The cold and painted metal against his chest imploded and slammed itself into Cethgus’ thick chest muscles, causing some slight pain where the scarring of his Arconae tattoo used to reside. Crumbling and weakening in endurance from the strike, the chest armour was beginning to fail in it’s mission. Lexic improvised the standstill, launching and glided into the air towards his target and cast a barrage of light but fast ghostly strikes which found their way against the shattering armour. The Iridonian slid away from the majority of the strikes, but his armour was useful only for decoration now; shards and pieces collapsing just from the slight heated winds gracing his chest. He quickly unclipped the fragile chest armour and they fell to the floor with ease, as if they were freed from their master to die in peace, and pieces. Cethgus who felt the stinging sensation of the telekinetic strikes from the Echani student, shrugged and struggled to become used to the pain.
“My armour limited my movements anyway. My sabers are all I need,” Cethgus proudly stated. He watched for his opponent’s next move, all he needed to do was bide his time and wait.
“You will need to be quicker, I can do this all day,” Lexic retorted quickly. He limped backwards once again. The use of his leg was fading, but he needed to keep his distance just enough so he could mend it later. Cethgus used the hilt of his blade to point at the Quarren’s leg.
“Can you really,” His cold and uncaring tone mocked the injury.
“Let’s see how much more your body can take then,” Lexic’s stance dropped to centre himself and stared at his opponent in confidence, while the Augur’s eyes assessed the situation.
This is a beautiful first paragraph..! I like the imagery you're trying to invoke. Minor edits:
Really well done..! And very beautiful. I bolded the word floor because it's usually associated with a structure. Either parts of a building, a ship, etc.
As a reader, I was confused because I was enjoying a panoramic view of the vista you painted, and then was suddenly thrown off by something that I hadn't expected seeing there. In this case, I think you used the word floor as a synonym for the words ground/terrain because people have penalized you in the past for repetitive words? In this case, I'd just remove the words to make it less confusing since you're referring to the terrain already.
Did you also notice that you used the words Augur, Iridonian, Proconsul, Cethgus, and Sadowan to describe yourself in the first two paragraphs? This is also very confusing for your readers. Try alternating between one or two to describe your character and one or two at the most to describe the opponent, and don't forget to use pronouns like he, she, his, her...