The Augur surged forward, launching himself at the nearest pair of criminals. His blades lanced out to pierce the two men, their death cries mingling with the screams of the charged bolts of plasma that hurtled towards the two Sadowans. Cethgus roared with anger as he continued to carve through several more gangsters. The blasters followed the path of the Proconsul, the murderous crossfire cutting down some of their own men. One fell, transfixed by a bolt that entered his temple, his eyes glazed over in death as he slumped to the ground.
Sanguinius stepped back from the furore, his lightsaber moving only to deflect the few bolts that came his way. The Jedi had not wanted any of this to happen, his presence on Nar Shaddaa had served only to leave more death and destruction in his wake. His lament at the blood spilt found a voice, “Why, brother?” the Vanguard stopped his backwards step and began to move forward, his blade sweeping out to intercept bolts and deflect them back to disarm the offending aggressors. He would stop this before anyone else died.
“Cethgus!” he shouted, brandishing his lightsaber in defiance of the Marauder. “Face me, brother!”
The Iridonian whirled around, his tattooed skin coated in the blood of his foes. His breast heaved as he glared at his student. Several criminals lay at his feet, some dead, some still alive, begging for help. The impish figure walked over them, his lightsabers lashing out to cut their thread of life.
The sight of the blood-soaked figure was a terrible one, one that led to several bowels loosening and many of the remaining gangsters fled, their swoop bikes roaring as they sought to escape. The leader of the criminals shouted after them, cursing their respective mothers and their courage. Cethgus diverted his gaze at the gang leader and lashed out with a fist, his rage fuelled strike unleashing a telekinetic blow that fractured the man's sternum and put him out of the fight.
“I'm sorry, where were we?” the Augur turned back to his former student. “Something about me killing you?”
Sangiunius' eyes narrowed in response, he had tried to set an example that even the worst of men could find redemption. That no one was beyond saving. But his master and brother refused to even countenance that opportunity. While he was a Jedi, the Anaxsi was no pushover and was determined to bring the errant Zabrak to account.
“You presume too much, Cethgus. You are no longer my brother,” His lightsaber came up in a defensive stance. “I turn my back on your teachings, you are no longer my master.” The verdant green blade cast a shadow on the Vanguard's face, it's pure brilliance a metaphorical light in the darkness, an allegory for the Jedi's presence in Naga Sadow. He would bring the piercing truth of light to illuminate the all encompassing darkness.
Without warning, the Jedi struck, unleashing a flurry of furious blows that caught the Proconsul off guard. The strikes were caught between the pair of solid lightsabers that opposed him. The trademark wolfish grin of the impish figure answered the gritted jaw of the Anaxsi. “Oh brother,” the syllables trickled off his tongue like sweet treacle. “how you upset me, disobeying your beloved master.” Beads of sweat trickled down their foreheads, causing rivulets in the dried blood on Cethgus' skin. This created a marbled effect that only added to his ghastly appearance.
“Have you forgotten all that I have taught you?” his sibilant voice full of joyous anger at the chance to punish his errant student. “Have you forgotten the pain and suffering I caused you?” Cethgus broke the saber lock and kicked out, driving Sanguinius back. The Augur followed up with several swipes of his blades that Sang avoided, turning his body to one side and ducking under a second strike. With the Jedi off balance, Cethgus drew upon the furnace of anger that fuelled his unholy strength and sickly blue lightning erupted from an outstretched hand, his second blade momentarily discarded.
A wellspring of calm and peace existed within Sanguinius' mind, the cornerstone of his might. He withdrew into it, embracing it and funnelled it outwards. The lightning splayed harmlessly across an invisible barrier, as the Sentinel knelt on one knee, his arms outstretched.
The emanation of lightning drained Cethgus, his strength already sapped by the fight between the two Sadowans and then the slaughter of the not so innocent gangsters that had waylaid them. The last tendrils of electricity dissipated, allowing the Jedi to rise up from his crouch. “I remember your lessons, Cethgus.”
Sanguinius charged forward, his defensive stance thrown to the wind as he went on one last ditch effort to neutralise his former master. Both of the Sadowans were flagging, their strength ebbing away from the relentless attack after attack of the pair. Parrying, riposte, deflecting, striking back. The endless cycle between the pair slowed, both Cethgus and Sanguinius refusing to back down. Their shared history gave each of them the burning desire to be the victor.
The Anaxsi, sensing the deadlock, made the decision that his life was forfeit. He would strike without restraint, knowing that to do so would probably condemn him death, but also knew it was the only way to take down his former master. Sanguinius surrendered himself to the Force, trusting in it to carry him through the anvil of war. The Jedi charged forward, barrelling into the Iridonian, his size and weight overbearing the smaller Sadowan. The two collided and fell to the floor, each struggling for supremacy.
The weight advantage that Sanguinius had helped him, allowing him to slam Cethgus' head against the ground several times. The Iridonian's skull reverberated off the hard earth, scattering what organised thought he had. What little sense the Augur had left was lost as the Jedi unleashed one last Force fuelled blow that caved in the Pronconsul's skull.
The Quaestor pushed himself up off the body of his brother and staggered backwards to turn and throw up. He retched again, his body dry heaving as Cethgus' brains leaked upon to the dusty earth. The Jedi had killed, had made a conscious decision to kill that sat heavily with him. He tried to justify it, that he had given the Iridonian countless chances to turn away, to give up the Dark Side. Yet, that reasoning sat hollow with Sanguinius as he dropped to his knees by his fallen opponent and sobbed, tears flowing down his cheeks as he realised that he had killed his brother, the closest thing he had to family. "Goodbye, my master." his respect for the fallen dark sider still apparent.
A Jedi was to give up all attachment, lest it weaken him. Sanguinius now truly had no one, now he was a true Jedi...
Feels clunky to repeat derivations of "true."
"Student" doesn't need to be capitalized here.
This sentence is missing a subject.
This ends up being a run-on sentence.
"in a" and "where" are the correct words here.
Again "student" is not a proper noun.
Same thing here. "Master" isn't a proper noun either.
You do something like this every match, and you need to stop. Sang has 4 points into Soresu, and your primary lightsaber Form, Shien is not the best at 1v1 lightsaber dueling. Cethgus can't plausibly overpower him this early in a fight since Sang has the same Might score as you do. Based on canon examples, there is no such thing as a minor lightsaber wound; the pain is incredibly intense.