Sanguinius stood, waiting for the brash Zabrak to attack him once again. The Quaestor had tested many Knights to be in his time, judging them to be of value to the Brotherhood. Aexod had potential, if only he continued to use his intellect and not allow his rage to consume him like so many Sith did.
The Anaxsi stepped backwards, his lightsaber darting out in a succession of quick blows as the Iridonian assaulted him, the well used armoury saber smashing against the Equite's stalwart defence. The Hunter tested Sanguinius not, the Sentinel having faced tougher enemies.
The attacks slowed as Aexod wore himself out against the unbreakable wall of Sanguinius' deflective parries. The number of patrons in Spanky's thinned as one by one they were knocked out or beaten down by the two hefty bouncers or their fellow patrons. The barman ducked behind the bar as a lithe Bothan was tossed against the back of the bar, smashing bottles.
The bouncer who threw the Bothan swore as he realised the financial damage he had just done would come out of his pay check. He turned to face the two Sadowans and charged in, grabbing a broken chair leg to use as he moved forward.
Sanguinius saw the strongman coming behind Aexod, even as the Zabrak continued to wearily attack the Warden. The Anaxsi's free hand shot out to grasp the shirt of the Hunter and whirled him around out of the way. Sanguinius' move put him in the striking path of the oncoming improvised club. He turned into the attack, taking the blow on his right shoulder.
The chair leg smashed against the shoulder, splintering and sending the bouncer staggering backwards in surprise. The Jedi pursed his lips in minor annoyance at the blow before quickly clamping down on the emotion. He brushed his robe, clearing it off the flecks of wood that remained upon it.
“But how,” uttered the burly human, gazing in awe at Sanguinius.
Sang pointed to the offending shoulder, “Bionic.....”
“Oh....”
“Now, if you don't mind, I have a lesson to finish.” the Sentinel admonished the bouncer.
“Of course, please...” the human backed away, his palms facing Sang in supplication.
The Jedi turned back to the clearly exhausted Zabrak. “The lesson continues, padawan.” the epithet was one Sanguinius gave to all Journeymen under his care.
Aexod snarled in defiance, his anger and hatred at himself for not being strong enough fuelled him, it leant him energy that he could use. The Shadow barrelled forward, his blade lashing out in fierce strikes. Sanguinius parried several attacks before counter attacking. His lightsaber whirling around to push the Ragnosian back. Sang pushed Aexod backwards, his jade green blade seeking to disarm his opponent.
Sanguinius would end this now, before anyone from Taldryan responded to the brawl in their favourite watering hole. The Jedi focused on the reservoir of power within him, projecting it outwards in a wave that blanketed the area surrounding him. The wave sapped Aexod's strength, making him drop to one knee.
The Quaestor loomed over the Zabrak, a figure of authority to the rebellious Journeyman. Aexod lashed out one last time with his lightsaber. Sanguinius' free hand seized Aexod's and wrenched it down to smash into the floor. Pain jolted through the Shadow's arm, but he refused to let go of his armoury saber. His stubbornness and the fact that his master had drilled the idea that he must never part with his lightsaber deep into his subconscious allowed him to overcome the pain. Sanguinius slammed Aexod's hand down again, before clobbering the Hunter around the head with his swiftly deactivated lightsaber hilt.
The rage fuelled Zabrak was too deadly to the civilians to leave armed, for Sanguinius wished to avoid any more bloodshed. “Desist, padawan,” Sang ordered, his voice iron. “You have lost.”
Aexod spat at the Jedi, “I will never lose.”
The Sentinel smiled, despite his concern. He believed Aexod was worthy of Knighthood. Not because the Hunter won, but because he refused to give in, even when the odds were completely against him.
“Good,” Sanguinius released Aexod's hand and stepped backwards, offering an outstretched hand to the kneeling Shadow, the wave of dampening energy ceased as Sanguinius considered the fight over. “I judge you worthy of Knighthood, Aexod.”
The words reached the Hunter through his fugue state and revitalised him enough to grasp the offered hand. Aexod rose to face the Sentinel, his face thunderous. “I will defeat you one day, Jedi...”
Sanguinius smiled magnanimously and outstretched his hands. “I look forward to that day, padawan, but for now?” The Quaestor glanced around the wrecked bar and the bouncers who studiously ignored the pair of Sadowans. “For now I suggest getting out of here before Taldryan turns up and finds someone to blame for all this mess.”
Should be "He was here".
Should be "spun around".
Due to your use of punctuation, namely a comma, the "G" should not be capitalized.
You were probably going for "every person within Spanky's".
A well constructed post that sets up the scene and the story for the coming bout, establishing motivations while you're at it. If there was a major flaw to point out for improvement here, it would be your repetition of words, "strike" being the main offender. Try to vary these up (without becoming a thesaurus) in order to maintain a keen interest with your readers.