High above, the assembled Dark Jedi came to their feet as one, their collective gasps of surprise rolling over the Coliseum floor and down the Central Shaft, a wave of aural shock cascading throughout the mines. They watched, unblinking and gape-jawed, as the Warlord arced backward, first curving then straightening, an arrow hurtling towards certain death. The following silence that draped them was funereal. Even one so leashed to the Grand Master as Master Dupar should have known better than to make so blatant a mistake as this. His power was innate, earned. His position, however, was given, and so could be taken away.
Destroying Shi so early in the contest should have made that possibility a near-certainty, but Pravus’ unchanging expression, and the sound which answered their own, told the crowd they needn’t have worried.
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Laughter.
The howl of the wind filled Shi’s ears even as it lashed at his exposed skin. The sensation of vertigo that came with plunging through space was overwhelming, and the inevitability of the end weighed upon him in stark contrast to the freeing weightlessness of his descent.
Yet, it was in these moments before death that the Long had found joy, had felt the exhilarating fragility - the utter desperation - that came with clinging to life. His heart pounded and adrenaline flooded his body even as the Force leapt to his call, and his peal of mirth gave voice to his gratitude for Aabsdu. The man had unwittingly given Shi a reason to enjoy himself. Suddenly, the race was exciting for Shi, carrying the full weight of a traditional duel.
The dark side restored his vision and in an instant brought the details of the shaft into sharp relief. Stone formations, platforms and pulleys whizzed by, the cerulean glow below seeming to brighten in anticipation as it rushed to claim him. Shi spied a nearby chain flowing past him and reached for it, and felt a delicious wrenching in his shoulder as the links flew through his hand. His grip was sure, and his weight torqued the joint as he slowed his plunge to a pendulous stop. The Force continued to churn unabated through him, sending the sensation in his shoulder to a distant, far away place within him.
Smiling broadly, Shi looked skyward through the dark side’s lens at the irregular disc of light that was the outline of the shaft’s surface entrance. Aabsdu was more of an impression in the Force than a humanoid outline pressed against the wall, confidence and surety peppering the dark side as the Councilor negotiated the platforms, inexorably headed towards the finish. Shi’s gaze captured the tell-tale puffs of ground rock and pebble that blew from the walls moments before the emergence of a platform, and realized what had lent speed to Aabsdu’s ascent. The Master-At-Arms’ keen mind had sleuthed out that detail - minor to most of the combatants - which gave him the appearance of knowing beforehand where the next platform would appear. “Clever,” Shi rumbled, even as his eyes continued to scan furtively about. In the Warlord’s mind, the arena was his foremost concern, with Aabsdu being a secondary obstacle. It was better for his concentration, seeing as how he would not have the opportunity to deal with the Master as he’d normally prefer. Still, the Long realized that he’d need to eliminate any advantage the Councilor had - right after he’d made up some sorely needed ground.
Shi’s eyes spotted some pulleys a few meters below the Councilor’s position, then traveled down the length of the chain sprouting from them to his hand. He knew what he must do.
The Long deeply inhaled once, twice, then the still-ignited lightsaber in his free hand growled and flashed. The chain was neatly severed just below his body, the aged iron glowing orange-hot at the ends where Nenshogeru had effortlessly passed. The platform to which it was attached hung suspended for the briefest of moments, a compressed eternity before gravity asserted its grip and greedily snatched it towards the abyss. The counterweight followed the platform a second afterward, and as it fell, the still-attached chain began to spark as it rapidly slurped through the groaning pulley, yanking Shi upward with a lurch towards the rusted wheel-assemblage.
Shi had timed his release perfectly, allowing the violent whip-cracking of the action of the chain warping through the pulley to catapult him still higher. Wisps of gray and white smoke still trailed behind his singed hair, giving the Long the appearance of some grinning daemon, newly belched from the blue hell that was the crystalline pit. The Holocam Droid that zoomed in above him was not as lucky as the first one Shi’d encountered, as it was neatly clove in two by his ragged blade, exploding after he’d passed through the parted halves of the machine.
The din of the platform crashing far below, the clattering cacophony of the chain hurriedly passing through the pulley and the droid’s destruction diverted Aabsdu’s attention from his own climb. Shi noted the Master furtively seeking purchase within his skull once more. A difficult task for the Councilor, yes, but not impossible, barring distraction. The Long gave voice to his rage at the second intrusion, deactivating Nenshogeru and belting it while snatching his slugthrower from its well-worn holster with the speed of a seasoned gunslinger. He approached the terminus of his upwards arc, one that was taking him to a platform emerging from the wall perpendicular to the Councilor. He twisted mid-flight, arm outstretched, swinging the barrel towards the Master.
The man standing a dozen meters from him was of no consequence. The arena with its randomness was of no consequence. There was only his need - his singular desire - to win, at any cost. Aabsdu’s motivations were admirable, to be sure, but still - they were dependent on the approval of the Grand Master and his fellow Councilors.
The Dragon of Stone, however, was beholden to no one, and his defiant roar completed the demonic vision conjured by his earlier flight, the sound resounding loudly in both men’s ears thanks to the shaft’s acoustics. The man would not beat him. The arena would not beat him. His mind was set; his course, clear. He was as an engine of perpetual motion, the Force sustaining him even as it ravaged his body for strength. He would win. He must.
And as he jerked the trigger, any vestiges of doubt Shi might have held fled with the amusing realization that Aabsdu would find explaining his defeat to Pravus...cumbersome, at best.
BOOM!
The slugthrower rocked as Shi’s feet alit upon his platform. The Force, serving all but faithful to none, whispered salvation in the Master’s ear, causing him to draw his head back an instant before the slug fired from Shi’s weapon would’ve smashed through his temple. Instead, it impacted the wall, shattering the worn surface and making Aabsdu flinch reflexively as his face was struck by a smattering of debris. Shooting a murderous look at the Warlord, he was surprised to see that Shi’s returning glare did not reveal whether he’d missed on purpose or not.
BOOMBOOMBOOM!
His feet now fully set on a solid surface, Shi emptied the Enforcer, sending a stinging hive of buzzing metal Aabsdu’s way. Ready, the Councilor spread his arms, willing an aegis of unseen energy to envelop him. The slugs were halted and they plinked impotently at his feet. Shi discarded the slugthrower and bounded across the platforms, racing towards the corner where his wall met Aabsdu’s own. The Force, still raging through the Long, coalesced and rippled out of his palm - a palm that now slapped the wall holding the Councilor’s own perch. Shi’s will - though considerable - was nowhere near enough to bring the shaft tumbling down all around Aabsdu. It was enough, however, to dislodge the detritus that clogged the seams between the wall and the remaining platforms, and a fine, talcum-like cloud descended upon the Master, covering his robes in a dusting of powdered rock.
Shi did not trade barbs, did not wait to relish Aabsdu’s incredulous expression at realizing that his advantage was gone. Wheeling, the Long sped back towards the center of his wall and the platform upon he’d originally landed, only just dodging another torrent of lightning. Such prolonged use of the dark side would burn him out, and he would go willingly if it meant winning. Leaping upwards and diagonally, Shi clawed his way towards the growing light above them, scaling both platform and jutting rock formation alike. He sensed the Master a few meters behind, and to his right, but Aabsdu’s efforts would be too little, too late. Shi was too focused, stronger of body and more agile than the Councilor. The Force made those differences even more glaring, and the Long, registering the growing roar of the crowd above, sensed the end was near. His victory was all but assured.
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Overall, I liked this as a set-up post. You do a great job of transitioning into things, show us what it feels like to be down in the mines, and get us towards the spark that serves as the catalyst for the match.
Excellent use of Force Powers with Aabs using his Deflection skill to absorb the bolts, and Shi using it to get away.