Xantros raised his eyebrows and thought for a second, observing his opponent. Finally, he spoke, "As you wish. I will give you two minutes of break to rest and prepare yourself for one more lesson, before our duel ends."
The Duro patiently observed as Tisto meditated to regain mental and physical energy. He rested himself, as maintaining illusion and Force cloak was quite demanding and he was a bit tired too, despite his mastery in the Force. Suddenly, the Kiffar raised his right hand and shot from his Dur-24 wrist laser twice.
The shots were aimed to make Xantros unable to move by hitting his knees, but the Ranger, guided by the Force or by sheer luck, like other people might think about that, managed to create a barrier, which blocked both blaster shots. Unharmed, he spoke to the Knight, "We have various means to defend ourselves. Even pacifists like me, who do not agree to fight directly and to use any kind of weapon to harm other beings"
"Yes, I know. I can do that too," replied Tisto with a smile. "But I hoped that I would catch you unprepared. It seemed that I would eliminate you from the further fight."
"If you hit, you would," said the Duro. "Still, it seems that the Force is in my favour and I can avoid such attacks like this one from time to time, even if it seems to be extremely improbable."
"It is a good lesson for me," replied the Kiffar. "But there was something else you want to teach me, am I correct?"
Xantros nodded, but remained silent for few minutes, observing his opponent. Finally, the Knight started walking around the Ranger, as his patience clearly failed him and he seemed bored. The Duro smiled and moved his hand from left to right, while speaking, "Now, you shall tell any person that you will meet in the corridors of the Shadow Academy that you have agreed to become my slave."
"Now, I shall tell any person that I will meet in the corridors of the Shadow Academy that I have agreed to become your slave," replied Tisto with dull voice. He walked to the door of the sparring room and stopped as soon as it opened in front of him. He looked back with a grimace of anger on his face and asked, "What did you say? I will not do anything like that!"
Xantros smiled with satisfaction and explained, "As you can see, I do not have to harm anyone to make them obey my will. There are various ways to achieve one's goals and they do not have to involve any kind of violence. This is the last lesson, which I wanted to teach you today."
"I see, Ranger Xantros," replied the Kiffar. "I see your wisdom, though I am sure that there are still some secrets, which you hide from me."
"Certainly, there are. Despite the fact that you are already a Knight, you still have to learn much. Just like I do, though my knowledge about the Force and other matters may be a bit more vast than yours. However, today's lesson has concluded," spoke Xantros and bowed before his opponent.
Tisto bowed too and both Jedi left the sparring room of the Shadow Academy.
Syntax
The above sentence to me is unclear. What are you trying to say here?
No comma needed after paled in the above sentence.
Realism
Just a quick note here about the following:
There's no reason for the rollmaster to be nervous around the "strange" Kiffar. He's a seasoned character who's seen everything. Not sure that he'd be nervous, so be sure to consider your opponent's character sheet before making claims about their state of mind. ;) (Haven't penalized for this).
What I do need to penalize you for is the following since I looked at your sheet for some clues as to what you're referring to here when you state that your character is a scar in the Force.
And using the Force with your what? I'm left guessing and scratching my head in confusion. The fact of the matter is, your sheet (for this ACC match) does not include such an aspect.