As Rhace staggered upwards, his plan solidified in his head. It was real easy to get a good read on this kid; he was a straightforward kind of fighter in the sense that he had honour and purpose to the way he fought. Yes, strategy was clearly working for the Taldryanite, but he also knew that strategy came from data that had to be processed... and he wasn't processing certain data correctly, especially about the operative.
Perfect.
The blade gifted to Rhace by an old friend now whirled effortlessly over the Warden's left hand, admiring the craftsmanship of the weapon as he did so. To be fair, the spy was a better combatant with the sword than the Jedi, but nevertheless. "This is a beautiful sword," commented Aiden as he locked eyes with his opponent, trying to size him up and get a proper read on the moment - and the best time to strike. "Where did you come across such a beautiful artifact of the Dark Side?"
Rhace curled his lips up into a crooked smile, reaching over his shoulder for his beloved E-11b resting on its sling. His favoured weapon back in his hands, he felt he could control the fight. "Well, I am a representative of the Grand Master's Inquisitorius. You wouldn't know anything about the gifts a Chief Inquisitor receives, but I am bestowed certain benefits for my service."
Aiden shrugged. Well, the spy wasn't wrong. He didn't know. Those things were hidden secrets... and he had all the trappings to back up his statement, like that scanner riding on his hip that bore the mark of the Inquisitorius. There was only so much that he could do in the situation. Besides, you always knew never to question the truth of an Inquisitor's words, lest they take you down for secrecy.
"Enough talking, Arconan," Aiden finally said, leveling his lightsaber. The Sith sword fell to the floor with a loud clatter, discarded - the sword was an unnecessary addition to his arsenal when he controlled the bladed weapons. A lightsaber was more than enough match for a blaster rifle. "I'm bringing you in. Now."
"You're not even good enough to try, kid," Rhace shot back with a smirk on his lips - and then took his opening snap shot at Aiden's midsection, barely even taking the time to aim it. Not that he needed to at this point - it only served as a warning to his enemy that the fight was truly on in earnest. The Gray Jedi whirled his lightsaber over his hand, effortlessly deflecting the green blaster bolt into the floor and wondering why he'd even wasted his time pulling the trigger before he charged. Whatever. Aiden had the upper hand, with the guidance of the Force.
"Not bad. Catch me if you can!" Rhace called before he turned to run to the nearest set of tables. The plan was now in motion and so was he, aiming to push Aiden physically and mentally to the point of breaking. He had to confuse his enemy with what was, in theory, a series of straightforward actions. He was going to fake a high strategy of broken glass bottles and appear to be a fool, and then finish Aiden off. With a solid glare at where he was headed, the spy sprinted towards the tables - only to be met with the acrobatic form of the Knight vaulting through the air and landing on the table he intended to reach, lightsaber pointed down before Rhace could use it as cover. Damnit. Not ideal - best to come up with something on the fly.
Without breaking stride, Rhace slipped down and slid across the floor with his blaster raised, expecting to take a shot. Aiden readied his lightsaber, high enough to deflect the inevitable headshot that the stormtrooper was aiming for even as he moved. However, there wasn't a shot - the Shadesworn lowered his gun as he passed under the cantina table, sliding cleanly under it. As he did so, he kicked his legs upwards, rocking the table to force the Knight off-balance rather suddenly. The swaying of the wooden surface was enough to force Aiden off, the young man collapsing in a heap on the floor as the Arconan found himself in an equally awkward position with legs splayed all about. Nobody ever said combat was beautiful, after all.
Both men rolled with little time to get up - Rhace into sniper's prone, Aiden into a clean posture on his back with one hand outstretched in order to deploy the Force with ease to prevent the incoming shot off a shimmering facade. A pair of blaster bolts sang through the air, only for their existence to be revoked as they slammed into nothingness. A temporary shield erected hastily did not last, however, but it bought Aiden the time to stand that he needed. With his lightsaber cleanly in his hand he was already running towards the Commander, who was lining up for his next shot behind the protective cover of a table.
Aiden knew he could finish this. There was no bladed weapon that this man could employ even in remotely close reach that would stop a lightsaber; all he had to do was get inside effective range of the blaster, blow him away with his telekinetic prowess as a distraction, then slice him to ribbons. Let him get settled for just a moment before he could strike - the Force would give him the predictive capacity to time his evasive strike - and take him out with telekinesis in the right moment. Knock him down again and again before he could line up and finish him quickly.
Rhace exhaled. Time to let go. Time to expand his consciousness, apply everything he learned in sniper school and be one with his blaster. One with his weapon. The medley of cacophonous destruction sang in his ears for the thousandth time in his career. One finger brushed from the finger guard down to the trigger, caressing cold steel slowly.
The whisper in the back of his mind told him that he was about to come under fire. Now was the time.
The moment Aiden began reaching down to unleash the Force at him, reaching down to telekinetically knock both table and shooter away in a powerful wave, Rhace identified his chance that he'd been waiting for - the finger coiling on the trigger was all for show. Enough grip on the weapon to throw it as an impromptu strike efficiently, the blaster rifle careened towards the Knight - and so did the trooper a moment later, planting his hands on the edge of the table and vaulting it rapidly. With athletic training to navigate obstacles like this, it wasn't difficult for him to do it.
It had all been a lie. Constantly take time to set up shots, and then mess with Aiden's head at the last possible moment - he didn't take surprises well. The Knight's eyes widened at the show of bravado, surprised. How and why did a sniper pull something like this off? This wasn't in the plan.
That instant of surprise was enough for Rhace to perform a single fluid motion at the peak of his efficiency while Aiden was half-coiled towards the ground - draw his sidearm and thumb the setting switch in a single attack. A trio of stun blasts echoed forward as the Arconan rocketed through the air towards Aiden with a triple-tap on his trusty blaster weapon, body skewed every which way. Aiden tried to raise his saber, but it was futile; not fast enough at very short range, caught off-guard.
Rhace landed in a heap at Aiden's side, having used up all of his energy in the heat of the moment. It was unfortunate that the Taldryan agent had to come up against him here, because there he was on the ground unconscious, collapsing under the neural overload of three shots at stun setting. Scrub the mission and go home, the spy knew. That was just one of their guys and he didn't really have the energy to handle all of this all over again. First, back to his ship to find a medkit, then back to Selen to report his findings to the Shadow Lady. Picking himself up, he reclaimed his sword and rifle from the ground as a good agent would - leaving only a few dozen witnesses, of course.
Good kid, that one. If he sharpened his senses a little, he'd be even better.
Story and Continuity - Good use of the storyline here. Blends seamlessly into the prompt. Well done.
Syntax - I'm not sure this sentence works here. I get what you're trying to achieve with it, but it detracted from the story as I had to re-read.
Realism - I'm not sure that this is in-keeping with Aiden's "Easy Going 'Till The Fight Starts" personality trait. It's very difficult to write another character and capture the nuances of their character sheet, so this is an easy mistake to make, but always pay attention to the traits, as these are the core principles that make up the character's personality, combat personal and general being.
Syntax and Story - Syntax-wise, its very minor in that you used the term 'saber'. I suppose this is a stylistic comment, but possibly something to look at next time around. Story-wise, I'm not quite sure that the patrons would have witnessed four lightsaber duels in a week. I know it's an arena in the ACC, and I get that this was the link you were highlighting, but from a storytelling perspective, lightsaber battles aren't all that common in the Star Wars universe. Most don't even know of the Force.
Syntax - Repetition of the word 'sword' and sentences that were a little too long.
Syntax - This sentence seemed surplus to requirements. It detracted from the preceding paragraph and a very good story.
Realism - This is a very good example of adherence to Aiden's Character Sheet and, more specifically, his Makashi style. Well done!
Syntax - This is maybe a little verbose and could be shortened.
Syntax - I think that the use of a comma where you have used the ellipsis would have been sufficient. If you need further guidance on using the ellipsis, please refer to the ellipsis section of the syntax, grammar and spelling section of the ACC guide.
Finally, Story. You mention at the end of your penultimate paragraph:
And in the final paragraph you mention:
These are conflicting aspects of the story. If he wanted it to end quickly given his head wound, would Rhace not use the blaster? This was not particularly clear and detracted from the ending of what was a very, very good post.
Overall
Notwithstanding the above, I think this was a very good, very well-deployed post. Your continuity is solid and the story, with only a few extremely minor hiccups, is well-paced. Very engaging and very entertaining to read. Well done.