The crowd roared in anger at the grenade exploding within the seating dais. The cries of anger soon turned to excitement as they realised what had happened. No more tricks, no more traps waiting to ensnare the two Jedi. Now they could see the two men fight properly.
Sanguinius stood strong, his blade raised in defence. He knew from experience just how powerful Halcyon was, yet the Warden refused to take one step back. Too long had he faltered in the darkness, running from responsibility. Sanguinius swallowed as Halcyon twirled his lightsaber and launched himself forward. The two blades clashed, viridian against silver.
Both men were tired, their exertions in the arena had drained their strength. Halcyon snarled in anger, drawing upon his rage to fuel his strikes. Sanguinius parried each blow, his skill showing through his fatigue. The Sentinel grimaced as beads of sweat gathered at his brow. Visions of past battles flashed through his mind, Sanguinius’ subconscious determined to make him flee. Each time the off-white blade clashed against his own, another past battle was remembered. Fear began to blossom within the Defender, taking hold of his actions.
Halcyon grinned as he sensed Sanguinius’ disquiet. His assault continued, driving the Entar back across the sandy floor.
Bets continued to be made as the touts shouted out the new odds on the two men. “Three to One on the green guy!” announced one of them, “Seven to Two on the Jedi!” Several spectators took advantage of the change in odds, wagering new amounts on the combatants.
Locke sat quietly, his gaze never wavering from the pair moving across the arena floor. The Consul had nominated the Jedi for this tournament after requesting candidates from Naga Sadow. He pursed his lips in minor annoyance at the turn of events, unwilling to see the Clan’s champion defeated.
Beside the Augur sat his Proconsul, the Zabrak watched with expressive anger. “Stop running away from the di’kut!” Cethgus snarled, his displeasure with his former student evident. The potential loss weighed on him also, both for his personal honour and his adoptive Clan’s honour.
“Calm yourself, Cethgus.” Locke raised his hand towards the Zabrak, “I trust him to win.”
Sanguinius stepped backwards, ducking beneath a vicious swipe of the off-white blade. The Warden was breathing heavily, his chest heaving. Halcyon fared little better despite his assault; he wasn’t built for extended periods of heavy combat.
The Warden gritted his teeth as he rose back up, his viridian blade held horizontally to deflect a strike. He drew upon the mantra that had given him strength in the darkness after losing so many people under his command.
“Emotion, yet Peace.” Calm flowed through him, centring the Warden.
“Ignorance, yet Knowledge.” The visions of past battles ceased, allowing Sanguinius to refocus upon the present.
“Passion, yet Serenity.” Sanguinius watched with dispassion as Halcyon disengaged from the saber lock and outstretched his hand. Lightning erupted from the finger tips, driving across the empty expanse towards the Sentinel.
“Chaos, yet Harmony.” The viridian blade outstretched, consuming the electricity. Sanguinius frowned, the beads of sweat getting into his eyes. Both of his hands were on the hilt, the determination to win filled his being. The Entar had come too far during his time in the Brotherhood to give up now.
Halcyon roared in anger and redoubled his efforts, his other hand coming up to unleash more lightning, the sickly light infused with the dark side.
“Death, yet the Force.” Sanguinius chanted, drawing upon the last vestiges of his power, a field of light emanated from the Jedi, covering the area around the two Jedi and slowly overcoming the darkness within Halcyon.
The lightning streams faltered and died as the Prophet’s connection with the Force ceased. The suffocating effect of the light affected Halcyon greatly, the Sorcerer had played nice with the Sadowan, had refused to use his full power in their engagement out of respect for the Warden. Now, that was over. Sanguinius smiled as Halcyon ignited his lightsaber once again. “You cannot win.”
“You underestimate me, Sadowan.” The Prophet advanced, his lightsaber licking out only to be deflected. Halcyon felt a faint spark of the darkness as he attacked; his quick mind made the connection that Sanguinius could only maintain the nullifying effect at great cost to his concentration.
The Sentinel noticed the unconscious smile of his opponent and figured that the Sorcerer had already found out his weakness. The viridian blade darted out in attack for once, before being joined by a second green blade. Sanguinius had only just begun to train in the art of dual-wielding his lightsabers and was still inexperienced, yet the opportunity to defeat Halcyon was too much to give up.
Each attack lessened the nullifying field, Halcyon fended off the clumsy blows, the experienced Elder easily reading the telegraphed strikes. The Son of Taldrya deflected a side-swipe and lashed out to catch the Jedi’s hand. Sanguinius cried out quickly, the off-white blade searing his flesh. The lightsaber fell to the ground, sending dust into the air.
Sanguinius fell backwards, instantly on the defensive. Halcyon breathed easily again as the suffocating light dissipated. The darkness swirled around him, drawn to him like a moth to a flame. He smiled, the grin of a predator playing with its food. Lightning once again erupted from the Prophet, impacting upon the Warden’s body. Agony splayed through Sangunius’ body, wracking him with the dark side.
Screaming, so much screaming. Sanguinius fell to the ground, lightning splaying across his body. His body jerked as synapses fired randomly. Halcyon chuckled as he continued to pour energy into the Jedi.
Enough.
The unspoken command echoed in everyone’s mind, spectator and combatant alike. Halcyon sneered and carried on pouring lightning into the screaming Entar.
“I said enough.”
Halcyon turned to find Pravus standing behind him. “I do not allow dissent, Halcyon.” The Grand Master glowered at the Elder. “Leave, now.”
The Sorcerer grunted in acknowledgement and turned to trudge off the sandy killing ground as medics rushed in to deal with the grievously injured Sanguinius.
Pravus watched the Prophet leave, he would have to watch Taldryan, the Grand Master would not make the mistakes of his predecessors.
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Elder* -- referring to the rank class would be capitalized. Nice use of Sangs Suppression though.
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I like your intro as you bring us into how Halc perceives the arena for the first time, and touch on his "I've Seen Everything" Aspect.
I think that while your description of Halc's side of the battle was great, it kind of feels like you shoehorned Sang by having anything that happened to him happen "off-screen". I don't really know what he was doing the whole time other than "dealing with obstacles" .